For two hundred years humans have been enslaved by ponies. With a Apple family reunion and a old friend of Granny Smith coming to visit brings a human slave to their farm. Things will take a turn towards freedom or war.
HOLY CRAP YOUR ALIVE! Man been far to long but you did good here and things are getting interesting and looking forward to seeing where things go from here and hope more will come soon in the near future
There is a missing comma or period before almost every line of dialogue that is not at the beginning of the sentence, save for a few instances. I noticed several other things, but accidentally refreshed the page and lost the entire list.
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holy crap you did something
I did for sure
HOLY CRAP YOUR ALIVE! Man been far to long but you did good here and things are getting interesting and looking forward to seeing where things go from here and hope more will come soon in the near future
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I'm a genius!
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Wait I am!?
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You know what I mean. It’s been so long since a update that thought this story might have been dead
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It lives on through my brain 24/7
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Good and glad to see it’s written down for us to read and enjoy
There is a missing comma or period before almost every line of dialogue that is not at the beginning of the sentence, save for a few instances.
I noticed several other things, but accidentally refreshed the page and lost the entire list.