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jidbrony


Just a man trying to make the Ultimate Who story along with his pals. Feel free to PM me if you wanna say hi.

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* This Story has been rebooted

Sunset Shimmer is a school bully in the making, The Doctor is a intergalactic hero, clearly these two couldn't become companions right? Right?

Co-Writer: Doc Grant, Disavowed Ash

Chapters (9)
Comments ( 42 )

I liked the OG one, but interested to see where this goes. Plz don't let it die.

Rose, Sarah, Luna, Tegan, Ditzy….Susan…. he thought. Rose would not want him to die now, nor Sarah Jane, Luna, Tegan, Ditzy, or even his beloved Granddaughter. They wanted him to have a longer lifespan than merely in eternal memory. There would be far too many who would have delighted at his death - enemies, power mad conspirators, -basically, anyone who stood against decency, kindness and love.

Luna, Ditzy? As in the mlp characters? And granddaughter?

“And still not ginger!”

Ha, course not Doc. Good start.

“No, not Dickens! He signed that!” He pleaded as he saw the ancient and priceless pages fly out. Oh well, he could always go back in time and buy the first editions later. Still, it was irritating: “Blasted thing, change of appearance, and already the old girl has a fit!”

Course he got them autographed by the real Dickens.

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That's right, and the granddaughter in question is Susan.

This series is loosely adapted from the canon established in the first two decades of Classic Who, the RTD years, the Doctor Who Magazine comics, the Eighth Doctor Adventures, and the Big Finish audio plays, with some room for deviating in a variety of areas.

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Pretty much only thing not canon is the Moffat era and that's because we rebooted it.

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Well, we did insert new ideas here and there in the Classic Who era for example, hence Luna. Probably mostly changes in the John Wiles, Peter Bryant, Graham Williams, and JNT eras, so no canon that was really that sacred. And there are some things from the Virgin New Adventures I might want to alter, but not so much with the Chad Eighth Doctor Adventures (geddit? The Virgin New Adventures vs. the Chad Eighth Doctor adventures...okay, I'll show myself out now). I'd like to touch on the details one by one as I keep writing in this!

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That's what it makes fun pulling from EVERYTHING and with Doctor Who there is a good way to make it canon...if Lee Adams Dalek seires can pull from Big Finish and the 70's comics of Dalek lore...So can we!

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Don't know much but that, but sounds fun.

“God dammit! How come you get to be ginger?!”

Loved this.

we are terminate you at once!”

“Those eggs were life!”

“I’m life!” Sunset retorted.

Brilliant. Absolute quality content.

The Doctor having his previous incarnations talk to him in his head? Can't say I've seen that before...

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Yes and no. There were hints that this occasionally happens to the Twelfth Doctor, and the Seventh did something like this in the Virgin New Adventures.

But it's not like that this time. This time, this is the Tenth Doctor who's not been fully suppressed yet and is trying desparately to break through to his new, still incomplete, incarnation.

I wanted to let the Tenth have a proper farewell and also create a bit of conflict revolving around the Eleventh Doctor's regeneration, while also kind of a meta thing, addressing the readers who might still have their reservations of the ideas from the Moffat era.

As he said, a giant tentacle monster was standing right in front of her, it’s skin was green and it had ten eyes, each a different color but all of them glaring right back at her. She had heard of many tales of horrible creatures and myths back home yet nothing like this would even enter her most horrid nightmares. Very quickly the beast opened its mouth revealing several layers of teeth as it roared a loud screeching roar right back at them.

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Eh sure will go with that

Victory! This story is just plain great.

So question about a previous chapter: I'm assuming when the Doctor was listing Luna and Derpy/Ditzy in his list of previous companions, I'm assuming he meant the EQG Luna and Derpy/Ditzy?

In Paris for instance, there had been sights of strange costumed freaks running around. In the state of Oregan there had been reports of things that could only be described with one word: Weird, one paper came from the Equin nebula; apparently tensions had risen between the two major powers of the time period.

I think the first is referencing Miraculous Ladybug, and the second is undoubtedly centered in a little town called Gravity Falls. No idea on the third.

“I don’t care if I’m the only non-human who likes this song.” He declared getting excited. “Hopefully one day I’ll find someone who enjoys these show tunes like me, I mean they are number one for a reason. Well except for that one boy band that was cloned in a factory, had to put a stop to that-that’s pretty much slavery, at least clone slavery.”

Freaking...! How many references are you going to fit into these chapters?! I can't even cry bullshit, as the TARDIS is capable of traveling through not just time and space, but entire timelines and realities!

Soarin’ tried his best to put himself together: “I wish...I just wish...I could forget about it! Forget all of it! I’m going to live with the memory of me abandoning them for the rest of my life!”

“Actually,” Jay began, pulling out a silver rod with a red light, “you won’t.”

You. . . . .! AAAAAAAAAAAAAGGGGGGGGGGGGHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Please calm down on the references. Please. For the sake of my heart not bursting from sheer excitement.

Now if only I can my Jizz record signed I’d be a complete man of music.”

I think you meant 'jazz'? Other than that, great chapter.
Especially the singing.

...I was not expecting to kick the adventures off with Dracula. Hope Sunset brought her chain whip!

That was a plan so cunning you could put a tail on it and call it a weasel.

I'm torn between dread at the obviously threatening opening of this story and mad giggling at the return of the Black Adder.

This particular “Doctor” was also witnessed near a Freddie Fazbear’s Pizza roughly around the same time a horrifying incident happened there,

...Not sure how to take this reference...

...So this first story is being told in the form of a journal left by Sunset?

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Not just one journal....many journals...but yeah more or less.

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The thing that I didn't care much for during the Eleventh's initial run was that much of the time, the scares were game-based rules (like "remember" or "don't blink"), rather than something more uncanny. I wanted to write a more Classic Who-styled story, and the Philip Hinchcliffe era, a favorite of mine, sometimes lifted a lot from existing horror stories. Because Dracula is public domain, a classic tale, and because I wanted to reserve my more original ideas for books I intend to write, I picked Dracula. More importantly, Dracula is a story about a vampiric aristocracy, which aligns well with what we were going for with Sunset Shimmer, and thus Dracula seemed to be a great fit to kick off for a scary start.

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Black Adder! Black Adder!
With many a cunning plan!
Black Adder! Black Adder!
You Horrid Little Man!!

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In Bram Stoker's work, Dracula was largely written in the form of letters and journal entries from the perspectives of the various characters in the novel. To be faithful to his work, I chose to do the same.

well, now i know for a fact Sunset would LOVE Once Upon a Time

I loved the ending! Nice Men In Black appearance. :pinkiehappy:

I rather enjoyed this story, surprised it has been a year since I last read it.

Hope you decide to continue and update it sometime.

Found myself rereading this story again, and I didn't even realize it until I saw I was the most recent comment. Lol

Any plans on continuing the story?

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the doctor has a granddaughter. she appears in the first episode of the original series.

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When do you plan on continuing this

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