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Drop of Moonshine
A thousand years is a long time to go without a good, stiff drink
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A Mug of Hard Cider
Celestia's thirst for good alcohol leads her to a pair of new drinking buddies
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Trinkets
In the aftermath of Past Sins, Twilight and Nyx go through the things from Nyx's castle bedchamber
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Better Living Through Science and Ponies
Not all is well in Equestria when a failing portal gun brings Aperture Science to the land of ponies
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Winter Bells
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Into The Depths
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Fluttershy Wishes
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Bureaucracy is Magic
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Creeping Darkness
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A Zebra in the Bed
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Past Sins by Pen Stroke

Sad Dark Slice of Life Alternate Universe

On a dark night filled with even darker magics, an insane cult attempts to give Nightmare Moon a body and life of her own, utterly separate from Princess Luna. But, when the spell is interrupted by Celestia, something unexpected is created.

Now, a little black alicorn filly named Nyx finds herself living under the care of Twilight Sparkle, only to be haunted by memories and emotions from her past. Is she Nightmare Moon reborn or is she simply a doppelganger with a soul and mind of her own? Can Twilight Sparkle protect Nyx from those who refuse to see past her dragon eyes and black coat?

Or, will Nyx be forced to inherit the sins that may not even be hers and become the greatest evil Equestria has ever known?

Prelude: Resurrection · 7th Sep 2012

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1: Everfree Discovery · 22nd Oct 2012

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2: A Secret Between Friends · 27th Oct 2012

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3: School Days and Memories · 22nd Oct 2012

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4: Distant Storm Clouds · 22nd Oct 2012

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5: Theatrical Trouble · 3rd Sep 2012

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6: Reunion of the Royal Pony Sisters · 27th Oct 2012

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7: Careful Maneuvering · 29th Aug 2012

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8: You Can’t Hide Magic · 2nd Sep 2012

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9: Revealing Truths · 4th Sep 2012

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10: Treachery · 19th Sep 2012

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11: The Castle of Nightmare · 24th Oct 2012

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12: Mother of a Nightmare · 24th Oct 2012

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13: All Hail the Queen · 27th Oct 2012

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14: Once a Crusader · 27th Oct 2012

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15: Missing Joy · 27th Oct 2012

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16: To Harden a Soft Heart · 27th Oct 2012

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17: Tainted Blessing · 28th Nov 2012

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18: A Mare Against Monsters · 27th Oct 2012

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19: Recovery · 20th Sep 2012

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20: Judgment · 28th Nov 2012

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21: The End of the Nightmare · 4th Nov 2012

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203,012 words total

First Published
29th Aug 2012

Last Modified
30th Aug 2012

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Alexstrazsa Sub Moderator

#1 · Chapter 22 · 42w, 14h ago · 22

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Wanderer D Moderator

#2 · Chapter 22 · 42w, 7h ago · 13

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Gnome

#3 · Chapter 22 · 42w, 6h ago ·

FUCKING GOD

Im going to admit it

i cried a little bit

Jka22_419

#4 · Chapter 22 · 42w, 6h ago · 4

OMG! It's here finally!

Look out feature box, you are about to be destroyed!

I cannot tell you how much I love this fic.. nah, this should be called a epic!

Can't wait for my copy of the hard back to arrive!

Now If you excuse me, time to celebrate

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Arcainum

#5 · Chapter 22 · 42w, 6h ago ·

IT BEGINS

ZombieBrony

#6 · Chapter 22 · 42w, 6h ago ·

And here comes the horde

Csquared08

#7 · Chapter 22 · 42w, 6h ago ·

The feature box will never be the same...

Wento

#8 · Chapter 22 · 42w, 6h ago ·

YES! :pinkiehappy:

Celysus

#9 · Chapter 22 · 42w, 6h ago ·

Kitaaaaaaaaaa

Rokas

#10 · Chapter 22 · 42w, 6h ago ·

Oooh, you brought it here!

The Feature Box will be broken for a month now. :rainbowlaugh:

Tayman

#11 · Chapter 22 · 42w, 6h ago ·

Hmm... I've heard of this story before...

GloomyFace

#12 · Chapter 22 · 42w, 6h ago ·

Sequel please? :twilightblush:

jmlop0

#13 · Chapter 22 · 42w, 6h ago ·

Dear god........ :yay: Also We are going to need a new featured box.....

Bronyman1995

#14 · Chapter 22 · 42w, 6h ago ·

YES!!!!!!! I'VE BEEN WAITING FOR THIS!!!!!!

HikariToYami

#15 · Chapter 22 · 42w, 6h ago ·

Oh, God I have waited for this moment! NOW TO READ AND NOT LEAVE MY ROOM! :rainbowwild:

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KillJoy

#17 · Chapter 22 · 42w, 6h ago ·

R.I.P Featured Box :ajsleepy:

Toxic Spill

#18 · Chapter 22 · 42w, 6h ago · 1

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Fangwarden

#19 · Chapter 22 · 42w, 6h ago ·

Glad to see it finally up here Pen Stroke, sorry I kind of dropped off on helping with it :pinkiesad2:

RK_Striker_JK_5

#20 · Chapter 22 · 42w, 6h ago ·

Well, it'll be good to finally read this one.

PoweredByTea

#21 · Chapter 22 · 42w, 6h ago ·

This story is one of my favourite fim-fictions and I enjoyed reading it immensely. I'm very pleased to see it here! :twilightsmile:

Wlah

#22 · Chapter 22 · 42w, 6h ago ·

>>11810471181047

No this is perfectly legit.

I can confirm it.

Spades_of_Ace

#23 · Chapter 22 · 42w, 6h ago ·

I love this story!! I listened to it of youtube from Vozdesuenos, and when he hasn't updated, I pretty much read the rest of the way. Bravo my friend, bravo! :rainbowdetermined2: :eeyup: :ajsmug:

MrBackpack

#24 · Chapter 22 · 42w, 6h ago ·

Hooray

Haimerej

#25 · Chapter 22 · 42w, 6h ago ·

YES! I have been waiting for this!

Crimson ONayl

#26 · Chapter 22 · 42w, 6h ago ·

And there it is, the perfect excuse that I needed to read this again. THANK YOU! Take it, take them! all of my yays! :yay: :yay: :yay: :yay: :yay: :yay: :yay: :yay:

ToastiestZombie

#27 · Chapter 22 · 42w, 6h ago ·

I still haven't read this...

IT IS TIME!

Cyanide

#28 · Chapter 22 · 42w, 6h ago ·

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Fourpony

#29 · Chapter 22 · 42w, 6h ago ·

OH NOES... All those other stories I have to read are gonna get pushed back in the queue, just so I can reread another. :yay:

MetBoy

#30 · Chapter 22 · 42w, 6h ago ·

Just to be sure... This is the FINISHED version, right? No more being told we need to re-read chapters...

(Also, Everfree 2012 writing panel shoutout! Woo! :pinkiehappy: )

Nopony in Particular

#31 · Chapter 22 · 42w, 6h ago ·

Past Sins is on Fimfiction?

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Likeness

#32 · Chapter 22 · 42w, 6h ago ·

IT BEGINS

blastdragon

#33 · Chapter 22 · 42w, 6h ago ·

Youtube Video

Promised myself to reread this when it would be posted here. Looking forward to it...

Nopony in Particular

#34 · Chapter 22 · 42w, 6h ago ·

>>11810731181073Beat me to it!

Ghost-091

#35 · Chapter 22 · 42w, 6h ago ·

Huzzah! I was wondering if this ever would make it on this site. Time for a reread!

Abyx4433

#36 · Chapter 22 · 42w, 6h ago ·

>>11810471181047 Actually, this is the guy who wrote it, Pen Stroke. He just finally decided to bring it here.

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A. Tuesday

#37 · Chapter 22 · 42w, 6h ago ·

Been meaning to read this ever since I finished Fallout: Equestria. Needed a super epic fanfic to read.

This one I think I can and need to manage. Background Pony's chapters are just too long...

Time to become even more well-read!

oh god, there goes my social life

Emeral Bookwise

#38 · Chapter 1 · 42w, 6h ago ·

EEE!!!

It's here it's finally hear. Well I know what I'm doing for the wrest of the day.

Ecko7

#39 · Chapter 22 · 42w, 6h ago ·

O my....Past Sins here? Instant Fave!!! :pinkiehappy:

Tonto the Trotter

#40 · Chapter 22 · 42w, 5h ago ·

I've been waiting for a chance to celebrate something Fanfiction related so here's to Past Sin on FimFiction commence the fireworks

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Pinkie Floyd

#41 · Chapter 22 · 42w, 5h ago ·

This story took me around 18 hours straight to read. Meaning I read this for 18 hours straight. I loved every bit of this story on Google Docs, so I will do my part and like and favorite this story to help the cause of getting this story to the Feature Box. :ajsmug:

Csquared08

#42 · Chapter 22 · 42w, 5h ago · 1

>71 likes

>4 views

Seems legit.

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Anywho, now that this is finally on fimfiction, I shall read it for the first time. Time to initiate Operation: Ignore Hype.

Autumn Wind

#43 · Chapter 22 · 42w, 5h ago ·

For all the controversy around this fic, I personally find it quite enjoyable.

Ninestempest

#44 · Chapter 22 · 42w, 5h ago ·

Well, I'm taking shelter for the rest of the day.

I hope the world is still there when I return.

ZombieBrony

#45 · Chapter 22 · 42w, 5h ago ·

Within five minutes it's already taken over the feature box

Garion

#46 · Chapter 22 · 42w, 5h ago ·

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PoweredByTea

#47 · Chapter 16 · 42w, 5h ago ·

There are a lot of good moments in this story, but this chapter, "missing joy", is probably my favourite.

GoG ToXiC

#48 · Chapter 22 · 42w, 5h ago ·

Ivan receiving the impression that this story might be worth reading. I suppose I shall read it then.

Arcainum

#49 · Chapter 22 · 42w, 5h ago · 1

>>11811101181110 I know, it's crazy, it's almost like it's been around for months and people who've read it before are pre-emptively liking it. MADNESS.

Ravenmane

#50 · Chapter 22 · 42w, 5h ago ·

>>11810881181088 Agreed, and not just cause that Colgate is creeping the everything outta me...

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