I was expecting her to kick the face of BM, after all... He RAPED HER... Even Fluttershy is badass when she want (like in Putting Your Hoof Down) Mixed emotions, i feel bad for Fluttershy, and Rarity is a bitch in this story, i mean, making a stallion rape your PFF is something horrible, but well, i will read the next 6 chapters (Sorry for the bad english, it isn't my native language)
Emerald Flight hit the nail right on the head. What are you doing! This idea... This fic... It's wrong and I hate it but it's the most emotional story I've read in a very long time. And it was virtually flawless, too. I don't know what to say, other than you're a very, very good writer.
I can't really tell if it was rape or she ended up liking it.... I'm still wondering why the hell I read this in the first place No offense, it's very well written, just not my style.
That was strangely one of the better rape-y scenes that I've ever read. I'd almost call that eventual-consensual rape right there. Pretty descriptive, focusing mainly on the thoughts and stuff, but I, personally, would have liked a bit more description about what is going on in the pelvic region.
So there's this amazing sense that Fluttershy is complicit in her own rape here, and it seems so unreal, but it's not. I experienced something very similar to this - being too afraid to run, too weak to escape, and still feeling compassion for him - and trust me, Fluttershy is exactly the right kind of confused here. I love this.
It was very well written and believable. I have to adment my curiosity is aroused. I can appreciate it has an interesting premise and the Mac drugging was not hard to beleive. Tragic really. Everybit as heart wrenching as expected but very well done.
She circled about the counter, nonchalantly blowing out a single as she passed.
"stallion's... filly-filler" LMAO
I was expecting her to kick the face of BM, after all... He RAPED HER... Even Fluttershy is badass when she want (like in Putting Your Hoof Down)
Mixed emotions, i feel bad for Fluttershy, and Rarity is a bitch in this story, i mean, making a stallion rape your PFF is something horrible, but well, i will read the next 6 chapters
(Sorry for the bad english, it isn't my native language)
I share Big Mac's thoughts...What the hell just happened!
Emerald Flight hit the nail right on the head. What are you doing! This idea... This fic... It's wrong and I hate it but it's the most emotional story I've read in a very long time. And it was virtually flawless, too. I don't know what to say, other than you're a very, very good writer.
i hope this is the only chapter OOC Rarity has a Mane 6 raped. Not that i don't enjoy rape in fics, cause i do, but they belong in a grimdark.
*edit* on second look, this is a grimdark. i kinda forgot because the lack of tell-tale grimdark elements other than the obvious one.
i guess in that case i enjoyed this chapter ok-ish
=BITCH
I can't really tell if it was rape or she ended up liking it....
I'm still wondering why the hell I read this in the first place
No offense, it's very well written, just not my style.
1542036 you have a point 3A =bitch
That was strangely one of the better rape-y scenes that I've ever read. I'd almost call that eventual-consensual rape right there. Pretty descriptive, focusing mainly on the thoughts and stuff, but I, personally, would have liked a bit more description about what is going on in the pelvic region.
~SolidFire
This was the most descriptive rape I have ever read. There goes my Fluttershy-BM shipping. Or did it just improve it? I'm sorry Fluttershy.
So there's this amazing sense that Fluttershy is complicit in her own rape here, and it seems so unreal, but it's not. I experienced something very similar to this - being too afraid to run, too weak to escape, and still feeling compassion for him - and trust me, Fluttershy is exactly the right kind of confused here. I love this.
Someone needs to do a version of this where Rarity spikes the tea too much and Big Mac winds up raping her instead.
cue Law and Order; Special Victims theme!
It was very well written and believable. I have to adment my curiosity is aroused. I can appreciate it has an interesting premise and the Mac drugging was not hard to beleive. Tragic really. Everybit as heart wrenching as expected but very well done.
I think you meant to add "candle" in there.