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Zatoichi Vokunkiin


Just an observer from the shadows.

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Comment posted by DAMN HAMSTER deleted Jul 8th, 2018

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Vampires may be bad, but there is much, MUCH worse out there.

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You think THOSE are bad? Dragon + Werewolf + Vampire = Dracowerepyre. Not fun to fight. Though, I wouldn't mind being one myself! *Laughs Eviliy*

good to see this story continuing. looking forward to what you write past the chapters you've already published.

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Try astral vampires bro. They're more dangerous than any kind of physical vampire or vampire combo. They drain away your mind and soul, and even to those who can peak into the astral plane will have serious issues in even detecting them.

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Well well well.... that's interesting. I'll have to keep that in mind.

wtf act 3 DON'T YOU MEAN ACT 2!?

We highly approve of thee continuing thy story. :trollestia:

I suppose I should get off my ass and start writing again huh? :p

It's good to have you back buddy! A little worried that you might've forgotten you stories.
Hope to see more stories from you this year and onwards!

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Naaah, could never forget about my stories. Too many good video games have been taking up my free time is all :p.

Everything will be fine, ladies. I promise.

You have tempted the wrath of Murphy. I look forward to the continuation of this story.

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Well it's all to easy to do so! And it works in my favor. :p

Didnt twilight become an alicorn?

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No I haven't made her an alicorns at this point yet.

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Those words rang over and over in the two sisters’ minds day after day. In the months that Zemrite had been gone, quite a few things have happened. Twilight had become a princess for some reason. Something about true friendship. Then faced down some evil centaur creature and even gained a castle for it. Zemrite was going to be in for quite a surprise with that. Even the other girls would have a lot to tell Zemrite about their experiences whenever he’d return. Suddenly, there was a knock at the door. A familiar voice spoke from behind it, making Celestia’s ears perk up.

Last chapter of the first one

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Ah, so I did. Time to fix. Thanks for letting me know. :)

Hope this story gets updated soon

I actually liked this story 3 years ago. Looking back on it now.......what the hell was i thinking.

Why y'all hatein? I for one love this story keep up the good work😁

i hope to see a new chapter soon or an update this story is still one of my favorite's and hope to see it return :pinkiesmile:

You know, it was very weird that you basically skip a big scene where he got "jumped" and kidnapped in the first place?

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YOu gotta know though, this was back when I was still learning to weave better story structures. While I am still learning, I have improved.

BTW, is he still with the alicorn sisters when he became the "new" Death /Grim Reaper of Equestria?

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Ya.

No offense to you, it's honestly not THAT bad of a story but it's HELLA generic and mediocre.

finished the first one now onto this one

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