“Fluttershy! You’re naked!”
“Uhm, yes?” Fluttershy said cautiously, wondering why that was important.
Rainbow Dash waved her right hoof excitedly. “Hello? You can’t go around like that in public! Everypony will see you!”
Fluttershy looked at her fellow pegasus in confusion. “Uhm, I always go around like this.”
Rainbow Dash facehoofed. “Fluttershy, what am I going to do with you. Let’s get out of here before somepony sees you.”
So saying Rainbow Dash swept the weakly protesting Fluttershy up off her hooves and flew towards the nearest door, which happened to lead to the kitchen. Pinkie Pie’s “We Didn’t Drink All The Cider At Applejack’s Cider Party” party was in full swing and the front part of the store was currently serving as a dance floor for their friends. Rainbow Dash shut the door behind them, muting the sound from the booming stereo system. She turned back towards Fluttershy.
“Whew, that was close. I had no idea you were such an exhibitionist, Fluttershy.”
Rainbow Dash was, of course, three sheets to the wind.
“Rainbow Dash, you do know that we don’t normally wear clothes…right?”
Rainbow Dash sighed. “Fluttershy, everypony’s got to wear clothes. And if you don’t, you can get arrested.”
Fluttershy started to respond, but Rainbow Dash continued. “But that doesn’t mean you have to let some fashion designer in Canterlot decide what you wear. Do Rarity and Hoity Toity wear clothes with your name on them? No! So why should you wear clothes with theirs?” Rainbow Dash paused as if waiting for a response.
“Uhm, Rarity isn’t from Canterlot?” Fluttershy said meekly.
“That’s right,” Rainbow Dash said, sounding satisfied. “So table the label, and wear your own name.”
With that she stumbled forward drunkenly as her balance deserted her. Fluttershy caught her and held her steady.
“You’re, uhm, you’re starting to scare me,” she said. Rainbow Dash turned her head to look at her friend. Their faces were inches apart.
“Besides,” Rainbow Dash said with a wink. “I want you all to myself.”
With that she wrapped her hooves around the back of Fluttershy’s head and began to kiss her, hard. Fluttershy, now thoroughly confused, felt her mouth open in shock. Rainbow Dash was quick to stick her tongue in it. She tasted like cider, but it was good cider, so Fluttershy found herself relaxing and returning the kiss. A subjective eternity later Rainbow Dash came up for air. She grinned brashly at Fluttershy.
“You like that, don’t you?”
Fluttershy struggled for words. “I, uhm, but you said earlier, wait!” she said, that last bit as Rainbow Dash came in for another kiss. Rainbow Dash let go of Fluttershy and pulled back, looking hurt.
“You don’t like it?” she said, suddenly sounding sad. “I’m sorry Fluttershy, I just got caught up in the moment and thought we could, well, you know.” Tears began to fall down her cheeks. “I love you.”
Fluttershy automatically reached up to wipe the tears from her friend’s face. “No, it’s not that!” she said hurriedly. “It’s just that you said you weren’t interested in mares and I thought, uhm, I thought it made you uncomfortable.”
Rainbow Dash blinked the tears away. “Fluttershy, how could I possibly not be interested in you? You’re like the sweetest, most beautiful pony I’ve ever met!”
“B-but you said this morning—“
“I was an idiot! I’m was just, urggh,” she growled, clearly frustrated. “It’s just hard for me to talk about these things! I love you Fluttershy!”
Fluttershy felt her wings buzzing of their own accord as an electric thrill shot through her. “Do you really mean it?”
“More than I’ve ever meant anything else,” Rainbow Dash promised.
Fluttershy felt her own eyes tearing up. “Oh Rainbow, that means so much to me.” She threw up her hooves and wrapped them around her friend. She felt Rainbow Dash hiccup and pat her back comfortingly. They held the pose for a long moment. Finally Rainbow Dash pulled her head back far enough to look Fluttershy in the eye.
“So, want to be my special somepony?” Rainbow Dash said hopefully.
“Yes!” Fluttershy shouted, as much as she ever shouted anything. Rainbow Dash smiled. The expression turned devilish a moment later. “So, want to make out?”
Fluttershy responded by tackling Rainbow Dash. The blue pegasus landed on her back. Fluttershy was on top of her a second later, showering her with kisses. She stopped suddenly and smiled down at her new marefriend.
“This is the happiest moment of my life!”
She shrieked gleefully as Rainbow Dash rolled her onto her back. And then they had the best night ever.
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Fluttershy woke up slowly, relishing every sensation as she returned to consciousness. Rainbow Dash was a warm presence beside her, and she snuggled closer before lifting her head to stare lovingly at her friend. The other pegasus yawned, smacked her lips and opened her eyes.
“Gah!”
Rainbow Dash jerked away from Fluttershy. The startled yellow pegasus slumped to the hard floor below as their limbs disentangled. She looked up to see Rainbow Dash glaring down at her.
“What the hay, Fluttershy?” she demanded.
“Dashie?” Fluttershy said tentatively as she rose to her hooves.
“Don’t call me that,” Rainbow Dash snapped. “Fluttershy, what the hay is this? We talked about this yesterday.”
“Well, it’s just, you had a lot to drink last night and—”
“And what, you thought you’d come and spoon with me? That’s really creepy Fluttershy.”
Fluttershy made a sound somewhere between a sob and a whimper. Rainbow Dash relented and laid a comforting hoof over her shoulder. She took a deep breath.
“Look, Fluttershy, I get that you have a crush on me and I’m sorry I don’t feel the same way. But you really need to get past it or it’s going to start affecting our friendship.”
Before Fluttershy could answer Rainbow Dash turned and walked towards the door to the front of the store. “Look, let’s just spend some time apart, okay? I think we both need our space right now.”
Fluttershy watched her go, raising one hoof in mute protest. As the door swung shut she began to cry. She just didn’t know what had gone wrong.
Dafuq? Has Dash got a split personality? Everytime she's drunk the gay side starts to show?
3265687 I wanted to question the same thing until I reloaded the page. An alcohol induced split personality. That's definitely something.
I want to like this story. Really, I do. I love the concept and the first chapter sets everything up nicely. But.. it seems rushed. Especially during the second chapter, which basically seems like a direct copy of the first chapter. Rainbow gets drunk, gets frisky with Fluttershy, sobers up and doesn't remember any of it. Then Fluttershy tries making moves but is rejected. I'm hoping you don't fall into this routine in future chapters. And, while its certainly your choice and not mine, I hope you make the next chapters longer then they have been. I feel like too much is happening in took little time.
Again, I want to like this story. And I do. However I am cautious. Hopefully the next few chapters get me to truly love this story the way I want to.
I'm pretty sure you didn't ask for permission to use that cover art, unless I was drunker than Dash at the time. I don't mind, but (A) credit what you use, and (B) the real artist, WhiteDiamondsLtd, would probably rather have you use the original picture, found here.
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No, I didn't. I downloaded it somewhere a long time ago, not sure where. But now that I know the artist I'll be happy to credit them.
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Yeah, I felt I needed to establish it was a pattern and not an one time thing before moving on to the rest of the story.
3266612 Thanks!
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Yeah, I didn't finish processing what you said until after I posted. Image is switched out.
Anyway, happy to credit when I can, it's just that I mostly just found the image by skimming through my fanart collection and picking what seemed fitting. It's too big to keep track of where everything came from. If I'd known I would have asked.
3265763 petty funny but also serious
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Very understandable, I just wish the second chapter had a little more depth to it. :P It was kinda jarring for me to read such a well written first chapter, then read a second chapter that kinda just seems like filler. At least to me.
Nevertheless, I'm looking forward to seeing how all this plays out.
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Yeah, I'm still getting back into the habit of writing (not that I was ever fully into it) after years and years without doing any fiction and I'm still learning to fully develop things. I'm bad at filling pages as much as I should. Hopefully the next chapters will be better.
3266713 Indeed.
The only solution for Fluttershy is to have Dash as drunk as a skunk all the time. Seems ethical to me lol
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It's not the gay side. It's the truth. The drunken always says the truth. But, when Dash isn't drunken, she rejected the truth.
She needs a kick in the flank.
Dash dash dash how do I put this?
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*looks over to the pony critics while eating fried chicken* They had sex.
*critics murmur their agreements as they cram more chicken in their mouth and a random critic calls out, "Next chapter, next chapter!!!"*
3267634 Rainbow Dash/Berry Punch is now the best ship.
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I'm really starting to want to punch Rainbow Dash right now.