• Member Since 25th Oct, 2011
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paxtofettel


Comments ( 23 )

1036260

Thanks. Your stories are pretty good too.

1036403

Yeah, finally a fic where Vinyl isn't paired with Octavia.

Plus, it's better than what I can write.

1036453

Me neither. I'm crap at writing sex.

Take all my wants. TAKE ALL OF THEM.

* innocent whistle*

Shame you didn't do the ninety minute prompt that one was fun.

1041057

Boy, I can barely write two people having sex. You think I can do six?

I gotta hand it to you, you really know how to multitask when it comes to clop.

1041444 Yeah, more then one on one is quite challenging, perspectives, workable positions, so much changes.

1041551

That's why I limit myself to two characters.

Come on people, I know you've read this leave comments! So...on with the story.

So you got the look down, you've space you used paragraphs and remembered to vary between short and long sentences. Kinda short though, you might have finished this first and wanted it up so bad you did and wrote more afterward, but that's wrong. Your reading will like longer stories even if their clop.

And there you have it.

1041904


That would defeat the purpose of a speedfic, now would it?

I'm baaaack...

Right, So my only new comment this time is that you could try to find another word to use for a ladies vajayjay without using pussy. You can if you'd like, its just that I finished reading over 10 chapters of a story with clop in every one and that word was never used. You know when you do see that word? On short fantasy stories. Nothing wrong with that. * raises an eye brow* Is there?

How this was a speed thing, sixty minutes I presume? I don't know the details but considering the extra effort put forth I'll say you did splendidly and say nothing more.

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Things gonna get awkard once Little Strongheart stops being little.

1491434

Meh, at least his ass will be okay.

I really like that Little Strongheart tag, can't wait to read it. There needs to be more of her.
Mind telling me which chapter she's in?

Lovely bit of Sparity as such can oft be a rarity.

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