• Member Since 2nd Jan, 2016
  • offline last seen Jun 1st, 2019

Zephyr Spark


An aspiring writer who will only write/read MLP stories staring Spike and Twilight.

E

(Fairy Tale) Eight magical beings maintain the night and day. Dragons help maintain the natural world with their haunting roar to keep the natural world and the heavens in check. But then, three avatars betray their comrades and imprison all but the Wizard of Starlight and destroy every dragon, except Spike.

This is a fairy tale. Simple characters, simple (kind of simple at least) story. Not set in the Canon MLP world, but has some of the cannon characters.

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 7 )

This is amazing, and well thought out. I love how you gave this an actual Fairy Tale feel, and caused me as the reader to want to continue along with the story. And the Ending was masterfully worded in such a way that it causes me to believe in it's message.

All in all, 10/10 writing

Have a moustache :moustache:

8544958 Wow, thanks for the high praise. It really made my day.:pinkiehappy:

If this is a crossover with Fairy Tale, then shouldn't there be a crossover tag?

8544990 It's not a crossover with Fairy Tail the anime. This is a literal fairy tale like Snow White or Cinderella. I mapped out the story's structure to adhere to fairy tales as described by Propp's 31 functions and dramatic personae.

8544990
Less of Fairy tail the anime and more of an actual fairy tale like the legend of Gilgamesh

Login or register to comment