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Phoenix Wright, A young defence attorney, is given the task to defend Sunset Shimmer, a young girl accused of the crime of Cyber-Bullying. Will Sunset be punished for something she didn't do or will the truth come out in the court of law?
A Phoenix Wright and Anon-a-miss crossover.
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This is one of the best, and most original, stories I've ever seen come out of the Anon-a-Miss setting. You have earned a follow and a favourite.
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Thank you
Loved it, though I was hoping that the Human 6 would let the CMC join them since that was the whole purpose of Anon-A-Miss and there was nothing in the fic about them being arrested for it
Probably switch the romance tag for a comedy tag. It was kinda funny to read this.
Meh, it was alright
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It was supposed to be the random tag. I misclicked.
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The fic was just about the trial as that was the only interaction Phoenix would have with them. I suppose I could have written a small introduction, but I had like 3 hours to write it and I wanted it to focus on the trial.
It's certainly an interesting idea, it would be cool to see this expanded into a full-blown Phoenix Wright case.
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I see
Ugh I guess its my own sense of morals but I hate when people have sunset forgive them. But I guess I was just raised to only give one chance.
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If it were my guess, people feel that way because the main 5 backstabbed Sunset, not even giving her a chance to explain. Fine when you're 5 years old, but you should know better when you're 15 or 16. It's not about giving a person a single chance, otherwise, you could say the same thing about the end of the first EQG movie. It's about the betrayal that happens.
I liked it, but it felt a decent bit rushed. Maybe that's just the Phoenix Wright fan in me, but that trial went far to smoothly for Phoenix. He never gets a case that easy.
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Yeah, I had to skip the investigation bit that normally goes on, and I couldn't really come up with more evidence to make the trial longer.
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It's fine. I would've done the same
9300431
Very true.
I don't forgive your girls. Nor will I ever forgive.
9300579
Amen, brother.
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*holds a noose in one hand*
Hang then UP!
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Amen I say to you.
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*hangs them up; aims rocket launcher at them*They're comin right for us!*fires rocket, killing the girls*
I didn;t care for it, too fast and honestly too boring and the ending...meh.
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Fair enough
ok I'm sorry but this was rushed. The beginning was good but halfway...it was too rushed. This need a rewrite.
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I agree, but I have other stories I want to work on, so I won't rewrite it for a while if ever. The problem I had was coming up with evidence that wasn't too obvious, like a list of devices that accessed the account which would show Sunset's innocence immediately.
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SO why didn't you use the fact that while looking at the hone's IP address, it it has one, to see that It only had two accesses to the account while all the other times it was accessed elsewhere...one seperate accounts.
9569091
Cool
Wow this is like a real life court but in a story
Slight criticism: The speech doesn't really feel natural
my only disapointment was that the CMC didn't have over blown freak outs as they were proven guilty, also that Scootalo so casually handed over her phone when she should know that it would open right into the account and prove them guilty.
out side of those two issues tho i really liked it. maybe wish it was longer. give phoenix more time to interview sunset and gather evidence like in the games. still for what we got it was a nice short litle story.
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Plus considering they were ready to throw the book at sunset how come the cmc don't get anything.?
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OBJECTION!!!!!!!!
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Dont worry Sunset.
we got your back
Too fast, too weird. No build up, they cracked way too quick. Also, I saw no thoughts leading to the given logic.
"I saw Sunset's face, she was deperate to prove to anyone that she is not guilty. So, if Sunset wasn't Anon, who was? From little time that I studied for the case I didn't see any possibility for anyone but Rarity to manipulate, and even then I doubt Rarity would spread secrets about herself and the rest of her friends. Can we check fingerprints on Sunset's phone? It was one of the CMC? Can we call them as witnesses? So, Why didn't you picture Sunset entering the account? Can we see your phones? There is your proof."
At LEAST this logic. At MINIMUM. Written for longer of course.
You know
I asked elements of justice's team if we can At least mention sunset IN SOME WAY but they said no
However this will do!