One More Day

MThe Mom 6
MLP: FiM
Drama
Slice of Life
When Twilight and her friends are taken when their mothers come to visit, it's up to their Moms to save them.
Celestia
Main 6
Windy Whistles
Bow Hothoof
Pear Butter
FabulousDivaRarity · 33k words · 79 25 · 2.4k views

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doomie-22

doomie-22 #1 · Oct 10th, 2018 · 2 · ·

Dedicated to the loving memory of Scribe-Feather, a fantastic writer, a great friend, and a fellow fimfiction writer.

Wait, what's the story with Scribe-Feather?

Krimble

Krimble #2 · Oct 10th, 2018 · · ·

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I've been told the poor guy killed himself.

thatguywhoiscool

thatguywhoiscool #3 · Oct 10th, 2018 · · ·

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He said he would commit suicide on his Furrafinity account a while ago. After this much time, I'd assume he sadly went through with it.

Diokno44

Diokno44 #4 · Oct 10th, 2018 · 3 · ·

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Well, I hope that isn't true

doomie-22

doomie-22 #5 · Oct 10th, 2018 · 1 · ·

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WHAT!?

9222860 We can only hope.

SuperPinkBrony12

SuperPinkBrony12 #6 · Oct 10th, 2018 · 1 · ·

Not bad, I liked it.

Yosh-E-O

Yosh-E-O #7 · Oct 11th, 2018 · 2 · ·

This was a very sweet story. It certainly goes with all one could imagine having the freedoms of being a foal back. Plus, with Dash, it really adds effect for how she is the roughest and toughest but, deep down, the one who just craves the attention to ensure she is never alone nor unappreciated.

The aspect of Dashie's nightmare was definitely, for me, a spot on way to make sense of how RD would get into such a thing with her parents. Her fear of being abandoned / alone may have always been there but she did very well in keeping it to herself. Being back home allowed her to remember why she values all the love and attention her parents and friends give. She definitely couldn't be Dash without people to Dash for.

Great job!

FabulousDivaRarity

FabulousDivaRarity #8 · Oct 11th, 2018 · 1 · ·

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Thank you so much for your kind words! This story was really personal to me, and writing it was so fun! Reviews like these are what keep me writing! I wrote a post on my blog explaining a little bit about the story, if you’re interested in reading that. Thank you so much for your support! I appreciate you!

JordanOlson

JordanOlson #9 · Oct 11th, 2018 · 4 · ·

This is such a great story!
I know that scribe woulda loved this as much as I do, maybe even more!

doomie-22

doomie-22 #10 · Oct 11th, 2018 · 4 · ·

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Her fear of being abandoned / alone may have always been there but she did very well in keeping it to herself.

Oh, most definitely. We see evidence of that in the show itself, like in episodes such as "Sonic Rainboom", "Mysterious Mare Do Well", "Testing, Testing, 1, 2, 3", "The Return of Harmony", among others. Dashie's biggest fear seems to be either being seen as a failure and thus being abandoned by all those she loves and cares about, or letting doen those same ponies that she loves and cares about. It really makes you see that, for all of ehr bravado, she really does have a vulnerable side, and it's always a treat when we get to see that vulnerable side in the show, like when she admitted to being scared as a filly in "Sleepless in Ponyville" (even if she still puts on a brave face) or when she admitted being wrong in episodes like "Read It and Weep" and "Parental Glideance." It's for not being afraid of showing her vilnerable side why Rainbow Dash is one of my favorite characters in the show.

MorningRose