Night Mist's the name and he has been dropped into the realm of Equestria, well, the pony realm that is, from another realm he cannot recall. His appearance causes Princess Luna to take him in as her son. When he am told of all that is going on, he finds out his new mother was not controlled by the dark side known as Nightmare Moon. Nightmare Moon is her own pony. Well, that's an interesting twist. Let's see how events play out.
I like it so far, but I think the reaction of Celestia and Luna was a bit... Too normal. A bit of surprise, shock or in that direction would've been nice. Still, interesting Chapter.
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Well, seing a pony falling. I think maternal instinct kicks in at that point. And I am sure this is more of a normality compared to the crazy things that happend 1000 years ago.
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Ok. I'll just see it as a 'I've seen weirder stuff moment'
D’awww
How many stories do you have going now?
Wow, that she can do that is creepy and disturbing, to just take away what you are and make you something else, a fate worse than death in my eyes.
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Made some changes to the ending of the chapter. I hope it's a lot more to you're liking. Read over my own work a few times, and the more I looked at it, the more it felt off. So I hope the change is better for you.
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Sure thing, a little critique never hurt anyone............ right?
Update?
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I am changing up the chapters and how things play out in this story, and switching it to third person.
Love in the remake so far. Funny thing is I read this and favorited it but somehow it said I did not have it favorited. I fixed that right away. Will be watching for the next chapter. Oh will you be adding any art pics of your OCs?