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Spike is having a good day.
OH LAWDY LAWD
10/10 you sick bastard.
TEN OUTTA TEN.
Dafuq I just read?
Okay seriously it was hilarious but why did Rarity suddently started producing milk?
spike you lucky bugger
I think we need a follow up, where Spike gets that thank you
And the next day, Spike gets laid with Rarity, while Celestia visits Twilight for a little fun!
Fuck THAT! 10/10 for the Spike/Rarity part (not a fan one bit of Spike/Rarity romance so I'm being nice) but 100/10 for the Spike/Twilight part of this damned awesome fic my good sir, you did amazing!!!!! Love this story. Spikelight FOREVER!!!!!!
Forgot to say, you have some errors with not caplizing the names of the animal's as they should always be and one or two minor erors but other then that it's perfect.
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8.4/10
Spikes got all the bitches :)
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My point is that you should have sort of mentionned that. Maybe a sequel?
Okay, I'll try to answer any questions as best as I can.
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To be honest, I never had a real reason myself; I remember someone said to shoehorn in something about Rarity having cows on the family tree, but that seems way to crass and unladylike to even be considered. I just soft of left it up in the air, so people could either go with the pregnancy angle if they pleased, or they could just assume she always produced milk if they didn't care much for preg.
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I'll try to fix those errors, my bad.
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I've thought about it, and I wouldn't be adverse to the idea except for one thing; I'd have to fish up an explanation of that lactation!
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I'm completely confused as to how i should feel.
Not bad. A lot different from what I've read in the norm, so this is at least fresh and new. The writing style is also very descriptive and satisfying, though the formatting is a bit off, though not so terribly that I can't get the jest of what you're saying.
Very nice.
692329 spell gone wrong.
I fucking support this!!! MOAAR¡!!!!!!!!!!!!:
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After struggling mightily to express my feelings I can only endorse what you have said.
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Spikes day went from lucky to DAMN in 5 sec. flat....
Genies!
is rarity humanized or just pony?
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She's a pony; a rather fabulous pony at that.
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That could work.
988111 Spike doesn't seem to mind either way. but yes, yes it could
Dat ending!
You sir, are now one of my favorite authors on this site.
Quoting Game Grumps here:
TAHNOUTAHTAHN
Freakin' love this.
It would have been a nice move on Spike's part to blow some fire on his claws. Warm them up for Rarity's teats and get rid of any nasty germs. But despite missing out on a good chance for swag points, he seems to be doin' alright.
So good! Sad not to see a sequal if you would be so kind do you mind if made one?
bravo!
i tip my hat top you! 
Q: will there be more?
I can see Pinkie comming by to pick up her stuff and finding Twilight in bed still inflated so she takes care of that.
Rarity comes by to see why Spike hasn't shown up yet to find him unconscious on the floor, she freaks and rushes him up stairs. Concerned she goes to get Fluttershy. Things happen.
Rainbow Dash comes by to check out the new Daring-doo book and finds Twilight's journal entries and has herself a field day only to be interrupted by Spike who sees the hot mess that is Rainbow and offers a little relief.
After Rarity interupts fluttershy's "ritual" she tells her that Spike might be in trouble and they rush to find him DEEP inside Rainbow.
I LIKE!!!!
... Hot diggity damn...
Ok
Oh my gosh, why?
Very nice fic.
Each time a a different character speaks, you need to start a new paragraph.
Otherwise, this is a fun read.