The Royal Visit

by Metals

First published

Only Lunafic I've written so far; Requestfic with sex and rimming, 2nd person

Luna pays you a royal visit, and she has something on her mind after 1000 years on the moon. Features sex with ponies, because that is my forte.

Although Luna's a bit closer to horse size, so I dunno. 2,250 words. Has you in it, so I guess it's kind of the original OC fic.

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You’ve had a lot of visitors since you came to Equestria, but having royalty visit was new. Luckily, you just recently fixed up your home with the help of your friends. Rarity did great work with the interior design, and Fluttershy was able to get a whole host of creatures to help care out the inside of the tree you chose to live in. It looked good. You allow a momentary smile before resuming your duties, preparing for, uh… Stopping to look out the window, you stare up at the late noon sky. Why was Luna coming to visit you anyway? A single hoof knocked once at the door. Opening it, you see Luna standing at the door, flanked by guards at either side of her, well, flank.

“Pardon me for the intrusion into what I’m sure constitutes a busy life.” Luna had thankfully lost the royal tone that had caused so much quivering and panic, but kept the archaic vocabulary. You kind of like it.

“It’s alright Princess, I’m quite pleased to make your acquaintance.” Luna smiles at your voice, nodding appreciatively and bending her slender neck gracefully. Turning back to the guards, she asked for some privacy, and the guards immediately worked on setting up a perimeter around your house. You smile and step back, allowing the princess ample room through the door.

“Right this way your majesty.” Luna stepped through the doorway, and you can’t help but lean in a little, feeling her ethereal mane brush along your shoulder. If she noticed, she didn’t say anything at all.

“Thank you. And I would prefer if you would call me Luna, it makes me seem more accessible according to young miss Twilight Sparkle.” You smile and sit on the couch with her, keeping a small gap between the two of you.

“Luna. That sounds fine.”

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The two of you talk for a while. Apparently Celestia was looking to send an envoy over in order to learn more of the original universe you fell from. After all, it’s not every day an animal from another dimension falls through a rift in space-time that you opened up.

“How did she open that rift anyway?” You ask, leaning in towards the soft night-sky blue face of that young alicorn.

“My sister was attempting to assemble a nightstand for the royal bedchamber.” So you were displaced from your home and everything you knew because the pony version of Ikea has really poor assembly instructions.

“Well isn’t that a kick in the teeth.” You mutter, and Luna leans in close to your face.

“I fear that I have missed something. Has someone assaulted you recently, damaging your jaw?” You try to explain that it was a figure of speech, which leads in to another long discussion on industry in the human world and geo-political sustainability of an alicorn monarchy in the face of a poorly trading bit in the world market.

“Well thank you for stopping by Luna, it really is a pleasure talking with you.” Luna crosses and uncrosses her legs, still remaining on the couch, but refusing to look at you.

“Uh, unless you still needed something..?” Luna sighed and slid closer to you on the couch, whispering in a confidential manner.

“Usually I would have the royal guards incapacitate you and remove your prone form to the dungeon until I decide it is time. However, I’m afraid I find this is a new era of prudency, and I must ask your permission to aid me in the completion and the enacting of my desires. Does this sound like an agreeable proposition to you?” Your brain tries to complete this new verbal rubiks cube you’ve been handed, but to no avail.

“I, uh, what? Like with sex?” Luna looks at you with worry at the hit your IQ seems to have taken.

“I was hoping to engage in intercourse with you, certainly. I find your form…” Luna blushed and swept her eyes over his body, her face now closer than ever before, feeling her almost radiating heat.

“…pleasing to my eye. Ahem, I realize this is quite sudden, but a thousand years on the moon makes you realize that basic needs can be the most important. Furthermore-hm?!” You lean in and kiss the lips of the now frozen alicorn in front of you, marveling at the clean airy taste of her mouth on yours. She leaps back as if she’d been shocked, almost tipping over the couch.

“M-m-m-my goodn-n-ess, you seem quite prepared in this arena. Perhaps we should move to a more secluded area?” She said, pointing to the windows with a shaky hoof. Delighted with the prospect, you scoop the princess into your arms and begin to head up the stairs. Luna, caught in your grasp, writhes against your bare arms, her eyes closed with delight at the touch. Taking her up to the bed, you lay her down and pull off your shirt and pants, leaving on only a pair of boxers Rarity made for you. Sliding into bed next to her, you place your hand on her flank and smile as she shivers under the new sensation.

“Y-your hooves are quite dexterous.” She gasps as you massage her flank, fingertips digging in to the soft supple ponyflesh and she bites down on a blanket.

“AH! Hnnnn, I’m sorry, but it’s been quite a long-eek!” You wrap yourself around her, spooning with her and laying soft kisses on her neck and around her mane as she groans and tenses with pleasure. Moving up you continue your kisses, now nibbling on her lower lip as you deliver a flurry of soft pecks. She tentatively opens her mouth and your tongue gently mingles with hers, and you feel her rubbing her now damp thighs together. Luna gets up and kisses you again, before telling you to lie down. Following her orders, you do so and are greeted by Luna’s belly hovering over your face as her head cranes downward. Her long pony tongue drags its way across your chest, and you moan as she continues to lick your whole body. Reaching the boxers, Luna attempts to pull them off with her teeth and succeeds in shredding them completely.

“I am exorbitantly sorry for the loss of your undergarments human one. But I need complete unrestricted access to your body, and furthermore-“ Luna stooped lower, licking the whole way across your cock before forcing herself on you with a kiss.

“I need this.” Luna continued to lick your body, starting high. She slid her tongue into your mouth, trailing it all around your mouth before pulling it away and giving you long sweeping licks across your neck. Continuing down, she licked strong strokes across your chest, taking a special interest in your nipples as she nips each one lightly.

“Geez Luna, are you sure it’s been a thousand years? You’re doing really well.” Luna smiled before taking your entire cock in her mouth, her heart fluttering to hear your gasps and touch your soft human skin. Letting you out of her mouth with a light gasp, he curls her tongue around your shaft, twisting it gently as she nuzzles the head of your penis. Pushing at your hip with her nose, you dutifully roll over on your stomach for her, happy to indulge her with full access to your body.

“Your flank has no mark upon it, nor does it possess any kind of tail! Simply marvelous.” You find yourself blushing a little; normally it’s you who’s complimenting the flanks of others. She begins gently planting kisses on the outer cheeks, when you find yourself floating off the bed. Floating you upward, she hold you in a magical grip as she swipes that luxuriously velvet tongue across your ‘flank’, giggling as you squirm against her spell.

“Struggle all you like.” She says, adopting a royal stance before taking a thoughtful lick, this time nibbling at the very base of your spine.

“Hmm, you’re quite a clean creature. Something I find respectable. However, I’ll need to test that for sure.” Luna assumed an evil smirk as she dropped the spell, landing you on the bed with your ass high in the air before holding you in place again. Probing her tongue between your cheeks, you emit a muffled cry into your bed as she pushes that long muscle against your tight ring. She warms you up expertly, repeatedly pressing just the very tip of that long tongue against your ass before flicking it back again. Her hot breath heats your back, jets of air blasting in short bursts as she rigorously licks and probes at your exposed rear. Pulling away, she fans herself with a wing momentarily.

“My human, you certainly do taste delightful.” Dropping the spell, she moved down to lick your thigh, as you roll out flat on the bed. Tugging lightly at her leg, you force her to crouch lower, her flank inches from your face.

“My turn.” You say, and you pull her even lower, her belly now resting on yours as she looks hesitantly back at you.

“Did my oral administrations displease you?” She asked, biting her lip worriedly.

“What? No! That was lovely, I just want to, you know. Return the favor.” Luna looked back, openmouthed as you kiss her strong leg muscles, pulling yourself up to a sitting position and kissing her neck. You feel her mane slip between your fingers and smell her coat, a mix of soft night air and sweet lemongrass. You wrap your fingers around her horn and hear her coo slightly at the warm hand enveloping her magical organ. Rubbing your hand up and down her horn, you realize she’s sensitive at the base, where the horn meets the soft fur of her pelt. Kneeling naked before her, you trail your tongue around her horn, hearing Luna pant as you lick thoughtfully around the base. Pulling back, you move down to her wing and begin to preen it for her, straightening her feathers and smiling at her obvious excitement. She moaned and jerked every time his preening caused him to press on that tight membrane of skin that lay just beneath those soft feathers. Extending her wing fully, you nibble and breathe heavily on the wing, feeling her tremor with delight as you probe your tongue under the feathers. You massage both her wings for a minute before getting up and having the young royal lay on her back.

Spreading her legs, you admire her damp pink pussy, drips of fluid leaking out and down her tail. Moving down, you lick the length of her slit, causing Luna to squeal out like a filly. Naturally you repeat this action, delighting at the taste of her sticky juices as her breathing becomes shallow. Thinking of what she might like, you lick once more at her soft vaginal opening before laying a soft kiss at her puckered plot-hole. She gasps and moans again, her horn glowing with pleasure. Gently swiping your tongue back and forth across her tight anal ring, you slip a finger into her waiting marehood and quickly add another. Luna bucks her hips a little, trying to get your fingers deeper inside her, but instead getting your tongue in her tight ass. The feeling of having both holes played with in such a way was too much for Luna, and her whole body glowed with magic delight. She splayed out her wings on the bed, panting and drooling a little on the bed. Pulling away, she moans out at the sudden loss before gasping as you slide the head of your cock into her pussy, pushing deeper as the mare arches her back beneath you. You hold on to her wings as you thrust, pushing ever deeper inside the confines of the lusting princess.

“Oooh, oh my! You have quite a different form than any stallion I’ve met.” You continue to thrust, letting the wings go to spread her legs further apart. Leaning over, you bite softly at her neck, causing her to emit a high moan.

“I - ahn! - I was wondering if you would be –Oh ye gods!- willing to attempt a more intimate form –oof- of intercourse.” You nuzzle your face against that of the princesses, she smiles at the expression of care. “I’d love to Pr-Luna. Anything to make you happy.” Sliding free from her dripping snatch, you position the head of your cock at her spit slicked ass, pressing in and feeling that tight muscle clench around you.

“Ooooooh yes! Take me human, ravish me!” You need no further invitation as you take her the whole way, feeling her struggle to accommodate the intrusion. By this point you’re breathing is labored, and you find yourself nearing the finish. You pound away at her tight ass, your moans of delight matching Luna’s as you rut her like the filthy filly she is. Reaching out your hand, you roll one of her nipples in between your fingers as you continue to thrust, and feel her tense beneath you. Letting out an errant Equestrian curse, she splays herself out in the throes of her second orgasm. Paroxysms of delight quiver through her whole body, and the feel of her coming around your thick cock brings you to climax. Heavy spurts of spunk fill her bowels, the fullness in her only growing as you finish up. Lying in bed together, you kiss and massage her neck, the Princess already asleep, finally satisfied after all these years.