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Pen Stroke

Joined November 2011
6,141 followers

A fan-fiction author and computer programmer that lives in Pasadena.

Sequels

  • Trinkets
    In the aftermath of Past Sins, Twilight and Nyx go through the things from Nyx's castle bedchamber

    7,396 words · 26,165 views · 2,039 likes · 27 dislikes
  • Nightmare or Nyx?
    Can Spike trust Nyx again after her actions almost got Twilight hung?

    11,380 words · 32,628 views · 2,465 likes · 69 dislikes
  • Winter Bells
    Can Nyx find acceptance with her extended family during Hearth's Warming, or will she find the holiday hymns are filled with nothing but hollow promises?

    95,682 words · 28,535 views · 2,886 likes · 39 dislikes
  • First Hours
    These are Nyx's first hours.

    5,737 words · 10,539 views · 1,517 likes · 38 dislikes

Groups

Stories (20)

  • Winter Bells
    Can Nyx find acceptance with her extended family during Hearth's Warming, or will she find the holiday hymns are filled with nothing but hollow promises?

    95,682 words · 28,535 views · 2,886 likes · 39 dislikes
  • A Mug of Hard Cider
    Celestia's thirst for good alcohol leads her to a pair of new drinking buddies
    12,451 words · 16,677 views · 1,691 likes · 21 dislikes
  • Drop of Moonshine
    A thousand years is a long time to go without a good, stiff drink
    10,347 words · 25,578 views · 2,789 likes · 39 dislikes
  • Trinkets
    In the aftermath of Past Sins, Twilight and Nyx go through the things from Nyx's castle bedchamber
    7,396 words · 26,165 views · 2,039 likes · 27 dislikes
  • Into The Depths
    44,246 words · 13,252 views · 1,212 likes · 17 dislikes
  • Better Living Through Science and Ponies
    39,979 words · 28,672 views · 2,569 likes · 48 dislikes
  • A Zebra in the Bed
    4,559 words · 5,927 views · 583 likes · 9 dislikes
  • Bureaucracy is Magic
    14,347 words · 5,112 views · 530 likes · 8 dislikes
  • Creeping Darkness
    63,186 words · 6,080 views · 670 likes · 12 dislikes
  • First Hours
    5,737 words · 10,539 views · 1,517 likes · 38 dislikes

Blog Posts (97)

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On a dark night filled with even darker magics, an insane cult attempts to give Nightmare Moon a body and life of her own, utterly separate from Princess Luna. But, when the spell is interrupted by Celestia, something unexpected is created.

Now, a little black alicorn filly named Nyx finds herself living under the care of Twilight Sparkle, only to be haunted by memories and emotions from her past. Is she Nightmare Moon reborn or is she simply a doppelganger with a soul and mind of her own? Can Twilight Sparkle protect Nyx from those who refuse to see past her dragon eyes and black coat?

Or, will Nyx be forced to inherit the sins that may not even be hers and become the greatest evil Equestria has ever known?

First Published
29th Aug 2012
Last Modified
30th Aug 2012

Comments ( 4,412 )

Alexstrazsa
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#1 · Chapter 22 · 100w, 1d ago · 54 · 4 ·
#3 · Chapter 22 · 100w, 22h ago · · ·

O

MY

FUCKING GOD

Im going to admit it

i cried a little bit

#4 · Chapter 22 · 100w, 22h ago · 11 · ·

OMG! It's here finally!

Look out feature box, you are about to be destroyed!

I cannot tell you how much I love this fic.. nah, this should be called a epic!

Can't wait for my copy of the hard back to arrive!

Now If you excuse me, time to celebrate

#5 · Chapter 22 · 100w, 22h ago · · ·

IT BEGINS

#6 · Chapter 22 · 100w, 22h ago · · ·

And here comes the horde

#7 · Chapter 22 · 100w, 22h ago · · ·

The feature box will never be the same...

#8 · Chapter 22 · 100w, 22h ago · · ·

YES! :pinkiehappy:

#9 · Chapter 22 · 100w, 22h ago · · ·

Kitaaaaaaaaaa

#10 · Chapter 22 · 100w, 22h ago · · ·

Oooh, you brought it here!

The Feature Box will be broken for a month now. :rainbowlaugh:

#11 · Chapter 22 · 100w, 22h ago · · ·

Hmm... I've heard of this story before...

#12 · Chapter 22 · 100w, 22h ago · · ·

Sequel please? :twilightblush:

#13 · Chapter 22 · 100w, 22h ago · · ·

Dear god........:yay: Also We are going to need a new featured box.....

#14 · Chapter 22 · 100w, 22h ago · · ·

YES!!!!!!! I'VE BEEN WAITING FOR THIS!!!!!!

#15 · Chapter 22 · 100w, 22h ago · · ·

Oh, God I have waited for this moment! NOW TO READ AND NOT LEAVE MY ROOM! :rainbowwild::rainbowwild:

#16 · Chapter 22 · 100w, 22h ago · · 37 ·

YOU STOLE THIS STORY!!!

#17 · Chapter 22 · 100w, 22h ago · · ·

R.I.P Featured Box :ajsleepy:

#19 · Chapter 22 · 100w, 22h ago · · ·

Glad to see it finally up here Pen Stroke, sorry I kind of dropped off on helping with it :pinkiesad2:

#20 · Chapter 22 · 100w, 22h ago · · ·

Well, it'll be good to finally read this one.

#21 · Chapter 22 · 100w, 22h ago · 1 · ·

This story is one of my favourite fim-fictions and I enjoyed reading it immensely. I'm very pleased to see it here! :twilightsmile:  

#22 · Chapter 22 · 100w, 22h ago · · ·

>>1181047

No this is perfectly legit.

I can confirm it.

#23 · Chapter 22 · 100w, 22h ago · 1 · ·

I love this story!! I listened to it of youtube from Vozdesuenos, and when he hasn't updated, I pretty much read the rest of the way. Bravo my friend, bravo!:rainbowdetermined2::eeyup::ajsmug:

#24 · Chapter 22 · 100w, 22h ago · · ·

Hooray

#25 · Chapter 22 · 100w, 22h ago · · ·

YES! I have been waiting for this!

#26 · Chapter 22 · 100w, 22h ago · · ·

And there it is, the perfect excuse that I needed to read this again. THANK YOU! Take it, take them! all of my yays!:yay::yay::yay::yay::yay::yay::yay::yay:

#27 · Chapter 22 · 100w, 22h ago · · ·

I still haven't read this...

IT IS TIME!

#29 · Chapter 22 · 100w, 22h ago · · ·

OH NOES...  All those other stories I have to read are gonna get pushed back in the queue, just so I can reread another.  :yay:

#30 · Chapter 22 · 100w, 22h ago · · ·

Just to be sure... This is the FINISHED version, right? No more being told we need to re-read chapters...

(Also, Everfree 2012 writing panel shoutout! Woo!:pinkiehappy:)

#32 · Chapter 22 · 100w, 22h ago · · ·

IT BEGINS

#33 · Chapter 22 · 100w, 22h ago · · ·

Promised myself to reread this when it would be posted here. Looking forward to it...

#34 · Chapter 22 · 100w, 22h ago · · ·

>>1181073Beat me to it!

#35 · Chapter 22 · 100w, 22h ago · · ·

Huzzah! I was wondering if this ever would make it on this site. Time for a reread!

#36 · Chapter 22 · 100w, 22h ago · · ·

>>1181047 Actually, this is the guy who wrote it, Pen Stroke. He just finally decided to bring it here.

#37 · Chapter 22 · 100w, 22h ago · 1 · ·

Been meaning to read this ever since I finished Fallout: Equestria. Needed a super epic fanfic to read.

This one I think I can and need to manage. Background Pony's chapters are just too long...

Time to become even more well-read!

oh god, there goes my social life

#38 · Chapter 1 · 100w, 22h ago · 2 · ·

EEE!!!

It's here it's finally hear.  Well I know what I'm doing for the wrest of the day.

#39 · Chapter 22 · 100w, 22h ago · · ·

O my....Past Sins here? Instant Fave!!!:pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

#40 · Chapter 22 · 100w, 22h ago · 2 · ·

I've been waiting for a chance to celebrate something Fanfiction related so here's to Past Sin on FimFiction commence the fireworks

#41 · Chapter 22 · 100w, 22h ago · 1 · ·

This story took me around 18 hours straight to read. Meaning I read this for 18 hours straight. I loved every bit of this story on Google Docs, so I will do my part and like and favorite this story to help the cause of getting this story to the Feature Box. :ajsmug:

#42 · Chapter 22 · 100w, 22h ago · 1 · ·

>71 likes

>4 views

Seems legit.

Anywho, now that this is finally on fimfiction, I shall read it for the first time. Time to initiate Operation: Ignore Hype.

#43 · Chapter 22 · 100w, 22h ago · · ·

For all the controversy around this fic, I personally find it quite enjoyable.

#44 · Chapter 22 · 100w, 22h ago · · ·

Well, I'm taking shelter for the rest of the day.

I hope the world is still there when I return.

#45 · Chapter 22 · 100w, 22h ago · 1 · ·

Within five minutes it's already taken over the feature box

#47 · Chapter 16 · 100w, 22h ago · 3 · ·

There are a lot of good moments in this story, but this chapter, "missing joy", is probably my favourite.

#48 · Chapter 22 · 100w, 22h ago · · ·

Ivan receiving the impression that this story might be worth reading.  I suppose I shall read it then.

#49 · Chapter 22 · 100w, 22h ago · 2 · ·

>>1181110 I know, it's crazy, it's almost like it's been around for months and people who've read it before are pre-emptively liking it. MADNESS.

#50 · Chapter 22 · 100w, 22h ago · · ·

>>1181088  Agreed, and not just cause that Colgate is creeping the everything outta me...

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