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The 2nd story in the MLP series about a pony named Wilson
Fluttershy's best friend named Wilson is now back in ponyville from a 5 year adventure. Twilight still does not know much about this colt, and asks him about his childhood. How he got his cutie mark, how he met Fluttershy, and much more will be told in this.

READ THIS BEFORE READING THIS (see what i did there)- I've showed this story to a few friends before publishing, they said it was a romance comedy, you can decide on that before trolling this story with "omgz dis is no lub storee an iz nut funneh"
It would have been for everyone... but the language is just a little overdone
If the character Wilson confuses you on how he got there, read the story Fluttershy's first friend

I submitted this before, but revoked it realising that I could have added way more to the story then I started out with
So yeah... enjoy the updated version of The Origins of Wilson :D

Chapters (5)
Comments ( 24 )

This was a pretty good story. Well done! :raritywink: But I noticed a few spelling mistakes and a few sentences that didn't quite make sense. :twilightblush: So it might be a good idea to check the whole thing, even if you don't want to. (Featured stories have good spelling, right?)

994168 you mean... i have to read D:
sad part is i cheaked over this... 4 TIMES FOR SPELLING ERRORS... i feel like a winner ._.

994338

Sorry to say but you spelt checked wrong.... :twilightsheepish: Maybe you should use a dictionary. (Sorry, I'm always telling people they've spelt things wrong... It's a bad habit.)

1000225 spelling was never my greatest thing ._.
i always just copy/pasted w/e wikipedia had for most of my homework

1000234

:pinkiegasp: I copy/paste from wikipedia too. And also, maybe you could get someone to read your stories and correct them, before you post them.

1000524 well all of my friends either say "ponies are for fags" or "wtf do you mean *read*... if i did that i would go to school"
so...yeah its up to me to make fix everything :D

1000584
Well it doesn't have to be a friend, it just needs to be someone willing to do it. I'm sure there's plenty of people.

1000710 yeah the people on this website :D
and if they complain about spelling errors, i look over it AGAIN and fix em

1000929

I personally think it's better to find the spelling mistakes before you post the story, but you do have a point, i'm sure there are others like myself who will tell you where there are spelling errors. :twilightsmile:

1001016 well i do cheak for them when its being submitted, because uno... takes 18 HOURS TO PROCESS
and even if i read it word for word... i will always miss half of them

Well, at least you're not the worst speller i've seen. (You spelt check wrong again.) And blimey, 18 hours to process. That is way too long.

1001212 i spelled it wrong again D:<
and it does take 18 hours, ill upload it around 9pm and it will not be done until about 3pm the next day ._.

1001221 Wow. I thought that skyrim taking 4 hours to download was alot. I feel sorry for you.

1001278 it takes me an hour to upload a 20 minute vid on youtube
...takes me 18 hours to upload a story on here -.-
takes me 30 minutes to download tf2 from steam
MAKES SENSE

1001293 And I thought it would make better sense if the story took the least amount of time and the tf2 taking the most amount of time. It's so confusing :pinkiecrazy:

1001321 well from what submitting a story told me... the moderators read them for any red flags before allowing them to be published, and im sure most of the stories are spam

1001337 Most likely. I haven't submitted a story yet, so I haven't read the info. It's taking me ages to write my first story. I keep thinking i've written loads, but then it turns out to be only a paragraph. :flutterrage: Nurg.

1001382 well for each story I have so far, i came up with everything as soon as I start editing :D

1001428 Ahh. You're lucky. I come up with a good idea, but then the next day I start thinking it was a bad idea, and then I delete it and redo it and then keep deleting. I can't decide which idea is best :twilightangry2:

1001491 i just come up with random crap, weather or not it sucks. Just as long as no one is saying that im copying someone else, and i have fun doing so

1001506 I guess that works. I decided the next idea I come up with will be the idea I use.

1001536 just as long as its misleading, stupid, and makes people facepalm
like the story Cupcakes :D

1001559 I hope it won't be. I'm thinking of something. Maybe if I just lie down and think about it. That normally works. :moustache:

1001597 sounds more like procrastination :b

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