• Member Since 25th Oct, 2011
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paxtofettel


Comments ( 30 )

great story.

ShiningMac? This is relevant to my interests.....:twilightblush:

lol brear's comic in clopfic form , i approve ♥!.....

5458561

Glad you approve.

Please accept this 'Very Yes':moustache:

5460862

I will accept it with full honors.

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I was very pleasantly surprised. Comics don't always translate well into stories, but this one was great!

5487069

Well, I did my best.

5487069

Glad to see I pulled it off, despite not having done M/M before.

I am afraid I must point this out: in order for this to be a novelization, the word count must be at least 150k words minimum.

5525959

Ah well, think of it as a funny.

5525967
Glad we settled on that

Very sexy! A great adaptation of that comic. Could use a little editing and I wish you would have expanded more on round two, but you still get my fave! :ajsmug:

>reading the fic while looking at the comic as a companion guide lol.....

though i noticed there was a lot of changes in the dialogue from the comic , but one that seemed to be non-intentional was you kept typing "“Ah...Ah not gonna regret this, right?”" where you make him only say "ah" when i think what you want is him to say "ah'm"....

5553746

D'oh, my bad. Thanks for pointing it out.


Yeah, comic dialogue doesn't translate well to a non-visual medium in my opinion. Hence, I modified the dialogue so it flowed well.

Loved and faved. You made great justice to my favorite clop comic.

5563795

I'm glad it was to your liking.

TeeHee I luv et ^//^

You should write more to dis! 030

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