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Ok wow good to see this back as a rewrite and I cant wait to see more!
Will our brand new Protogen friend ( And his Combaticon Drones. ) get friendly allies on this "friendly" planet of Equis/Equestria?
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Can't spoil much but yes
Your stories are always great!
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Damn right they are
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Well we eagerly await to see if they do or don’t later on
I hope that this doesn't get taken down.
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I haven’t got any threats yet so, so far so good.
:/
Bad sentence, feels uncomfortable to read. Make it shorter perhaps? "They were built to be slaves" is more than enough.
Broke himself, the way you say it sounds like someone else did the job.
Honestly, you can just say "broke out everyone in the combine" because he is also part of it.
Bad! Bad words! Use time for relaxation instead.
It doesn't matter if people do talk like this, the reading experience is more important.
stud?
What are you trying to say here? It's confusing.
Helluva is short for "Hell of a," so you shouldn't add "of a" after it.
Minecraft is a game, I think you meant minecart.
Your fic isn't as bad as I thought it would be, the small sentences makes it easy to follow the story.
BUT you REALLY need to improve your grammar. Also, punctuation marks (,.!?) USE THEM! There are a lot of places where they felt needed.
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First of all, thanks for the help.
Second, I do apologize for my grammar but I'm only human sure there will be a rare line or two but compared to the original story, you can see how much I've improved over the years.
Love the new story so far and looking for more.
Quick question, what's a protogen
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In a nutshell? 'Robo-canine-thing'
Please for the love of everything holy
Don’t cancel this one I loved what I read so far
And can’t wait for more
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So when the next chapter? And why do I get the feeling the mane 6 already have boyfriends or coltfreinds or whatever.
update on when the next chapter is to come out?
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Soon but I'm reworking this first part
Well so far so good with this rewrite and this new coat of paint of yours is pretty good and Im looking forward to seeing more and how Six develops and how he effects the mlp world
Smolder has a point here, ponies have way to much parties for really pretty stupid, nonsensical and childish reasons with no really/true meaning to celebrate other then just to do so. Pretty cringy there
Of course the magic obsessed nerds Twilight, Starlight and Sunburst caused some disaster do to researching some old lost magic that honestly seems to be lost for a reason. Seriously the royal sisters need to better contain and lock up some magics and not let naive magic nerds look into it, you think they would learn by now but no
As always keep up the great work and looking forward to more updates and nice pics here for the ships
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I feel like a good 90% of the parties are because of pinkie pie
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Yeah but still most of the reasons for the parties are pretty childish and kinda stupid
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So pinky pie
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Not just her
Nice
Anyone know what the name of the story is where Anthro space marine comes to equestria and is joined by Rivet please help me find it
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I see many stories with a Regular Space Marine ( Loyal and Chaos ) as the main character.
But I can hardly see anything that has one of the very first sons of the emperor; The Primarchs to be in Equestria?
( Both Imperium Loyalist, Chaotic Daemon Prince, "still missing", or recently deceased, but "magically" brought back to life. )
Can’t wait to see what you do with this story.
Glory to the Protogens