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PrincessLunas Assistant
Luna makes me do too much paperwork :(
PrincessLunas Assistant
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Good going so far i see great potential with this so far
15 drinks! HOLY FACHOZZLE!
Nice!
Liking it so far. Please more!
*You're
*slams beer glass on table* MOAR! *ground shakes from voice power* ಠ_à²
948043 ??
948086
the title
948104 Oh.........my bad!
Good premise and I'll follow for now but I feel I should give two points of constructive critism:
1) Pace yourself, don't rush things in a story, I know its very easy to do from personal experience and certain parts of the story (and possibly the whole thing) is a tad rushed.
2) Make the chapters longer, you can make the first chapter short because that sort of a prologue but each chapter after that should at minimum be over 2000 words long.
-Mr. Carnage
948114 Personally I love it when people point out flaws with my stories it does help. I always try to consider any criticism I get when I am writing a story.
-Upon a re-read of it, I do see I did rush a bit so far.
-On the 2000 word limit, I will try to start that.
If you notice or can think of anything else that would help me improve my writing, send me a message or just drop a comment on any one of my stories you find a has an error or flaw that causes damage to the story quality.
948140 And I would love you to do the same so you can look at th two stories I'm currently writing if you want
-Mr. Carnage
948152 I will check out your stories.
-Nate
Lucky bastard.
948190 Who? Seethe Master?
948194 yes... and Molestia at comic-con?
I like it.
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Well... That's art. Writing 'bout pony sex and not making it clop material. So much win.
Oh dear. Still art. Still talking 'bout THIS, but still not a clopping material
Well done. As for the typos and stuff
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This is an unexpected yet highly entertaining premise.
your celestia x OC stories awesome as always
949800 Thank you very much. I might some day try.a Luna x.OC story
950016
please dont, cuz luna x OC already too many
950140 Really? Hmmmmm.....I should read more stories. I guess I will have to find another character once I'm done with the Celestia x OC premise
950146
yeah, hhhm, maybe you can make clopfic about OC male pony (you) and Female Human in equestria?
this would be new type of HIE at least haha
950157 Good idea sir.
On a different matter, I really need an editor, someone who can look over my stuff and say if it's good, bad, or mis-spelled to no limit. I just re-read part of what I have for the new chapter of this story and found 10 grammar errors!
I...need.....to slow down!
950176
sorry, cant help with that cuz im russian and time differens is about 10-12 hours sooo
950193
about my idea, dont make it like some stupid erm.. rutting, make it this feelings and shit
THAT LUCKY FUCKING BASTARD
Noice. Keep ahp the great work there, mate! I really liked it!
Omfg, I need more!!!!! Great story, can't wait for an update
Poor Seethe... he doesn't even realize how far in he is... or how far he's about to get (if you know what I mean)
I have a feeling Luna's going to be less than enthusiastic or overly enthusiastic about this.
Again, poor, poor Seethe...
I just hope he didn't promise anything to Pinkie...
951185 Who says it's Pinkie? Fluttershy has a pink mane.
Hey you did it buddy
You beat the 2000 word limit, I'm so proud
-Mr. Carnage
I'm linking this story a lot. Its so good i feel happy and peacefull even due to the fact that i have work tomorrow and that i have to wake up at 5:30 to get to my work in time.
Anyway, very nice job on this chapter/story and i'm off to sleep.
Haha, LOLLIES
Even though it talks 'bout sex, It's not a clopfic. Thank Celestia for that! Wait, wha...
SO MANY DUCKS!!!!!
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I can totally imagine Celestia owning a rubber duck. xD
I though he meant something different when I read "rubber duck"
I gave a laugh "Me? A butler?!"
"It was an odd dream, we sort of had a butler, Mistress relationship in which we mixed in romance, mostly dominated by me."
And i liked it a lot!
I TOTTALY SEE WHAT YOU DID THERE!
It's nice to see a Celestia shipfic that doesn't use Twilight.
Not that I have anything against Twilestia, it's just that it's becoming practically the only ship for Celestia...
95390 I noticed that too. Thats one reason I thought of the premise for this fic
953888 You read Maids and Mistresses too?
953925 Fuck yeah i do man! I love that fic! And i'm following yours too! I laughed really hard when i read that part! It was delicious!
Hope to see more hidden messages :3 And i hope i understand them 
Make fun of her and you just might be screwed XD
Aweseom story! Can't wait for the next chapter!
953374 lol, yes I beat the 2000 word limit.
953413 I never imagined my writing having that sort of effect. It is good to see you enjoy the story so much!
952631
Fluttershy doesn't tackle ponies possessively
She tackles them softly and hold them adorably, so that they can't even think of leaving her.
Enjoying it, just started reading this stuff today.
954853 Okay that is true.
I agree with the tardis. MOAR!!!!!!!!