Awesome job and I think it's absolutely adorable

right let me start by saying lovaly story not meany storys can make me cry with happienes and joy but this story did it amazing work and i must say i personely thourt i sould have gone on a bit longer but thats just me wishfull thinking like i always do with stories i love i tolk me just over a week to read all 3 in this set and i dont reget any of that time i even had a fue sleeples nights becouse i could not stop reading i wanted to stop but my head wanted to know what hapened next so ye a lovealy storie grate work now just got to look throu your other stories and see if i can finde an other that can get just as hooked keep up the grate work

Don’t mess around with the Mane 6, Mom 6, Dad 6, the CMC, Spitfire, Soarin, Fleetfoot, Misty Fly, Thunderlane, The Wonderbolts, or anypony else in this large family if you seek to expose them. They’ll be on you like a diaper on a foal.

I wonder how the rest of the “Family” (All the others who were in attendance at the play date) took Dash’s injuries, before and after Wind Rider got to her. I can’t imagine they took it very well. I sure wouldn’t.

why is this story rated M

Hi dear author,
I am an ABDL fan of brony in China. I would like to translate it and post the translation on Chinese MLP fan fiction website https://tieba.baidu.com/f?kw=%E6%88%91%E7%9A%84%E5%B0%8F%E9%A9%AC%E9%A9%B9%E5%B0%BF%E5%B8%83%E6%98%AF%E9%AD%94%E6%B3%95&ie=utf-8. I promise I'll post the link to this page on it and declare that this is a translation work and you are the original writer. I will appreciate it if you can give me the chance!