A longer version of the episode, where Fluttershy doesn't immediately recognise the error of her ways after insulting Pinkie Pie and Rarity, but requires an intervention after tackling all of her friends.
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I saw that episode....multiple times.....but this.....this just explores much deeper into what Fluttershy turned into. I wanted to see more of that in the show, but didn't. This gave me much more than I actually wanted, so....good job! Would like to see more chapters and see how this all sorts out.
The line where she said she couldn't stand up to her own rabbit......nice touch. It really made me laugh, even while I was cringing in sympathy for Dash.
Like I said, good job. And please write more!
Fluttershy was unquestionably, undeniable unkind in this chapter (obviously, because that’s the point), but I gotta give you credit for the insults. They’re much more cutting and accurate than it feels like I could ever write. I appreciate the depth this gives NF.