It's Spitfire's birthday and Soarin decides to take on the role of leader for a day while he has Rainbow Dash distract Spitfire with a test of skills between the two before the big surprise. Soarin, Fleetfoot, and the other wonderbolts must pull everything together before Spitfire returns, but can Rainbow Dash keep her away long enough?
Contest entry for Mana's Wonderful Wonderbolts Writing Contest
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Chapters (3)
I think this was a fun read. My favorite chapter would have to be chapter 2.
I like where this is going so far. I could easily see this as something that would actually be canon.
You made an amateur mistake, Rainbow Dash. Slow and steady wins the race.
Um, I think carrot dogs and hay burgers would make more sense than hot dogs and hamburgers.
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Thanks for the suggestion. I fixed it.
Really nice to see High Winds getting a good share of the spotlight, she's so often overlooked
agreed, though...you may not want me to agree
Pies...I kinda understand Soarin
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yup