I loved it so much i had to downvote!!!! :D

It seemed like RD was hit the hardest.

Gangbanged...AND she's gay...in a shower room...by her own heroes.

My heart is absolutely broken... My poor poor Dash... How could you treat her like this? D:

I like rapefics but not lesbian stuff and this happening to dash my fav pony this is the worst one in this fic and this is my reactions what happend to her is horrible. But props for rest of story!!!!!!!!
Edit: Twi is now fav pony. 7.28.2013

The whole series is well written, if rather dark, I have no gripes about that... the only thing that I dont like is that this chapter makes homosexuality sound alot more like rabid sexism than a sexual preference... I get the point that is trying to be presented, but I HOPE that homosexuals do not think of the opposite sex in such a rabidly sexist way.

Of course, this is just a personal issue with how the conflict is presented, not a critique on a failing of the story.

Aww poor Dash! Why would they do this to her?!?!

I think Dash was hit the hardest by this little... plan. I think her dreams of becoming a Wonderbolt were just destroyed in the worst way possible. She, a lesbian, was raped, by a guy... two guys actually. This was my favorite chapter by far. Seriously loved it, probably more than I should have.

~SolidFire

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Agreed, mate.

Good to see you again, by the way.

So very, very disappointed... I wish I could say I hated this chapter. I wish I could say I enjoyed it. But I can't. Neither answer is true. This chapter was a tumor, and I was the assistant watching the doctor pull it out. That's all there is, it's all so clinical. This chapter was boring. It just kinda droned on. I don't really feel sad for Dash, but neither did this excite me. I just feel tired.

Does anyone know where I can find a nice, consensual Dash/Wonderbolts clopfic? Bisexual Dash, if possible? It'd help cleanse my palate.