I approve and will track.

Good chapter, was sad we didn't get to read about Rainbow Dash racing.

>>982663982663 that's because her name is later in the Alphabet and will be called the next day (wait for next chapter *wink*)

I have been wating, and it has come.

Yet another amazing chapter .

Okay so I'm going to be visiting my G-ma for a while so i prolly wont update for a while. of course if i have time, wi-fi, and a cpu while Im there then I guess ill update a lot. but who cares about details?

>>999582999582 wait hold on what was it that fluttershy wanted to talk to Rainbow dash  about i was reading throught out the chapter and nada please exlpain next chapter

>>10004531000453 I have no idea what you just said?

>>10004531000453  im sorry could you please specify. I dont know where youre talking about

>>10037941003794>>10044851004485 Okay in the middle or so of the chapter when fluttershy joins Rainbow and Flash for lunch she tells Rainbow they need to talk but says its nothing important because Flash is there after lunch the go out and to whatever but still Fluttershy dosen't tell rainbow whats been bothering her

>>10051311005131>>10037941003794 actually she said "My teacher wanted to talk to me." not that she needed to talk...

here let me show you.

["No. You can stay." Fluttershy murmured. I gave her a warning glance, but she just smiled warmly at me. Meh. If she's made up her mind on this, what do I care?

"Fine. So, what took you so long, Shy?"

"My teacher wanted to talk to me."

"About...?"

"It's nothing." She glanced at Silver... Oh... I see. She didn't want him to hear. She kept eating and awkwardly sitting there.]

Because the shy timid mare probably wont talk about being in special ed with non-friends

oh my bad>>10051581005158 can't wait for new chapter to come out

>>10051671005167 its no problem at all. on my first story people confused an appleshy for an incest between applejack and braeburn so this isnt a big deal

>>10051581005158 I understood that, I was just wondering what that guy was trying to say: e.g. "...throught out the chapter and nada please explain next chapter" <- that made no sense

sorry about the delay on this one. I was visiting family and had no wifi.

although i feel like I told you ahead of time...

>>10528861052886 Don't worry about it. It has been worth the wait.

I realy hope thats RD's letter to Fluttershy there...

FTW!

>>10532641053264 dear god i dont want to shoot you down but then im not sure that i can say it isnt yet....what to do?

in any case its nice to know that my work is worth waiting for. that gives me high hopes for the world after high school....*shudder*

and yes i am IN high school writing ABOUT high school... isnt that fun?

>>10533011053301 You reaslise you have just made it sound like what I thought the note sounded like where it is going... you just shot me down...

Oh well. I'll do my best to wait paitently for the next chapter.

I'm having a lot of fun being out of highschool, people seem to like my creative work... theres a lot to look foward to

I suggest you get a thumbnail, but I love the story.

And you go to a highschool that has dorms?

>>10534691053469 thumbnail?

>>10533311053331 My guess, its a letter from Flash pretending to be Rainbow.

>>10534891053489 Picture.

>>10535001053500 mmmm... cant immagine RD having neat handwriting. So I hope so.

>>10535061053506 as in a cover pic for the story?

oh and to answer your other question, no my high school is a public one but i have a lot of private school friends and have read my fare share of novels that have academies/ boarding schools in them. Im aware firsthand experience is the best resource but i dont have that so i just use excessive amounts of other resources

>>10528861052886 i knew flash wasn't a complete douche nice cliff hanger

>>10535821053582 thx bro

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>>10535191053519 Yeah,cover picture.

>>10537291053729 okay ill try to find something

>>10537351053735 I'm just saying, it catches people's attention.

>>10537601053760 i know i just dont have good experience making pictures work anywhere on this website

>>10535001053500Same here, he IS CAUSING ANARCHY, or making the MAGIC HAPPEN!

>>10537601053760 BOOM! i did it.

although i found this other image that i think is just so darn adorable... er *ahem* it looks good....

>>10538241053824 Him. Match maker.

Dear Celestia, that would be hilarious.

>>10538341053834 No words can express that.

Except D'aww.

>>10538371053837>>10538241053824 you know this wasnt the direction i was gonna take but you guys are tempting me to make achange the direction I was gonna take with that note....

>>10538461053846 If your implying to make the note from Flash,I say do it, that would make the story amazing.

>>10538461053846 That could be really funny. If Flash trolls the young soon to be couple and it results in Fluttershy coming to Rainbow Dash and asking her out then the laughs could be pricless

Just want to add my additional thoughts to the mix.

>>10546761054676 better yet, the note isn't written to be from Rainbow, but it's supposed to be obviously her, so Fluttershy goes to her for "advice" in hopes shell admit to having written it. Lols? yay or nay?

crap that could be spoilers...

>>10546761054676 better yet, the note isn't written to be from Rainbow, but it's supposed to be obviously her, so Fluttershy goes to her for "advice" in hopes shell admit to having written it. Lols? yay or nay?

crap that could be spoilers...

>>10546941054694 That could be pulled off and be hillarious.

If you have her acting shyer than normal and RD slowly getting suspiscious before one of them admits they like the other (probably Dash, who would be tired of messing around).

Then if its not from RD and the actual writer comes forward once the two are together and its like 'oops, well your too late now'

>>10547241054724 HA i love it... i was hoping to make this last a while though

you know make a long fic for once...

>>10547431054743 Yea. Then you can still continue the story once they are together...

Then some things can go wrong for the couple, suvive the hate of others, drop out from school etc

Just because they get together doesn't mean the story ends for these two cuties.

>>10547811054781 god i love my readers. you guys are seriously awesome

>>10538691053869>>10538241053824 you two too bros

Well, judging how Quick Silver was looking at flutter shy in chapters 1-2 I'd say it was him.

>>10546761054676 You mind reader you.

Yes, Flash trolls them, trying to [break apart their friendship] or something, but it backfires, and it all turns into a happy FlutterDash

>>10547891054789

Honestly, listen to your readers, the intelligence is strong with these ones.

*Hints at My,FlutterDash7,and DarkStratos' comments.*

Or, this story could take a complete different turn, and Dash n Shy are straight, and nothing interesting happens.

Which I would be OK with.

>>10547891054789 I write Flutterdash stories and so always am coming up with new ideas and freely share cool ones around to help.

Once 'Shy and Dash get together you could have a lot of chapters where bad stuff happens as they slowly get alienated from the rest of the school and are forced to leave. Gilder would be a cool spanner in the works as she could either defend/stick up for Dash and still want the couple around to fly with or she could bully 'Shy, effectivly turning Dash into her enemey too and they split. Then there could follow a lot of chapters as Fluttershy and her Rainbow wander around looking for a new life where they won't get picked on for being gay and eventualy find Ponyville and then finaly have a happy end.  Throughout there could be a lot of rough scenes and a lot of Rainbow Dash defending Fluttershy before they find a new place where they can live in peace. This fic could easily tripple (or more) in legnth.

>>10550941055094again. i love my readers

Everypony chillax, it's obviously Gilda who wrote the note.

My reasoning: Gilda has thumbs(or atleast fingers)

>>10550941055094 that seems like your type of story, I have read your stories before

>>10562891056289 And your readers love your exceptional writing and the fact you actually pay attention and take in their feedback.(Which unfortuantly, not many writers do.)

>>10565501056550 One of the kinds of stores I write maybe, yes. I'm just putting ideas out there...  Arbiter Balemead doesn't need to listen to them, thats up to him

Yes,you followed your readers advice!

Great job man,keep it coming.

LOVED the angel reference, and LOVED EVERYTHING ELSE! Oh I (and many others) are happy that we gave you an idea for the story! (the writer being someone else) who was that by the way? Future chapter explain it?

>>10639111063911 well of course ill explain that. cant have a loose plot line now can i *glances at final comment on the dishonest truth* no no ill correct this one

>>10639581063958 DAAAAAAAAAWQWQQQQQQQWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW

Great chapter

Its wonderful to see other writers who are open to feeback and advice.

Very cute ending to the scene.

Aaaannnnddd ... now I look foward to seeing this get into it when they arrive home late and all... (and wrapped up in each others wings )

So, whats it going to be? A troll or somepony who actualy wanted to go out with 'Shy? I'm happy to wait and see. Just keep up the good work.

FTW!

>>10647671064767>>10639111063911>>10633951063395

do not assume i enjoy this show. i think its crap

anywhoo. i really do. and FlutterDash7?

I haven't got a clue yet *wink*

>>10648101064810

Image: http://media.tumblr.com/tumblr_m3fmb1XNdr1ro33p0.gif

Please and thank you?

SQUEE! What a lovely little something to read first thing in the morning!

How sweet that they decided to give being together a shot, which is a pretty good way of looking at it. Spending time together and getting closer, oh yes! That's what dating is all about. Not to mention one big d'awww toward Rainbow Dash doing what she can to make this work. Awww!

I'm looking forward to how things turn out!

>>10652381065238 I accept

Fluttershy waking up Gilda?

Impossibru!

(Awesome chapter btw)

ha! take that clock rushing towards midnight! I defeated you!

anyway I'm getting ready for something thats got me really excited

heres a link for information

okay maybe I shouldn't have celebrated beating the clock like I did...

HA HA  ERRORS. good thing I can edit at any time.

And the hyginks continue...

I love the cute parts between the couple and I can't wait to see how the class reacts to the news spreading its going to be a lot of fun (well... Not for Dash and Fluttershy)

Not sure I'm keen on having a colt come along on a date with RD and FS but oh well.... apart from that part, I thoroughly enjoyed the chapter. Rainbow's secreat admirer turning up like that on her doorstep... oh this can't be good.

FTW!

This chapter was really...nice...

Okay, I definitely see what Rainbow's doing! Trying to be nice and let him down gently and give him a chance so they could at least be friends. Oh, I just hope he won't get his hopes up and think there's a chance. >.< I'll bet Fluttershy would understand, and yet, maybe she might be a little put off? Oh no, what if somepony else sees them and think she's cheating?

X'D Well, so long as RD and Fluttershy still make it through, it's all good.

I cant find anything, and the whole chapter was amazing, so I cant point out anything I really liked.

So, for once, I'm at a lose of words at the greatness,

Well done yet again!

>>10849811084981>>10846541084654>>10845961084596>>10841201084120 Am I really this good that the chapter I thought was bad is getting praise like this? sheesh...

Remember this video?>>10648101064810 yeah watch it again.

>>10849951084995 No, I will not stand for this, you are an amazing writer and you shouldnt doubt yourself for a second!

>>10850181085018 *sniff* thanks bro

>>10849951084995

Image: http://iambrony.jsmart.web.id/mlp/gif/10586__safe_fluttershy_animated_dance_artist-blackgryph0n_headbob.gif

Wonderful chapter man, don't doubt yourself. You really have some skills at writing! forever!

damn shot down like a american bomber over germany

>>10863781086378 interesting way of putting it...

>>10864071086407 thanks so is this the secret admirarer?

>>10864101086410 i dont know.... is it? dun dun DUNNNN.....

>>10864341086434 maybe by the way if it is and he just admited to likeing rainbow why send a letter to fluttershy curious

>>10864531086453 i thought i said that flash did the fluttershy one as a prank...oh and i have plans for explaining the similarities between the letters

>>10864661086466 actually you said it more like an acusation with no actually proof at least thats the way i interpreted it

>>10864881086488 but... when silver went to talk to flash.... then silver said... you know what? Ill show you

["What is it? Was I right?" {Rainbow}

"Sort of. He kept talking about the first note. The one Fluttershy got. But when I asked if he'd sent you one he had no clue what I was talking about."{Silver}]

>>10865801086580 oh okay can't wait till next chapter

>>10869811086981 heh heh... ill get to that in a day or two

>>10869841086984 nice so will fluttershy and rainbow be a couple or is this friendshipping

>>10871081087108 uhm.... they're kissing and snuggling.... you make a guess i suppose.

>>10871591087159 right forgot about that cause you know the get lost in the other plots of the story so kinda forget

>>10871681087168 its no problem. I shouldn't be snide. just trying to play minecraft with a buddy

This makes me laugh, btu doesn't make me feel much else. Possibly because it's out of my element. I dunno. It'll take wayyy too long to explain...

I AM SO CONFUSED RIGHT NOW.

>>10873481087348 me too bro. what's up?

>>10873541087354

You keep switching in-between characters, which i can understand, but it happens too often and sometimes you don't specify that you changed characters for a while. Also, there's no specific personification between Dash and Shy, like you're writing as them... but as you. Get it?

>>10875291087529 well i mark the switches with the ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ s and i do my best to change personalities, but i'm aware that i don't do the best job. I assume that Fluttershy does not sound nearly as shy and timid inside her own head, and that rainbow is more ADD, and i try to use those to some form of advantage while writing. I suppose the differences that i throw in are more obvious to me as the author, which may be why they aren't as apparent to you. personally, i actually enjoy reading it the way it is, and hate myself when i try to throw too much of the character's personality into the narration, because it feels to me (when im reading it) that i'm not developing the story, just talking in two separate voices. I deeply apologize if the writing style I have chosen is offsetting for you, but take it for what it is and vote accordingly.

>>10876021087602

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Okay.

>>10876441087644 sorry. i usually go on one rant a day and you just happened to trigger it....im. VERY. sorry.

>>10876531087653

That was a rant?

Last time I ranted, I got blocked by three people and twenty or so stopped tracking my story.

You, sir, are mild-mannered.

>>10876681087668 uhm... thank you? heh you should've seen my third grade year. "rants" would be accompanied by flying chairs...

This story is quite good! I like the plot and the cutesie wootsie parts are adorable! Seems good so far, I await your future updates.

         And as always FLUTTERDASH FTW

After reading the first chapter, I am now faving, liking and commenting. Now to read the rest!

Great story so far!

Image: http://dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Fluttershy_lolface.png

There were some mistakes, but all in all I liked it!

Image: http://dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Fluttershy_lolface.png

>>11137111113711 im glad to hear that. i hope you enjoy the rest

Oh goodness, this was fantastic! Kissy!

It's always great to see a couple grow together in their relationship, physically and emotionally. This was done nicely here, little by little. And I like the approach of Rainbow Dash just being unafraid of exposing her relationship with Fluttershy. It's pretty cool, I have to say, and it really works.

Love it!

Wonderful chapter to this fantastic story! I am loving this story so far and hope it stays at this level of greatness, or HIGHER!