Death smiles at us all; all a man can do is smile back.
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Pre-read by Majin Syeekoh. King of Madness (who co-authored this with me), and TheBritishPony.
Edited by James Fire
Cover art by HPBudgecraft.
After being dared by Pinkie Pie, Sunset Shimmer and Rainbow Dash stay overnight in an abandoned mansion in the woods of Canterlot. Now within its walls, they find out that the history it holds is far darker than they could've imagined.
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Luigi's Mansion or Fatal Frame?
8697471 Luigi's Frame.
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Ah, nice choice. Mind if I ask which inspired this story more?
.....I like it. Also tracking
8697474 Oh, which inspired it? Neither, this was more so the result of me wanting to write something serious... and it sort developed into what this is. If I had to answer that though, this would be significantly closer to Luigi's Mansion.
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Cool. I'll make sure to read this.
Ps Rainbow didn't insult the sweater Sunset did.
And this is why Vertigo has no friends.
That was interesting and very funny. Into tracking you go!
~ Mintstar
Nice.
Ps bring the others on visit 2
8700518 There's going to be an intermission-visit (per-se) between this one and Visit 2, which will involve Sunset and Rainbow bringing Fluttershy.
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I meant all of them so they could get "Other mommy"
Interesting.
Courage is not the absence of fear, it is pressing on in spite of that fear. That aside looking good so far.
8712022 Uhh... don't you apply logic to my horsewords. Thanks for the correction there.
Love it!!!!!
This was a great story
. Silly, spooky, intense, and heartwarming all at once.
I'll follow to hopefully see sequels and spin-off short stories to this since there are so many scenarios to work with: one being the rest of Sunset and Rainbow's friends meeting Laney and the rest of her deceased family. If Twilight is a skeptic and doesn't believe in ghosts; boy she's going to be reduced to neurotic mess when she gets proven that she's been wrong
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Sunset and the rest of the girls definitely have built up a reputation for making the most unusual friends; so who's to say ghosts shouldn't be an exception to their circle, right?
Why did you mark this as complete?
8764208 I'll just write a sequel for the sake of it, rather than add to this. It'll be a little bit easier on me, and allow for spin-off stories to work better.
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Ok
i love this story, and i sympathized a tiny little bit, cause my family is also broken up, though my step mother is an infinty of miles away from being as screwed up as valery, she is awful in a LOT of ways
This is the best story I’ve ever seen! I REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY LOVE IT!! 😍😍😍 CAN’T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER EEEEK **mY sHiP iS sAiLinG sO gOOd, aNd aLso mAke sOme pARts tHat iNvoLvEs sHiPPinG oF sUndAsh wiLL yA? :D**
This was fun, hope to someday see a sequel.
Here's your review.
Guess "Mommy" didn't know: GROUNDINGS BEGET POUNDINGS!
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Chapters 2-4 have the lyrics from Surrender by Cheap Trick in which the song was also used in Guardians Of The Galaxy volume 2.
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Number 10: Valery from The Mansion in the Woods
Wow, did not expect this fic to be this good. The kid was actually an amazing character. Like, I'm loving her right now. The villain was actually fun, and Rainbow's taunts was something else. The fight scenes were good as well but i am kind of wondering how in the hell did they survive? I'm sorry but they should have died a long time ago with all that tossing into the walls. Fun tho, but if i had to say one thing is that the healing powers Aurora has was kind of bullshit. It would have been way more entertaining to see the other girls reactions at the wounds and bruises that Rainbow and Sunset had and actually comment on it. Overall, i would strongly recommend that fic. Four chapters, but four chapters well written.
I'll actually try and see what other works the author has.