Oooh, awesome!

EDIT: ...I meant the story, I commented straight on the description, not the chapter...
...Oh dear...

OH GOD WOW LOL! XD Applejack having a baby from a cuz! XD

Interesting.

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Those kindergarteners sure know how to roll with the bitches.

Also, will now love this story into Oblivion.

OOOOHHHH DAAAAMN!!!
thats sucks for that guy if she actually got pregnant, heheh
great job bro/sis/whatever it is that you call yourself

That is not how Goosebumps works.

haha oh my god epic!!!! i love it. i like how my story went. very enjoyable.

MEOW i like

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He said "I" don't need alcohol...the people who get drunk around me are free to drink (especially chicks)

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Yeah, I was inspired by another writer named Aspirant, who runs interactive quests with ponies that are really great especially considering that it's all live and feedback based. So I thought that perhaps it would be cool to do that in a fic format, which reminded me of the old choose your own adventure books I used to read.

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You didn't get a boner every time you read a Goosebumps book? And they say I have problems.

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Certainly puts an uncomfortable second meaning behind those scissors.

man well done this thing, fun to read !
do you have more of this or plan to do it for the mane6 ?

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Oh god, I thought about it, but in formatting this thing was a fucking pig; that's mostly because of how stilted my writing style was in creating it the first time. So I'd be willing to make another once the inspiration strikes; the question is, which pony?

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Pinkie Pie should be easy ?! because "lol - random"

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Well I'm currently working on a different project with Pinkie Pie; I was thinking it would be either Twilight or Rarity, actually. Likely Rarity if I wind up writing that Aggressive Twilight epilogue to Sun Baked.

LOL

So are we like kindergardeners or middle schoolers? I don't really care I was just wondering which.

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*click*

I'm literally squeeing from the fun of playing this, haven't played a choose your own since I-Mockery, made my night.

Dad's a boss!

No matter how many times I read this, this ending is the best. But the other one is pretty funny too :)

awww....come on im a huge braeburn and big mac fan, and hes only in for like, 20 words
still a good story though

2433502 What he said. ALL THE TIME!

is there like a sequel????

Well, if "You" are young enough to have Cheerilee as your teacher, then you're probably too young to get somebody pregnant. Unless Cheerilee just teaches every age group in Ponyville. In that case.... Man, that's rough.