For two hundred years humans have been enslaved by ponies. With a Apple family reunion and a old friend of Granny Smith coming to visit brings a human slave to their farm. Things will take a turn towards freedom or war.
“Sawdust was a former undefeated chess master! She also has a record for breaking humans out of a train car and declaring war on the king.” Twilight said “Why she owns a human is something that doesn’t add up.”
Damn, she’s an OG.
“We don’t need anyone knowing what we are doing.” A hooded figure said walking out from behind a wall and stepping forwards “The elements of harmony must be kept neutral.” The hooded figure removed their hood revealing a young woman with brilliant amaranth hair with light apple green stripes vivid crimson with brilliant yellow stripes in her hair. She let out a smile as she took a seat “Pinkie Pie, Rainbow Dash and Applejack, I’m so glad you three could make it.”
Who’s that?
She walked over towards her window and looked out at the humans in the garden doing their work “Your true king was taken from you, but maybe one day your king will return and free you all.” A tear ran down her cheek as she heard a baby crying. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Damn that was deep.
This is getting good! I wonder what kind of potential Matt has to be the only hope of his kind.
Can't wait for the next chapter! Keep up the amazing work!!
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There is such a thing as light black?
I tought Apple Bloom was still a filly?
Missing commas around ‘‘however’’.
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It is a name, so the first letters should be uppercase.
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Remove the first ‘could’.
Remove the ‘ 's ’, as it would make the sentence ‘‘She is also had’’
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‘‘need to tell’’
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Missing comma after Luna.
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Either ‘no’ or ‘‘not a bother’’.
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You mean ‘set up’?
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‘‘the scars’’ ?
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Damn, she’s an OG.
Who’s that?
Who’s the baby?
Poor guy, he needs a hug