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Jeseille-Hazim


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The Doctor and Derpy travel in time to the future to meet their future selves, but the Doctor ends up making a mistake in which he has to search for Derpy.

Chapters (6)
Comments ( 46 )

First rule of time travel:

Never meet yourself in the past or future.

976198 Is that supposed to be a random comment or a negative comment? If random, then eeyup. :eeyup:

976291

Not really trying to be negative, but if you perceive it as negative then I'm sorry.

well, in thr show (dr who) he kinda makes the point to never mess with his own time stream.

976302 Nah, it's fine. I was just wondering.

976318 Yeah, I noticed. It's just that I tried to make it seem like the Doctor had no intention of this happening.

976396 Glad you're enjoying it so far. :twilightsmile: :pinkiehappy:

976493 Update....or DIE! BECAUSE I WILL FIND YOU. DONT MAKE LEMONADE! GET MAD!! BWAH!:pinkiecrazy: very good story. pwease make it a doctor/derpy fic. pwease.:heart:

976650 I will do so. Expect an update a few days later. By Doctor/Derpy, do you mean shipping?

Well, here's the first chapter. I apologize that it was short. Anyways, I hope you guys enjoyed it. Next chapter will be here in a few days or a week.

1028693 why isn't Zecora talking in rhyme?

1030166 Oh yeah, that's something I forgot to mention. I was a bit skeptical when when thinking to put Zecora in the story, since I couldn't really think of any rhymes. But then, I thought people wouldn't really mind. This is the only chapter that will feature Zecora in the story hopefully. So sorry about that. :applejackunsure:

1031035 Zecora not rhyming is like Pinkie saying "No thanks" to a cupcake :pinkiegasp:

1031284 I happen to like it when people make her rhyme but just think, it would be hard to make her rhyme every sentance. I like it better when she rhymes but I do not mind it when she doesn't. I didn't even notice she wasn't rhyming untill I read your coment. I love this story. I love stories about the doctor and Derpy :derpytongue2: . They are my 2 favorite background ponies and my favorite shipping between background ponies.
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DOCTOR, WHAT THE BUCK? YOU KNOW THAT DERPY IS SENSITIVE! :raritycry:
*goes to read next chappie*

..... Well, the answer to my question of Zecora not rhyming is gone, soo.....
This is a great story so far! :pinkiehappy: Derpy/Doctor forever!

:applecry: Derpy, where are you?
(C'MON, UPDATE!!!!!! ..... Please? :fluttershysad: Fluttershy likes this story too, y'know. She also wants an update. Can you really say no to Fluttershy?)

1588834 I'm REALLY sorry for not updating this story for a kinda long time. It's just that since school started, I've barely had any free time to work on this story. I've been trying to, but then something happens in real life and shit like that. It really sucks.

Comment posted by DiamondPaw1 deleted Dec 13th, 2012
Comment posted by DiamondPaw1 deleted Dec 13th, 2012

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I know how you feel, im still slowly trying to update my Derpy X Doctor fic

Lol when the alligatorcame out I fist thought it was Gummy.
Great chapter I cant wait till you update! :derpytongue2::pinkiesmile::twilightsmile:

2535522 Wow, I just realized that I didn't think about Gummy when writing that part.

2535527
Well I had just been watching a marathon of pinkie pie stuffs XD :pinkiehappy:

2535533 Is your favorite pony Pinkie Pie?

2535550
Nope, my favorite pony is the one and only Rainbow Dash:rainbowdetermined2:


just felt like watching pinkie:pinkiehappy:

2535569 Rainbow Dash is my favorite pony, too. :rainbowwild: Pinkie is my second favorite.

*me looks at add right above coment box* Me: HOLY CRAP ITS A DOCTOR WHO ADD!
lol just felt like shareing :pinkiehappy: :rainbowlaugh::derpytongue2::ajsmug:

wha wha wha WHAT?! THATS ALL I GET BOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO :fluttercry::flutterrage::fluttercry::fluttershysad:

2568586 There will be more soon. :pinkiesmile:

please hurry with next chapter I wuv it :pinkiehappy::derpytongue2::raritystarry::yay:

Ok, just by me reading the description of this story, I screamed PARADOX RUN FOR YOUR LIVES WHICH SHALL BE DESTROYED IF THIS MONSTROSITY CONTINUES!!!!!! Then I read it and laughed as the doctor ate Derpy's muffin. I mean, who eats a muffin whilst crying and then says "What have I done!?!" I laughed so much. And yes, yes I am a fricken time pony!

No the best story ever but you still win a thumbs up
:yay::yay::yay::yay::yay:DoctorxDerpy!

nawwwww :twilightsmile: STORY IS VERY ENJOYED

:( bu- bu- but they didnt get to meet their future selfs :fluttershysad: oh well I love this story so cute :3 :pinkiehappy:

Wow, so far I'm liking this story! Oh, I also noticed that Zecora wasn't rhyming. Nice story, though! Way better than I can do. :3

Who else was imagineing the pony as Octavia?:yay:

First I was all like :pinkiegasp: then I was all like :fluttershysad: then I was all like :ajbemused:

:pinkiegasp::fluttercry::twilightblush::scootangel::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart: THERE ARE NO WORDS.

This story is AWESOME SOCKS! Please do more.

i like the story. it could've used more buildup to derpy running away though, like maybe the doctor could've gotten agitated more than once that day so derpy running away wouldn't have seemed so sudden.

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