The name's Dash. (Previously Ronnie) And I write humanized pony stories. Welcome to my humble page.
The girls try to help Rainbow Dash get tickets to her favorite band, Hold Your Horses. But when things don't go their way, it's up to an unlikely friend to save the day.
An idea for an Equestria Girls short I had that i might send to hasbro. Art by a close friend.
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I loved this as a one-shot, and it really feels like one of the shorts.
However, I can't say for sure that sending it to Hasbro is a good idea. They technically can't use it for matters of legality, and even if they went with the basic idea they'd have to change so much to differentiate it from your version that it wouldn't be the same story anymore.
If I were to send them an idea, it'd be a basic prompt. Like: Human-world's Nightmare Moon (you'd be surprised how few stories I could find on that topic on this site).
A good story, but if I have to be honest, for me, I didn't quite like the ending. I think it would have been better to have Rainbow Dash go after Trixie not only to thank her but also invite her to the concert. I don't want to take anything away from Fluttershy, of course, I just feel that this had an opportunity to develop EQG Trixie and have gain more friends like with Equestria's Trixie, like in the show. Having Rainbow completely dismiss Trixie like that just felt wrong at least the way I see it. In any case, the story itself is good and I can see this as an actual episode short of the digital series. I hope to see you do more of these in the future.
This would make for a very fun and sweet short, good job.
This was a sweet short story.
Your always happy.
You will at some point, no one can be perfect. 😑
Burn!🤣
Ya think. 😒
Seriously trixie, seriously!?!?!?