It's a very peculiar fiction but I really like it! Looking forward to reading more! Great job! :)

8641425
Thanks! I hope you continue to enjoy it.

Slavery, for real?

8644802
No, this is a work of fiction.

Absolute heresy....but fucking hot.

I must admit, this was a really enjoyable clop fic

Notable Pros:
- TempestxHuman
- Pony on Human rape (don't ask why that's a pro)
- The story flows pretty well mostly atributed to the fact that the writing itself is pretty good

The only thing i wish to see from this would be a spin off chapter where we see Twilight dominate her human slave (once again, don't ask why i like it)

8655733
Thanks! It means a lot to me that yo like it.

Loving this

'But what about your pride as a Human? Don't you want to escape and have lots of Human babies? Surely you don't want to see your Human line end with you? If you mate with me, millennia of Human heritage is lost, all your descendants will be Ponykind. Is that what you want?'

Rarely has the end of a bloodline aroused me so virulently. Love the concept of this story.