In a world without friendship and magic, a young unicorn must learn how to survive and adapt to the changes around her, without changing who she is.
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Nurse Redheart's name is one word. Also, she would be a filly, not a mare. You want to keep your chapter names consistent too. This should have "Chapter 1:" somewhere in there.
You need to hit the enter key there.
Remember to hit the space key after the ellipses.
The spacing is awkward here.
That should be a comma ending your sentence, not a period.
"Baby filly pegasus" is redundant. She just needs to be called a filly.