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Before I read I just want to point out a major plot deficiency. They are not carefree at all.
Applejack: Has to buck Apples on the farm and do chores all the time
Rainbow Dash: Has to clear the clouds and do the weather.
Fluttershy: Has to care for her multitude of animals
Twilight: Has to keep up on her studies and write to princess Celestia on her findings.
Pinkie could be the one who is the most Carefree, since all she has to do is work at Sugar Cube Corner and make swwets. Not to mention baby-sit the twins.
Secondly im pretty sure her friends wouldn't ignore her or do any of these things the story sais they are. It all seems so...unreal, unbelievable.
I loved it so much i had to downvote!!!! :D
I'm not going to upvote this or downvote it, I now hate rarity to her soulless core, why would you Do something that horrible to Dash and now I'm not sure I'll be able to use Spitfire and Dash together now...
Thanks
I second Vinyl Shy's opinion. I can see Rarity setting her friends up on dates, but rape? Is it just that you needed a darker tone or what? The fact that they all would be ignorant of her is unbelievable, as Rarity has displayed disrespect to her friends and not the other way around. It seemed well written, but you started an awful lot of sentences with but. It's just a general rule not to start with but. I'd suggest toning the story way down.
I feel as if you're trying to romanticize rape for some odd reason. Did you write this as a troll fic?
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I third their options. This story doesn't sound real and is so OOC, it is not funny, but you do have me intergied.
1008507 The opinions have been quadrupled!
It seemed like RD was hit the hardest.
Gangbanged...AND she's gay...in a shower room...by her own heroes.
"stallion's... filly-filler" LMAO
1008507 It's a Clopfic. Are you gonna read it or not?
What's with the dislikes?
I'm liking it alot so far 
I was expecting her to kick the face of BM, after all... He RAPED HER... Even Fluttershy is badass when she want (like in Putting Your Hoof Down)
Mixed emotions, i feel bad for Fluttershy, and Rarity is a bitch in this story, i mean, making a stallion rape your PFF is something horrible, but well, i will read the next 6 chapters
(Sorry for the bad english, it isn't my native language)
1008810 got that right.
I dont know what the dislikes are about I find this to be a good, well written story! The clop itself is always vague though it needs a bit more .... physical detail. Otherwise its great!
What the fuck is a McIntosh? I know who Big Macintosh is, but who's this guy?
I share Big Mac's thoughts...What the hell just happened!
I was looking forword to this one...I wanted to see the reactions....
I was listening to Want It Need It (Orchastral Rock Cover)..I don't know why ,but It fits the chapter...
I find it hard to believe Pinkie was a virgin.
I still don't get what the hell the guards were doing there.
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Ikr?
Emerald Flight hit the nail right on the head. What are you doing! This idea... This fic... It's wrong and I hate it but it's the most emotional story I've read in a very long time. And it was virtually flawless, too. I don't know what to say, other than you're a very, very good writer.
My heart is absolutely broken... My poor poor Dash... How could you treat her like this? D:
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I wonder as well
HA HA HA! It's funny, right!? Because Rarity hates mules, and she's about to be raped by one! AHAHAHAHAHA-fuck you.
I like rapefics but not lesbian stuff and this happening to dash my fav pony this is the worst one in this fic and this is my reactions
what happend to her is horrible. But props for rest of story!!!!!!!!
Edit: Twi is now fav pony. 7.28.2013
There should be an extra chapter in which they all beat the crap out of Rarity and then get people to put her through what they went through. That's not morbid, right?
i hope this is the only chapter OOC Rarity has a Mane 6 raped. Not that i don't enjoy rape in fics, cause i do, but they belong in a grimdark.
*edit* on second look, this is a grimdark. i kinda forgot because the lack of tell-tale grimdark elements other than the obvious one.
i guess in that case i enjoyed this chapter ok-ish
The whole series is well written, if rather dark, I have no gripes about that... the only thing that I dont like is that this chapter makes homosexuality sound alot more like rabid sexism than a sexual preference... I get the point that is trying to be presented, but I HOPE that homosexuals do not think of the opposite sex in such a rabidly sexist way.
Of course, this is just a personal issue with how the conflict is presented, not a critique on a failing of the story.
I can't really tell if it was rape or she ended up liking it....
I'm still wondering why the hell I read this in the first place
No offense, it's very well written, just not my style.
1542036 you have a point 3A
=bitch
Aww poor Dash! Why would they do this to her?!?!
So it seems Twi and Fluttershy ended up okay with it, but what happened with Applejack is still cruel!
This is going to be one of the most fucked up pieces of literature that I will ever read... I'M SO EXCITED!!!
~SolidFire
That was strangely one of the better rape-y scenes that I've ever read. I'd almost call that eventual-consensual rape right there. Pretty descriptive, focusing mainly on the thoughts and stuff, but I, personally, would have liked a bit more description about what is going on in the pelvic region.
~SolidFire
I cackled like a madman when Big Mac came in. The clop/rape was much... sexier, in this chapter. Now it's time for the next victim of generosity.
~SolidFire
I find it so ironic that Pokey poked Pinkie Pie's pink pie and popped her cherry. Pinkie... how do you bounce back from being raped like that? She's got a few screws loose if you ask me.
~SolidFire
This was a nice chapter. Twi did it more out of wanting to experience it than anything else. Even though she didn't want the penetration, she did come to enjoy it all. Caramel just... he needed a bit more tact with his final words. That was just dumb as fuck. And doesn't it make more sense to you people to make a pill for GUYS that sterilizes them for the time being? It makes more sense to unload a gun than to shoot at a bullet proof vest.
~SolidFire
I think Dash was hit the hardest by this little... plan. I think her dreams of becoming a Wonderbolt were just destroyed in the worst way possible. She, a lesbian, was raped, by a guy... two guys actually. This was my favorite chapter by far. Seriously loved it, probably more than I should have.
~SolidFire
Payback's a bitch, ain't it Rarity? I think Rarity is getting off far too easy for what she did. I'd personally killed her, but then again I'm a bit harsh when it comes to punishments. Maybe prison and daily gangbangs by the royal guards. Yeah, that sounds much better. I can kind of understand Dash's confusion. She went into that... encounter, knowing that she is a lesbian. But, when they get passed the generic make-out session and into the pussy playing, she feels nothing. Then, shortly after penetration by a good ol' cock, she orgasms. So yeah, she has been put in an unfair predicament if I do say so myself. Grand story. Definitely one of my favorite rape fics.
~SolidFire
you are one sick pony dude
I personally felt a strange sense of satisfaction from this chapter. Frankly, if you found this all wrong, DON'T take it seriously. The sooner you learn that, the easier the internet is to bear.
Oh great, It's going to be, I guess, one of those stories. I just need to clean the dust around Cupcakes and Sweet Apple Massacre.