Chapter Three - The Attack
After leaving Rarity and Rainbow in the crystal dome, the others turned and headed back to the figure. She had decided to tend to destroying the city and terrorizing citizens rather than attack them some more. But when she heard running, she whipped her head around to see her enemies.
"You!!" she yelled, venom dripping from her every word. "Why did you come back?! You're not welcome here!!"
Applejack stepped up. "No, yer the one who ain't welcome, Citrus!! Come down and we can end this all friendly-like, ya hear? C'mon, come down now, hon."
"Alright then. If you want to settle this now, fine." She smiled maliciously. "If the fastest of you was that easy to take out, how hard could the rest of you be?" With that, she summoned a glowing ball of magic and aimed her hands at the farm girl's face.
"No!!" Fluttershy cried. At her plea, a small flock of birds flew to Citrus and starting pecking her face. When she fired, AJ was prepared for it, and was able to dodge the attack.
"Whew. Thanks fer that, sugarcube." Applejack said gratefully. "That could've been ugly."
Fluttershy smiled and said, "You have Tether and his family to thank, not me." She gestured towards the crow sitting on her shoulder. There were more crows sitting on the trees behind them. Each one had helped save the honest girl.
As blasts of fire showered all over the grounds, the girls began using their own magic to attempt to stop Citrus. Applejack used her super strength to hurtle things at Crystal, trying to hit her or, at the very least, distract her. Twilight also threw things with her telekinetic powers. Fluttershy and her animals stayed on the defensive end, delaying attacks and throwing off aim. Pinkie chucked sprinkle bombs at Citrus, trying to knock her down. And Sunset... well... she just tried to keep her and her friends safe, as her power was quite hard to use against a villain like this.
"Well," Crystal huffed. "If THAT'S how you want to play, then it's time I finished what I started!!" She redirected her shots towards the crystal dome. Remembering when Rarity's forcefield protected them from the thorns at Camp Everfree, the girls knew the fashionista couldn't hold up her jewels forever. They had to stop Citrus before Rarity and Dash got hurt.
The friends saw Rarity near the face of the dome, pressed up against it, her face twisted in pain. She was obviously pushing herself to her very limit just to save Dash. The girls knew that if they didn't stop Crystal, and soon, it wouldn't be pretty for either friend.
Fluttershy, in a rare show of bravery, unfurled her wings and took to the skies, more silent than a butterfly. She crept up behind the villain as she fired yet another blast upon the shield. Though her friends may have missed it, Fluttershy, from her vantage point in the sky, could see a crack spider across the dome. If those crystals were already cracking, they had to stop her NOW.
The shy girl waited until after the blast, and struck. She slammed herself into Citrus's back, sending them both spiraling down to the ground below, faster than the speed of light.
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It's very great for your first story :)
*reads description*
*reads story*
I think I read the wrong thing.
Someone's about to get their butt whupped.
9578937 It's just the first 3 chapters, hun.
Give it, and the author, time and I'm sure we'll be getting to the nitty-gritty of the story soon.
9578731 Very much agree!
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Thank you. I am often think I'm never enough, so positive comments are extremely appreciated.
Though don't stop giving constructive criticism
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Trust me, you read that right. This is just the beginning. Why else did I purposely make sure it was Rainbow Dash who was injured?
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Thankies!
9584613 You're very welcome, my friend.
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😸
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9586224 Keep up the great work, okay?
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You got it! The next chapter will be out as soon as possible. In between sports and school, it's a little hard, but it's almost ready, I promise!!
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And that's good to know.
Just remember to tend to your school and other stuff first, and that's good to know.
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😉
9588708 Hee.
Im just now finding this story and it's super good! I can't wait for more!
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More is coming, I promise. Chapter Four just needs final touches and overview. Should be up by this weekend. Though, with my life, it'll likely be up in three weeks😹
It'll come soon.🙃
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Oh, and thanks for your support 😊
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Of course! And don’t rush yourself! I know I said I couldn’t wait but I’ll be fine waiting longer
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🐱Should be done within a week. Thanks for your patience
Guys, I have a unfortunate message.
Due to sudden schedule change, I was unable to stick to my promise of the when the story's next chapter would be out. It has taken me longer to write this one, as ideas have been a little sparse. But it's coming.
Because of this, I have decided to not promise any more release dates. You'll just have to be a little patient 😉.
I'm sorry to get your hopes up only to drag them down. I hope you understand.
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Don't worry, I'll write more. Once school lets out, the chapters should be coming real fast!! No promises, but I should have the next one out within a week. Maybe. I don't know, I'm lazy.
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Thanks so much for your support, too. It means a lot.
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yessss this story is so goodddd omc