A drunken conversation at a party leads Fluttershy to reevaluate her feelings for Rainbow Dash. Unfortunately the reverse is not true.
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the title reminds me of that old folk song. "what shall we do with a drunken sailor, earl-aye in the morning?"
Aaaaand, tracked
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This piece has a lot of heart so far, even if its just one chapter, I look forward to seeing what happens next!
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I had the exact same thought
Lol I'm loving this so far
can't wait to see what happens next 
3261335 That's probably the point.
Can't wait to read
get back to you when Ive finished it.
For some reason, this reminds me this fiction, well anyway, that was good, I always like some drunk RD
The cover art made me think that Fluttershy was going to be the drunk one. Rainbow Dash better not leave her hanging...
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I hadn't read that one, but I probably will now.
Awwwwwwww. Poor shy
Came for drunk Fluttershy, left tragically disappointedddd
Awe that was so sad. Ouch, rejection.
I hope there will be more chapters and it won't end like this. I'm guessing Dash must be lying and have insecurities. But owe, I felt hurt for poor Shy
Poor Fluttershy.
>insert fanfic where Fluttershy kidnapped Rainbow Dash and treated her like a baby.
Dafuq? Has Dash got a split personality? Everytime she's drunk the gay side starts to show?
3265687 I wanted to question the same thing until I reloaded the page. An alcohol induced split personality. That's definitely something.
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Yup. And now the Dishonored theme song is looping in my head.
I want to like this story. Really, I do. I love the concept and the first chapter sets everything up nicely. But.. it seems rushed. Especially during the second chapter, which basically seems like a direct copy of the first chapter. Rainbow gets drunk, gets frisky with Fluttershy, sobers up and doesn't remember any of it. Then Fluttershy tries making moves but is rejected. I'm hoping you don't fall into this routine in future chapters. And, while its certainly your choice and not mine, I hope you make the next chapters longer then they have been. I feel like too much is happening in took little time.
Again, I want to like this story. And I do. However I am cautious. Hopefully the next few chapters get me to truly love this story the way I want to.
I'm pretty sure you didn't ask for permission to use that cover art, unless I was drunker than Dash at the time. I don't mind, but (A) credit what you use, and (B) the real artist, WhiteDiamondsLtd, would probably rather have you use the original picture, found here.
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No, I didn't. I downloaded it somewhere a long time ago, not sure where. But now that I know the artist I'll be happy to credit them.
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Yeah, I felt I needed to establish it was a pattern and not an one time thing before moving on to the rest of the story.
3266612 Thanks!
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Yeah, I didn't finish processing what you said until after I posted. Image is switched out.
Anyway, happy to credit when I can, it's just that I mostly just found the image by skimming through my fanart collection and picking what seemed fitting. It's too big to keep track of where everything came from. If I'd known I would have asked.
3265763 petty funny but also serious
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Very understandable, I just wish the second chapter had a little more depth to it. :P It was kinda jarring for me to read such a well written first chapter, then read a second chapter that kinda just seems like filler. At least to me.
Nevertheless, I'm looking forward to seeing how all this plays out.
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Yeah, I'm still getting back into the habit of writing (not that I was ever fully into it) after years and years without doing any fiction and I'm still learning to fully develop things. I'm bad at filling pages as much as I should. Hopefully the next chapters will be better.
3266713 Indeed.
The only solution for Fluttershy is to have Dash as drunk as a skunk all the time. Seems ethical to me lol
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It's not the gay side. It's the truth. The drunken always says the truth. But, when Dash isn't drunken, she rejected the truth.
She needs a kick in the flank.
Sorry for the delay, all. I'll try to update more often from now on.
Yes, I am in agreement with Angel's plan. Keep the booze flowing.
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For the record, this was always the plan.
Was the plan also to give Rainbow Dash alcohol poisoning?
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Sorry, I don't get out spoilers.
That ending... too funny! I wonder how Fluttershy will handle everything this time. Especially since now the master mind, Angel, is in control!
XD jajaaja god i love drunk Rainbow Dash jajajajaja, and ... ._. they had the "best night" in a public place and no one notice it?.... oh boy, this won't be good, or maybe it would only you know jejeje.... (yeah i didnt want to make 3 comments so i make just one here :D)
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The backroom of a public place, actually. And it was after hours.
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.-. ok, XD
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Well that's how I intended it. Behind the front area of Sugarcube Corner, anyway.
Two Drunk pegasi just walked out of a bar.
..I'm a tad lost but *insert drunk joke here*
WTF. She has been keeping her drunk for a month. Fluttershy, you're a jerk!
If I were Gilda, I would be equally confused
Gilda is figuring it out. Not like Fluttershy is forcing Rainbow to drink. Dash seems happy.
The more I think about this scenario, the more I find this is kind of fucked up.
Poor Flutters.
The stare? Oh, Fluttershy, that's just...
Dash dash dash how do I put this?
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Lol Fluttershy did it for the Lola
Wow shy u got your self drunk to un-oh
Shy is just bringing the other side of dash where she's telling the truth to Fluttershy that she wub her!