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Detsella Morningdew


Be who you are and say what you feel, because those who mind don't matter and those who matter don't mind. - Theodor Geisel

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Most ponies would have called it a magic accident. They would be wrong. Most ponies would call her dead. They would also be wrong.

Her magic wasn't even affected. But that was part of the problem.

Cirro Stratus, or just Cirra for short, was a pegasus hard on her luck. Down to her last remaining bits, she accepts an odd help wanted notice that pays suspiciously well. Is it really worth the risk?

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This is a slice of life focused story, meaning that while there may be interesting events and mini-adventures, it is more focused on character interaction or the episodic kind of adventure rather than overarching plots.

Time frame: Right before Season 1. More than one original character gets caught up in the Nightmare Moon incident, so expect any show canon to be uncertain at best. Butterfly effect and all.

Cover photo by BluKoo

Chapters (6)
Comments ( 24 )

I apologize for just starting more stories, but I had to get rid of the notebook I had this in. More chapters coming very soon. (As they are already written)

8788395
Yep! Just got another chapter out.

And this is one of my favorites out of all my unfinished stories, so no matter what, it should go on for a while.

Huh, so it's at the start of the series then. Wonder how it will change the original storyline.

This is actually turning out better than I thought. It's certainly got my attention.

Though in the previous chapter the Doctor/Professor referred to himself as a UNICORN. Despite everywhere else saying he was an earth Pony

8794093
Wait, what? Let me check that.


Oh wow. That was a brain misfire.

8794093
I'm about to start writing the next chapter.

The big anxiety comes with trying to make sure my writing is the same quality as when I started writing this down six months ago. I always do the best when I just have an idea. Then it takes about twenty times the work to continue.

Welp. I hope this works. (I mean, I have plans and everything, which is why this is even published, but...)

as much as im intusted by this is a proper discription that hard? ima break my own rules and take a look but it would be nice

8812515
Hmm... yeah, I suppose the description doesn't say that much.

Thanks for the input - I hope you like the story if you did check it out.

For people waiting for Breaking Dawn to update, don't worry - I'm focusing almost all my creative efforts on that right now. This one was just so close to being finished, it ended up updating first.

Is the reference in his name calamity?

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Actually, no, but that's a good association. It's actually Calgary, where the first real teleportation of photons was successfully accomplished by quantum entanglement. (One of the only physical ways teleportation is possible in real life.)

Chapter 4:
Cool Cirra is the chapter name. Can’t wait for more chapters.

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Yeah, oops. I kinda forgot that I didn't name the chapter. Usually I do that before I write it, but I didn't know how long it would be, and I wrote that and published it all in one sitting.

Well, I'm glad you like it. :twilightsheepish:

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Oh wow. Dang this is getting better by the second.

Yeah, sorry gets pretty different from the canon. Good thing, too!

*Continues to read and stalk* o.o

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I finally got out of my writing funk and updated this. (The conversations involved were not easy to write in the slightest, and I didn't want a drop in quality.)

"A party!" Pinkie Pie said
The next chapter should start with a party scene.

:pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:
ANOTHER INSTALMENT!!!

Glad to see this back! Keep up the good work, and I hope everything is going well for you.

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