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Mewrilah


There is always hope, even in the darkest of times, all it takes is a brave soul to find it

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I'd like to help if that is possible

What about Season 7?

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Thank you for your offer. :twilightsmile: I could always use more prereaders, pm me for more information if you're still interested.


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That is up to debate. Considering if certain details in season 7 either a) help progress the story or b) make it more interesting, then I will use them. There are some details Chrysalis dies in the first story that conflict with the show's actual canon. Hence why the choice of not including the current season was made.

OMG the sequels finally up! *SQUEEESSSSS!*

So I'm thinking of making this similar to my first story with regards to adding songs to add a certain ambiance. What do you guys think? The likes and dislikes for this comment will determine it. (If it makes any of you feel better I'm thinking of doing covers to avoid copyright or something) :twilightsmile:

Awesome story mate an can’t wait to read more soon! It’s a nice wave of relief to find stories that have been updated just yesterday an see em form and grow! Thanks for this awesome story to read.

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Thank you for the kind words! I hope to continue to impress all you readers :twilightsmile::raritystarry:

9444877 your welcome I’m always happy to give some positive feedback...must be from when I talked several people out of suicide...hmmmm that’s something to think bout.

Tell me why when i read the synopsis for this story, it says “However, with the death of Nick...” MY NAME IS NICK!! :flutterrage:

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This is a work of fiction. Names, characters, businesses, places, events, locales, and incidents are either the products of the author’s imagination or used in a fictitious manner. Any resemblance to actual persons, living or dead, or actual events is purely coincidental. :pinkiecrazy:

P.S Nick is a common name. If you read the prequel you'll get to know him better. :trollestia:

Never thought I would see this

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Well I'm glad that you did. And you'll be seeing more and more of this story as long as I can bear it. :trollestia:

Pretty interesting turn of events!

Curious to see what will happen with Nick, the Pony of Shadows and the returning villains once they are taken from Limbo.

Honestly going into a fanfic most the time you just read it for the story. The characters normally are just not that good or just Gary stus but that's okay. Now I'm glad to say by the end of the first story nick has evolved to be stubborn and stick to one path rather than being a Gary stu and I like the new characters you added in this one. I'm looking forward to reading the rest of this story

“I can sense your conflict,” Astris continued, deciding to up the stakes. “And you have full right to question my motives. However, if I told you there was an actual way that you could have avoided death and still defeated my brother, would that be incentive enough?”

So that's her name 🤔

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Yes it is indeed. I actually mentioned her name back at the end of The Dominos Begin to Fall. :twilightsmile:

I guess I can't wait for the next chapter 2 come out hope it comes out really soon

I love it

Short but impactful

I love it

“LOOK WHAT YOU’VE DONE!!! That could have been our only chance to talk to him, but just like you typically do, you just gave into your emotions and now he’s gone!” she began to cry in between each few words, in pain from everything that happened. “You don’t deserve his love! Don’t deserve any love!”

Wow that was low even for you Luna, I am very disappointed

This should be interesting

Hopefully they can all reconcile and finally be happy together once this latest crisis is over.

Nick: swingty swooty imma come for changeling booty
Chrysalis: no way fag

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