High school sucks. I mean it REALLY sucks. Why? Well let's see...
Friendships get tested. Those that last will last forever. Others? Well, they won't. How does the Element of Loyalty cope with these things? How does the Element of Kindness? Innocence will be crushed, and friendship will be tested, strengthened, and crushed. Will these fillyhood friends survive the Flight High School days?
{Update- Due to events portrayed in chapter 14, I have added on to the description.}
What about when high school is all over? Well, when you have good friends like these two do, it can only get better. And maybe interesting.
A/N: Yay, I finished two stories and now I'm doing this one. I've been quite excited to do this one, and now it's time. Also, not to be demanding, but please like this if you fav it. It's just a peave I developed when I noticed that seventy-somthing people faved Simple Things, but it only received 40ish likes.
1: I must give credit for my inspiration to SorcerusHorserus, the genius behind Dash Academy, a web comic on DeviantArt
2: Most of this is not planned very far ahead of time. I'm not very much of a prethinker.
3: I love to chat with my readers so please comment. Rate it too!
4: I'm doing a similar style to Simple Things (multi-perspective first person).
5: This one is going to be teen because of sexual issues. I won't have a direct sex scene though.
6: {Post update}- It might be a smart idea to read "Misperceptions" in order to understand what's going on with Twilight. Don't worry; there is a link in chapter 14.
Enjoy!
I approve and will track.
Good chapter, was sad we didn't get to read about Rainbow Dash racing.
982663 that's because her name is later in the Alphabet and will be called the next day (wait for next chapter *wink*)
I have been wating, and it has come.
Yet another amazing chapter
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Okay so I'm going to be visiting my G-ma for a while so i prolly wont update for a while. of course if i have time, wi-fi, and a cpu while Im there then I guess ill update a lot. but who cares about details?
999582 wait hold on what was it that fluttershy wanted to talk to Rainbow dash about i was reading throught out the chapter and nada please exlpain next chapter
1000453 I have no idea what you just said?
1000453 im sorry could you please specify. I dont know where youre talking about
1003794>>1004485 Okay in the middle or so of the chapter when fluttershy joins Rainbow and Flash for lunch she tells Rainbow they need to talk but says its nothing important because Flash is there after lunch the go out and to whatever but still Fluttershy dosen't tell rainbow whats been bothering her
1005131>>1003794 actually she said "My teacher wanted to talk to me." not that she needed to talk...
here let me show you.
["No. You can stay." Fluttershy murmured. I gave her a warning glance, but she just smiled warmly at me. Meh. If she's made up her mind on this, what do I care?
"Fine. So, what took you so long, Shy?"
"My teacher wanted to talk to me."
"About...?"
"It's nothing." She glanced at Silver... Oh... I see. She didn't want him to hear. She kept eating and awkwardly sitting there.]
Because the shy timid mare probably wont talk about being in special ed with non-friends
oh my bad>>1005158 can't wait for new chapter to come out
1005167 its no problem at all. on my first story people confused an appleshy for an incest between applejack and braeburn so this isnt a big deal
1005158 I understood that, I was just wondering what that guy was trying to say: e.g. "...throught out the chapter and nada please explain next chapter" <- that made no sense
sorry about the delay on this one. I was visiting family and had no wifi.
although i feel like I told you ahead of time...
1052886 Don't worry about it. It has been worth the wait.
FTW!
I realy hope thats RD's letter to Fluttershy there...
1053264 dear god i dont want to shoot you down but then im not sure that i can say it isnt yet....what to do?
in any case its nice to know that my work is worth waiting for. that gives me high hopes for the world after high school....*shudder*
and yes i am IN high school writing ABOUT high school... isnt that fun?
1053301 You reaslise you have just made it sound like what I thought the note sounded like where it is going... you just shot me down...
Oh well. I'll do my best to wait paitently for the next chapter.
I'm having a lot of fun being out of highschool, people seem to like my creative work... theres a lot to look foward to
I suggest you get a thumbnail, but I love the story.
And you go to a highschool that has dorms?
1053469 thumbnail?
1053331 My guess, its a letter from Flash pretending to be Rainbow.
1053489 Picture.
1053500 mmmm... cant immagine RD having neat handwriting. So I hope so.
1053506 as in a cover pic for the story?
oh and to answer your other question, no my high school is a public one but i have a lot of private school friends and have read my fare share of novels that have academies/ boarding schools in them. Im aware firsthand experience is the best resource but i dont have that so i just use excessive amounts of other resources
1052886 i knew flash wasn't a complete douche nice cliff hanger
1053582 thx bro
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1053519 Yeah,cover picture.
1053729 okay ill try to find something
1053735 I'm just saying, it catches people's attention.
1053760 i know i just dont have good experience making pictures work anywhere on this website
1053500Same here, he IS CAUSING ANARCHY, or making the MAGIC HAPPEN!
1053760 BOOM! i did it.
although i found this other image that i think is just so darn adorable... er *ahem* it looks good....
1053824 Him. Match maker.
Dear Celestia, that would be hilarious.
1053834 No words can express that.
Except D'aww.
1053837>>1053824 you know this wasnt the direction i was gonna take but you guys are tempting me to make achange the direction I was gonna take with that note....
1053846 If your implying to make the note from Flash,I say do it, that would make the story amazing.
1053846 That could be really funny. If Flash trolls the young soon to be couple and it results in Fluttershy coming to Rainbow Dash and asking her out then the laughs could be pricless
Just want to add my additional thoughts to the mix.
1054676 better yet, the note isn't written to be from Rainbow, but it's supposed to be obviously her, so Fluttershy goes to her for "advice" in hopes shell admit to having written it. Lols? yay or nay?
crap that could be spoilers...
1054676 better yet, the note isn't written to be from Rainbow, but it's supposed to be obviously her, so Fluttershy goes to her for "advice" in hopes shell admit to having written it. Lols? yay or nay?
crap that could be spoilers...
1054694 That could be pulled off and be hillarious.
If you have her acting shyer than normal and RD slowly getting suspiscious before one of them admits they like the other (probably Dash, who would be tired of messing around).
Then if its not from RD and the actual writer comes forward once the two are together and its like 'oops, well your too late now'
1054724 HA i love it... i was hoping to make this last a while though
you know make a long fic for once...
1054743 Yea. Then you can still continue the story once they are together...
Then some things can go wrong for the couple, suvive the hate of others, drop out from school etc
Just because they get together doesn't mean the story ends for these two cuties.
1054781 god i love my readers. you guys are seriously awesome
1053869>>1053824 you two too bros
Well, judging how Quick Silver was looking at flutter shy in chapters 1-2 I'd say it was him.
1054676 You mind reader you.
Yes, Flash trolls them, trying to [break apart their friendship] or something, but it backfires, and it all turns into a happy FlutterDash
1054789
Honestly, listen to your readers, the intelligence is strong with these ones.
*Hints at My,FlutterDash7,and DarkStratos' comments.*
Or, this story could take a complete different turn, and Dash n Shy are straight, and nothing interesting happens.
Which I would be OK with.
1054789 I write Flutterdash stories and so always am coming up with new ideas and freely share cool ones around to help.
Once 'Shy and Dash get together you could have a lot of chapters where bad stuff happens as they slowly get alienated from the rest of the school and are forced to leave. Gilder would be a cool spanner in the works as she could either defend/stick up for Dash and still want the couple around to fly with or she could bully 'Shy, effectivly turning Dash into her enemey too and they split. Then there could follow a lot of chapters as Fluttershy and her Rainbow wander around looking for a new life where they won't get picked on for being gay and eventualy find Ponyville and then finaly have a happy end. Throughout there could be a lot of rough scenes and a lot of Rainbow Dash defending Fluttershy before they find a new place where they can live in peace. This fic could easily tripple (or more) in legnth.
1055094again. i love my readers
Everypony chillax, it's obviously Gilda who wrote the note.
My reasoning: Gilda has thumbs(or atleast fingers)
1055094 that seems like your type of story, I have read your stories before
1056289 And your readers love your exceptional writing and the fact you actually pay attention and take in their feedback.(Which unfortuantly, not many writers do.)
1056550 One of the kinds of stores I write maybe, yes. I'm just putting ideas out there... Arbiter Balemead doesn't need to listen to them, thats up to him