Hi my Name is Martin ... At least it was.
I have no idea what happened one day I was doing my job, coming home getting drunk.
And the next day I wake up a chick called Berry... Who calls their daughter Berry?
Part of the Canterlot adventure universe:
https://www.fimfiction.net/group/214042/canterlot-adventures
I am eager to see where this goes, If wish to interact with Tempest Shadow in this verse contact me
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Will do ^^
ScarletRhine's OC is Rainbow Rose, cousin of Rainbow Dash. she;s been missing meals because she wants to try out for the track and field team. I think the gym coach can help her?
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Yup. See Tempest for details.
To top it all off, the skin color alter from normal to a dark pink hue.
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You're rushing the transformation. I suggest to take a sip of that specific wine could cause a transformation. If even you drink a tab of that wine, the transformation triggers a slow and painful change.
And also, does it spelled tab or tap? I don't understand the grammar.
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tbh I often struggle with the english grammar ^^'
if you spot something I did wrong please pm it to me so I can fix it. and also try to learn from it.
English is not my first language and I'm quiet aware that I often make silly mistakes.
my actual Idea is that the bottle is the trigger of the transformation and the less wine is in the bottle the faster the transformation is going to proceed
I'm also not entirely happy with the chapter maybe going to revisit it at a later point in time
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we need to find a proofreader.
i use google docs for all my stories.