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After a peaceful night of meteor showers, Derpy Hooves finds a strange, amnesia-ridden stallion at the edge of Ponyville. Promising to help him, Derpy gives him a name and sets off to help him regain his identity, only to discover that her new friend is not only not what she expected, but that simply knowing him will set her on adventures she wouldn't have thought up in her wildest dreams.

Note: Just a warning, this is not a typical "Doctor Whooves" story, but more of an homage to that concept.

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Comments ( 97 )

Will read later but from the description it sounds like when Ditzy met Discord Whooves for the first time.... *shrug* ALLONS-Y

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Not entirely sure what the Ditzy and Discord Hooves thing means, but I hope you find the story enjoyable when you get around to it! Thanks for the comment! =D

1855865 Its a Tumblr thats the story of a Discorded version of Doctor Whooves. How he met Ditzy in that timeline was that he had amnesia and Ditzy looked after him until a threat appeared and the Doctor regained his memories in the process of defeating it... or something like that. GERONIMO

[EDIT] Just read this and have to admit that this story is actually pretty good! FANTASTIC

Well... That was longer than I thought it would take. It started off slow, but I'm sure it go by faster once the adventures begin. :derpytongue2: Please update soon!

This sounds fantastic. I don't have time for 16770 words right now since I need sleep, but judging from the quality of the summary, this will be good.:pinkiehappy:

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Oh! Okay, cool, that's interesting! I guess mine does sound a little similar to that at first glance. :twilightsheepish:

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Thanks, I'm really glad you liked it! :twilightsmile:

The last reminded me of how The Doctor first met rose when he told to run and then the building exploded. Great chapter and I am looking forward to reading the next. Until then, Allonsy!!! :twilightsmile:

“Wouldn’t that make them kind of like cupcakes?

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asked someone else to do music too.

You use the - pony suffix when appropriate. Might as well change this one.

I'm Time-Turner!

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ECK! Sorry, sometimes I miss the "somepony"s. Fixed. A little confused by your other comments though, are you mad or are you responding to the story? :twilightsheepish:

1880884 Responding, sorry! I left one of them out because I assumed this was going to be the Doctor so naturally he'd say -one. I''ll show you which one it is if you'd like.

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Oh, phew! :twilightsmile: It's okay about the one Time Turner said, that one was intentional seeing as he had only just learned what a pony was. Thanks though!

I cant wait for the other chapters, I look forward to them! It's an awesome story so far and I love where your going with this... :pinkiehappy:

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Thank you so much, I'm very glad you enjoyed the first chapter! :twilightsmile:

I am really enjoying this story, and its only the first chapter.
Question for you though.
When Derpy told Twilight she had to work the next day, was she liying or did she forget? The next day she was woken up by someone from the hospital, then went back and wrote some names down. Finally she spent the day with Time Turner, and never actually did her job. The first time we saw her she worked until noon, so was it a Sunday?
Sorry for the odd question I was just confused.
Please keep up the good work. I am looking forward to reading more.

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She was fibbing to excuse herself without causing an upset about what she saw, she didn't actually have to go to work the next day. Sorry for the confusion! I could probably have made it more clear. Glad to hear you're enjoying the story so far, thanks for the comment! :twilightsmile:

And thus the plot thickens. I am excited about reading more.

You're an awesome writer! As thomas_stewart says; The plot thickens.

This is awesome, I need more!!! :flutterrage:

Awesome, cant wait for more!! :twilightsmile:

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Thanks, I'm glad you liked it! :yay:

Well that was a BRILLIANT Chapter :pinkiehappy:

GREAT chapter, I'm guessing they are going to go to back to Ponyville to give Rainbow the advice, and leave Derpy's hat in the forest.

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Super glad you liked it! Thank you! :twilightsmile:

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Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it! Of course, I can't answer that speculation, though. :twilightsheepish:

great chapter!!! Im looking forward to the rest :derpytongue2::heart::moustache:

Okay, this is awesome.

In your description, you described this story as, not being a Doctor whooves tale, but more of an homage to the concept. Reading it now, I'm so glad someone decided to try that. Hey, I love a good Doctor Whooves story (especially if Derpy is the companion :derpytongue2:), but this is a refreshing change of pace. It's got all the goodies - adventure, timey wimey time travel, a dash of mystery - and none of the baggage.

THIS STORY NEEDS MORE LOVE!!

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There. All my love.

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Aww! Thank you so much! I'm really glad you're enjoying it. :twilightsmile: And it's really nice to hear you're liking my different take on this sort of story.

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Nooo, I'm just really slow at finishing chapters. :twilightblush:

3885951 nothing wrong with that just thought id ask

This is great.

You are great.

EVERYTHING IS GREAT!

Also was that the Tardis?

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I'm so glad you like it! :twilightsmile: Thank you!

Buuuuttt I can't answer that, that would be spoilers. :derpytongue2:

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Totally worth it.
Can't wait to see how this goes from here.

“I would ask that you to teach me how to become a pony.”...I'm detecting a heartwarming and possibly comedic chapter next update.:pinkiehappy:

Glad to see this story is still up and running.:twilightsmile:

Well, I know you've already said you won't confirm this, but I'm pretty sure he found a TARDIS, if not the TARDIS.

Great chapter, I'm really looking forward to the next one!

This chapter seems interesting. I hope the next chapter comes out soon. Best of luck.

BEST. STORY. EVER.
Seriously! It took me like a day and a half to finish it to this point and I'm SO glad I did!!
All Time Turners interactions with Derpy just so how much he cares for her and it melts my heart!
Especially that bit from she he was in the Hospital! I was giggling for like 10 minutes!
I cant wait to read the finished product!

I have a few questions.

)1( How often does this update?

)2( Is it a DW story, or just TT?

)3( If you said homage, will there be Angels? (I'm not asking because of my username. Check my page for that. I just like Angels.)

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Hi! Thank you so much for reading! I hope you enjoyed it. As for your questions:

1) Unfortunately, updates are a little unpredictable on my end. I try to update every couple months.

2) Can't really answer this one, due to spoilers if I say either way. Sorry! :twilightblush:

3) I'm gonna go with "probably no". Plans change sometimes, but as of right now, I don't have any plans to include any Angels.

5177467 I have not read it yet. I will, I just want to know what I am getting into. If you would tell me, then delete the comment, that would be good.

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Oh! Okay. Then, I hope you enjoy it if you decide to read it, if not, no hard feelings. XD I'll send you a private message about your question.

Stars made solid, Light the way through future and passed

...Oh... My... God... The Eye of Harmony... They were in... A Time Capsule... But how...?

Derpy was baffled. She didn’t recall giving Rainbow Dash any advice

Time travel...

This is really great! Derpy & Doctor Whooves/Time Turner stories rank among my top favorites! Can't wait for more.

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