For two hundred years humans have been enslaved by ponies. With a Apple family reunion and a old friend of Granny Smith coming to visit brings a human slave to their farm. Things will take a turn towards freedom or war.
“What I’m about to tell you, you cannot tell your sister, and you cannot speak of this to anyone.” Luna was a bit confused as she watched her mother brought forth an orb “Do you remember the human we saw in Ponyville?” The orb changed showing Matthew in Sweet Apple Acers with his sketchbook. Luna nodded as she watched as the orb moved away “I have sent Nightfire to protect him, for he is the king of the humans.”
Why not tell celestia?
“I’m afraid the moment you take that off a spell will give off his location and he’ll be hunted by the slavers.” Sawdust said as Matthew placed the plate of food in front of her “With the blood spell in place on the collar at least he’s safe with me.”
But, they wouldn’t be able to do anything.
From across the room, Sawdust and Granny Smith watched them dance. This brought a smile to her face as a hand touched Sawdust shoulder and there standing behind her was her late husband “It’s time to go sweetheart.” He said softly as she took his hand and slowly followed him “He will be perfectly fine with the Apple family.”
I thought this story was dead but welcome back!
Glad to see you're still around.
This was a great chapter and I can't wait to see more.
I have waited oh so long~
Now for potential errors:
Why is there a comma behind ‘for’?
I think that the uppercase P should be lowercase.
there
Unnecessary asterisk.
listening
The part in italics seems like it should be a new sentence.
‘‘made her way (...)’’ ?
Acres
Maybe add a comma after ‘normal pony’?
The part in italics looks like it should be a new sentence.
startle?
there
Your alive!!!!
It's been a LOOONG time. How have you been?
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It alive! It's alive!!!!
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I'm glad your enjoying it
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I am!
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Yeah it's been some time I'm doing pretty good.
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I shall fix those when given the chance!
Why not tell celestia?
But, they wouldn’t be able to do anything.
Oh no.
What a Twist. And I know its been long Released but i think could have been a missed opportunity here
Sucker punched in the feels. Damn you lol