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Rustic_King


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Let’s see we’re this goes:rainbowhuh:

Not bad for a start! I love the idea. Just needs more cummies! :trixieshiftleft:

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Thanks! Next chapter is where things boil over! Hope to have that done by New Years day, NZDT.
Edit:Working on it right now. Loads more sex is planned for the next instalment.

Why isn't there a tragedy tag? And who is Arareroll?

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Because it isn't a tragedy. Arareroll is a clop artist, some of his recent works involve Pony on Human femdom. look him up on derpibooru.

Tempest, huh. I didn't see that that coming. Still would very much like to know where it all goes.

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Thanks! Next chapter should be done on/just after New Years.

It's a very peculiar fiction but I really like it! Looking forward to reading more! Great job! :)

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Thanks! I hope you continue to enjoy it.

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No, this is a work of fiction.:applejackunsure:

Absolute heresy....but fucking hot.:rainbowwild:

I must admit, this was a really enjoyable clop fic

Notable Pros:
- TempestxHuman
- Pony on Human rape (don't ask why that's a pro)
- The story flows pretty well mostly atributed to the fact that the writing itself is pretty good

The only thing i wish to see from this would be a spin off chapter where we see Twilight dominate her human slave (once again, don't ask why i like it)

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Thanks! It means a lot to me that yo like it.

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Thanks! Hope you enjoy the new chapter. And yeah, the comments are a laugh!

I'm very glad you're continuing this.

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Thanks, the delay was mostly down to lack of time & energy due to work & other commitments. I have this week off and easter coming up so the next chapter shouldn't be too far away (touch wood).

Good chapter. Though, I'd like to see mpre Daybreaker and Nightmare Moon in this story.

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Thanks! I'm afraid they appear more as side characters, as the story progresses they'll have some important scenes though.

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Oh well. I hope to see them with their humans

The wait has been rewarded: I was looking forward for a new chapter and this is really a good one! I hope you will continue this story!!!

Awesome job man! I look forward to reading more chapters!

in case of equestrian invasion and humanity is losing NUKE the entire planet BURN all of the petroleum and create a lot of CO2 To make the atmosphere super dense like Venus and BURN EARTH TO DUST so ponyes cant get SHIT

А продолжение будет? Понравился благородный поступок героя.

Не смотря ни на что - не бросил её в беде.

Really loving this story, hope you update soon.

Interesting.

I love it.

So this is a AU for both Equestria and the real world?

From what I gather, the human military and weapons are inferior when compared to Equestria's army.

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And kill ourselves in the process? I'd take being a slave over total atomic annihilation... At least I'd live.

Always long gaps between chapters

So he needs to learn to love her and also remind her that he is going to be her children father and they need the humans genes so he will live on forever in their offspring and that Tempest needs to treat him at least like a friend and eventuality like a loving husband even if its not like that in public. She is hurt and he needs to reassure her and with enuf humans helping there pony captors and showing them they are one in the same something will change pony and humans will fight and they will make a life together in harmony. I think Tempest needs that love, she is in pain emotionally maybe someone could help Day Breaker and Nightmare moon the same way. I personally would make it work. I would help Tempest and go above and beyond for her treat her better than any of the princess are treated and she would come around.

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We would be systematically eliminated through only being able to breed with ponies anyways. We're probably just like a convenient stepping stone to them until they need to move planets again. So I wouldn't mind ending that cycle if the end result was the same for us. Were doing the multiverse a favor by stopping them. Like a conversion bureau but worse here. We die either way. We get fucked into extinction. So nuking would be the most surefire way of ending their tyranny on other worlds when they eventually would be done with us. The two sisters won't die by age. Someone would have to do something or they can just manipulate their pawns to abuse everyone else forever.

Besides. Your treatment as slave totally depends on your masters' will, your position in our society before their takeover (how important you are) and your masters' position in their society (how important they are like tempest for example).

'But what about your pride as a Human? Don't you want to escape and have lots of Human babies? Surely you don't want to see your Human line end with you? If you mate with me, millennia of Human heritage is lost, all your descendants will be Ponykind. Is that what you want?'

Rarely has the end of a bloodline aroused me so virulently. Love the concept of this story.

.......I normally don't like 'Humans in Equestria' stories, but this was surprisingly fun to read. Maybe it's because you went the slave route with humans being technically INFERIOR to ponies, than what is normally the case.

Ugh,🤢 I really, really, REALLY could've done WITHOUT that 'renegade' shit!:pinkiesick::pinkiesick: I hope we NEVER have to endure such a scene again!!

When are you planning to do a sequel !?

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