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Well...
Fuck yea
sea what i did thar
Good pacing... Good pacing... "And then they fucked. In both holes." Well that was anticlimatic...
OH MY GAWD
That was amazing! Great job!
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An excellent clopfic! Straight to the point... or holes in this case.
...No comment
724991 What? You dont like clop? Saw you on an humanized pony clopfic with rarity and bondage where you disliked it. I did enjoy it, as human x princess is something i enjoy without regret.
THIS FANFIC LACKED RAPE.
745489 On the contrary, my friend. I quite enjoy clop, I was on my way to a clopfic when I saw this notification. I just said I dislike bondage, people hurting themselves and liking it just feels weird to me.
What I meant by "...No comment" was that I was indifferent to this fanfic. I have seen better, but it was decent. It kind of lacked backstory though.
745771 Oh ok, i just thought that by ''No comment'' you meant, ''oh my god'', and you know what i think you meant by that. Next time you have no comment, dont write a comment
746091 Good point.
Not bad. I can't help but feel that the clop felt rushed though, I mean, the best clopfics seem to use a lot of descriptive language and also seem to try to engage as many of the senses as possible. This combined with the internal dialogue and the emotional impact usually present makes the story more intimate and engaging. Without this, it just felt... mechanical? I don't know, I've lost my train of thought. So yeah it was alright but pretty bare bones.
745489 ...And tell me more about how that is a bad thing.
951030 Its bad in every way
991463 Lacking rape is a bad thing?
745771
Yeah, the request was pretty explicit that the sex was to be the main focus like 704092 said; I just tried to customize the order. But I really do love Luna; she's quite a regal pony indeed, and if I can find the time I wouldn't mind writing another fic with her.
745489
I haven't exactly done rape, per se; just some forced AJ x Flim and Flam.
Sex with ponies is your forte? WTF? I don't want to know
Well....i need to clean up my bed
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Darn..
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Oh dear there are going to be some stains on these books
so luna hasn't had any since her return from the moon ? and she wants to do it with a human ? how kinky !!! what does celestia think about this ?