I find it so ironic that Pokey poked Pinkie Pie's pink pie and popped her cherry. Pinkie... how do you bounce back from being raped like that? She's got a few screws loose if you ask me.
Ever hear of a "Stepford Smiler?" While not an exact case of the A, B, or C type spoken of on TVTropes there, Pinkie's covering up a bad experience by hiding it behind a facsimile of her usual exuberance.
To be blunt, she's trying to convince herself that nothing happened by telling others that nothing happened, because maybe if they believe her, she can believe herself.
Me too, especially a completely clueless virgin like this. Maybe I'm just remembering "Advice from Pinkie Pie" too well, but my impression is that Pinkie Pie might actually be the most sexually active of the Mane 6. Anything that cheers somepony up, right?
I can't help but think she WAS innocent and sheltered once, but once she heard other ponies talk about how good sex made them feel, she decided she just HAD to know more about it... And went about it with her usual enthusiasm.
Rarity's a moron. If she wanted Pinkie Pie to learn she should have used a gag not a blindfold!
That was entirely pointless.
And Pokey just walks off and leaves her? I mean what the hell!? Infact Pokey's presence was entirely inconsequential. Rarity could have raped her with a strapon with that blindfold in place and the result would have been just as pointless.
Sorry I'm going to have to say this chapter was pretty weak and in the end illicited no emotional response from me whatsoever.
But during the actual act it was more like foal rape with the sounds Pinkie made, which was slightly disturbing.
The self bondage was in character but it really defeated the purpose of Pokey being there at all. He could have been coaxed into helping her get strapped to the table and during the course of this erotic act the drug would be slowly working it's magic to drive him into a lustful frenzy. Mac's ordeal with Fluttershy was more natural. Rarity used her own charms to seduce and arouse him and then left him with Shy.
The last chapter was explicit but gave us no context of how Rarity was involved with the 3 guard stallions. This was just entirely unnecessary and pointless.
I feel as if you're trying to romanticize rape for some odd reason. Did you write this as a troll fic?
What's with the dislikes? I'm liking it alot so far
I find it hard to believe Pinkie was a virgin.
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Ikr?
I find it so ironic that Pokey poked Pinkie Pie's pink pie and popped her cherry. Pinkie... how do you bounce back from being raped like that? She's got a few screws loose if you ask me.
~SolidFire
you are one sick pony dude
Pinkie could have slipped out the whole time!?
3422835 "Bounce back?"
Ever hear of a "Stepford Smiler?" While not an exact case of the A, B, or C type spoken of on TVTropes there, Pinkie's covering up a bad experience by hiding it behind a facsimile of her usual exuberance.
To be blunt, she's trying to convince herself that nothing happened by telling others that nothing happened, because maybe if they believe her, she can believe herself.
A user on this site has a pic for their avatar that exemplifies this perfectly:
fc06.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2012/206/2/8/i__m_fine_anime_girl_by_mythicalprancer-d58k0ro.jpg
This, potentially, is what's happening in Pinkie's head (The first 11 items, at the very least):
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In short, Pinkie didn't bounce back.
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Me too, especially a completely clueless virgin like this. Maybe I'm just remembering "Advice from Pinkie Pie" too well, but my impression is that Pinkie Pie might actually be the most sexually active of the Mane 6. Anything that cheers somepony up, right?
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I can't help but think she WAS innocent and sheltered once, but once she heard other ponies talk about how good sex made them feel, she decided she just HAD to know more about it... And went about it with her usual enthusiasm.
Rarity's a moron. If she wanted Pinkie Pie to learn she should have used a gag not a blindfold!
That was entirely pointless.
And Pokey just walks off and leaves her? I mean what the hell!? Infact Pokey's presence was entirely inconsequential. Rarity could have raped her with a strapon with that blindfold in place and the result would have been just as pointless.
Sorry I'm going to have to say this chapter was pretty weak and in the end illicited no emotional response from me whatsoever.
But during the actual act it was more like foal rape with the sounds Pinkie made, which was slightly disturbing.
The self bondage was in character but it really defeated the purpose of Pokey being there at all. He could have been coaxed into helping her get strapped to the table and during the course of this erotic act the drug would be slowly working it's magic to drive him into a lustful frenzy. Mac's ordeal with Fluttershy was more natural. Rarity used her own charms to seduce and arouse him and then left him with Shy.
The last chapter was explicit but gave us no context of how Rarity was involved with the 3 guard stallions. This was just entirely unnecessary and pointless.