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MorpheustheDream


Red Hood is best DC Anti-Hero, Ghost Rider and Captain America are best Marvel Heroes. 'Nuff said.

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Having had enough with Gotham and it's seemingly endless criminal underworld, Jason Todd, or as he's known amongst most as the Red Hood, decides to find his own city to protect. Just like Dickybird. Even if it's a small city, he'll do whatever he can to protect it. Even if he has to resort to drastic measures, such as killing. Though he'll get hell from Bruce if he ever does that.

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Funny. I was just looking for something like this today. And suddenly, this shows up in "new stories". Nice.

This is interesting, you have my curiosity. And tracking to see where this goes

Alright, so i don't know the exact name of the academy at Gotham. So for right now, it will be called Gotham Prep. Unless there is an official name, then that's what it will be

There is Aquinas High, but I'm not totally sure if there's any other higher-class schools in Gotham City.

Im pretty sure it’s Gotham Academy but im no expert.

PS: i kinda expect Shimmer to coment one Red Hood’s Jacket, just because.

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Thanks for the info. I'll keep that in mind, should I decide to change it. As for having Sunset comment on Jason's jacket, there really wasn't anything special about it, except for it being custom made. So there really wasn't a point in here commenting on it, in my opinion.

Guessing he really doesn’t like Dick Greyson. If Dick Greyson was born in the 2000s, his name would be so unfortunate that he’ll learn why no kids in this time period have that name.

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What gave away Jason's dislike towards Grayson?

8729255 The fact that Jason Todd’s the only Robin who died?

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That's not the reason why. Partially it's because, in Jason's eyes, he'll always be the failure while Grayson will always Bruce's Golden Boy. The Robin that could do no wrong. That's part of the reason why Jason dislikes Dick. At least to me, that's part of the reason why.

Huh. Always figured Red Hood to be a Stand Collar Pu leather jacket kind of guy.
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But hey, I guess if the Red Hood from Arkham Knight can wear a black and white leather jacket, and Injustice 2's Red Hood can wear all sorts of jackets and colors, there's not really a problem. Not that there would be one anyway. :P

Will the next few chapters feature characters such as the outlaws, Damian Wayne, Tim Drake and Dick Grayson

Hey, just asking again, will the next chapters feature characters such as Dick, Tim, Damian and the outlaws?

well ......................... shit ............................................................................this is a good story

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Hey, if Jason ever gets a wardrobe change in this story, I may have that be his new jacket. :twilightsmile:

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Sorry I did not respond before. I have multiple plans going on through my head at the moment for where this story could go. Several paths involve some of the Bat Family and a couple of the Outlaws. Others don't involve them at all. Hell, one of the paths even involves the Justice League themselves getting involved.

So to answer your question, it may be possible. Hopefully, this answer is satisfactory.

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I'm glad that you like it so far. :twilightsmile:

you kidding red hoods the shit pardon my choose of words

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What about working with anti hero Harley Quinn

her to favorite batman villain

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Harley Quinn? To be honest, the two interacting never crossed my mind. I'll honestly have to find more info on her if you're referring to Suicide Squad Harley. (Comic version, not the movie version. Eugh)

It’s been a long time, when will the next chapter come out

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It'll come out soon. Been busy with life and all that. Also, it's pretty difficult writing a combat scene, since I'm still new to this whole "writing" thing. Hopefully, that's good enough. :twilightsheepish:

Nice work when can we expect the new chapter to come out? Also will Grayson show up? I

You really gotta learn how to separate paragraphs when doing dialogue. It is extremely important that characters words and actions be kept to their own paragraphs. See these?

I raised my eyebrows in surprise from her question. Out of all of the things she could ask me, this was something that never crossed my mind. "Oh, this? It's a custom made Leather Jacket from Emporio Armani. Nothing special really." This time, it was her eyes who widened in response.

"Armani! What do you mean it's nothing special?! They're clothing is expensive as hell!" I raised my hands in the air, and said "Easy there Sunset. This was a gift from my father." Sunset calmed down, and crossed her arms. "And who is this father of yours to just go and buy an custom made Emporio Armani leather jacket?" I chuckled and pulled my bag tighter to my shoulder. "Billionaire playboy Bruce Wayne."

They should be done like this:

I raised my eyebrows in surprise from her question. Out of all of the things she could ask me, this was something that never crossed my mind. "Oh, this? It's a custom made Leather Jacket from Emporio Armani. Nothing special really."

This time, it was her eyes who widened in response. "Armani! What do you mean it's nothing special?! They're clothing is expensive as hell!"

I raised my hands in the air, and said "Easy there Sunset. This was a gift from my father."

Sunset calmed down, and crossed her arms. "And who is this father of yours to just go and buy an custom made Emporio Armani leather jacket?"

I chuckled and pulled my bag tighter to my shoulder. "Billionaire playboy Bruce Wayne."

This is just a small and immediate example. If you don't follow it, however, it can get unbearably confusing to follow if you have more than two people in a conversation. Also, if you do have more than two, never have quoted lines with no indication of who said them. Never assume people hear the same voices in their head while reading as you do while writing.

Another problem I've noticed is tense changes. Inconsistent tense can be really jarring, so pick one and stick with it. It's especially bad when it changes within a single sentence like this:

I nod my head after hearing that, and said...

That and some weird word choices and some things just being said flat out wrong like "Remember, you always got our backs," should be "We always have your back."

Also keep an eye out for things like there vs. their, then vs. than, and other soundalikes, cuz I've noticed quite a few of those.

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Thanks for telling me. It is indeed an issue for me, and as a relatively new writer, I'll try to fix it up as much as I can in the upcoming chapters. It may take a while to see the effects, but I'll start working on it.

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I would like to have it out soon, as I have a schedule to have at least one chapter out each month. If I get two or more out, then it's a god damn miracle.

And to answer your question about Grayson appearing: if everything goes to plan, then he'll at least make a cameo.

Aren’t cops supposed to be armed with Berrata M9s instead of Glock 22, not to mention can you add Damian in later chapters because I’m curious what do Damian and Jason think of each other

I think you're rushing to make Jason seem like a nice guy. He's too transparent with Shining Armor, and that scene with Sunset should have come waaay later. Let him get to know her first, show him finding out about her situation.

Also, why is Sunset just telling some weird masked stranger where she lives? She's smarter than that.

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If everything goes to plan, then we may end up seeing him, along with Dick, Tim, and Bruce. As for the weapons the police use, I'll see if I messed up with that sometime soon.

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Yeah, I'll admit I rushed a few scenes. Something else to work on. As for Sunset telling Jason that she lives there, even if she didn't say so, he would've figured it out anyways, as the building she's in front of when they speak is abandoned, along with the other buildings nearby.

But anyways, if there are any other issues you find in my story in previous chapters/upcoming chapters, don't be afraid to PM me and tell me about them. Because I am usually quicker/more likely to respond to those than comments/reviews.

As I climb onto the roof, I look down and see the ambulance and police arrive. I smile underneath my mask, knowing that she'll survive the shot to her head.

You should use the word blow because without superpowers no one can survive getting shot in the head

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Thanks for the notice. Apparently, something went wrong when I typed it, oh well. I'll change it as soon as I can.

Again, thanks for the notice. :twilightsmile:

Impressive... most impressive. I'll be keeping an eye on this one.

Just where did the name "Dickybird" come from?

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Dick grayson you know nightwing/Robin

Time to time, I keep re-reading this story. It’s simple and cool.

The cover art though, not really a fan of it. But would it look better if you use a custom Red Hood from Injustice 2?

This is good I must see more

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I do have Injustice 2, so if I get around and have the time to do it, I'd be willing to change it up.

Oh shit! I'm excited for Red Hood vs Deathstroke! I wonder if you are going to make any references to Teen Titans?

9141789 Don't wanna spoil anything, but there might be a few references here and there when they do eventually meet.

I'm really looking forward to this awesome shindig. I've been thinking of a Red Hood crossover myself, but I rather would like to wait and see some more action you could think for Todd.

congrats on getting featured

First you had my curiosity, now you have my attention

...I want to see Zatanna and Princess Twilight talking shop about magic.

Considering that Starswirl dumped most of his problems through the portal and only Equus magic can defeat Equus Magic then closing the portal might be a bad ideal. The portal opening every 30 moons has been a constant reminder to behave or else and all the recent activity might have attracted the sirens, but so far everyone else is keeping their heads down and taking it away might mean who knows how many might go into a feeding frenzy because the heroes screwed up by the numbers. Of course I would love to see the Justice League have to learn the hard way that some things are best left alone, some problems don't need fixing, and for this to turn around and bite them on the ass when pictures of the ponies in Equestria leaks onto the internet and into the press because of Pinkie Pie to counter them showing pictures of timberwolves in the Everfree Forest.

Let's face reality, you would save this.
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Before saving this.
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And both are endangered species.

Not gonna lie, Red Hood and Nightwing vs Deathstroke is gonna be hella cool.

Just found this and I already love it

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