I hate cliffhangers!, But I love the story.

WHAAAAAAAAAAAT?!!!?!!

Y'all saw that bit at the end of Mathew being the true King of Equestria right? Oh shits about to get really spicy soon.

🎶Love is in the air🎶

Wow!!!! I did not see that coming! This is getting even more interesting!

Hey, just a question if you don't mind, does the story will have clop scenes? Because it has the 'Sex' tag.

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I wouldn't have it as a tag if I wasn't planning on adding a clop scene

Are you sure your well enough

you're

Where is Apple Bloom and Big Mac?

are

You mother light still shines bright within you.

Your mother's

I still see so much of Pear Butter in Applejack then Bright Mac

‘‘much more of’’

In the picture was a stallion with Bright red hair

Uppercase B should be lowercase.

He’s Sawdusts human.

Sawdust's

Ah wonder where she ran off too?”

to

“I’m sure, you need a break.”

Would a period be more fitting?

They may have came from different worlds but their love was strong.”

come

“You can cook, your an artist, your good at buildin’ and now your givin’ advice.”

you're

You did help Matthew

Missing comma.

which forced her to shut down earlier then she wanted.

than

she saw the two sitting on a bolder

boulder

Applejack heard the yell causing her to slowly open her eyes

Missing comma after ‘yell’.

She quickly un-panicked her mine as she greeted him

She had an explosive?

and she was sold off before I was sold of too

off

His right eye, it just like his.

it's/it is

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Fixed

How did she get that scar on her hand?

Thats an interesting reveal