• Member Since 2nd Jan, 2016
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Zephyr Spark


An aspiring writer who will only write/read MLP stories staring Spike and Twilight.

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One day, Spike is visited by the muse. Inspiration strikes him to create poetry. What you see here are a few poems by Ponyville's favorite dragon about his identity, his life with Twilight, lessons he has learned, and his friends.

I just had this idea and wanted to write from Spike's perspective within poetic expression. I plan on adding more poems about his friends and the many things they taught him. When I am satisfied, I will finish off with a very special poem to Spike.

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Comments ( 67 )

This...this is so good. <3

When I am satisfied, I will finish off with a very special poem to Spike.

How many chapters will that be?

Ok, this chapter actually cracked me up.
Now how will I put myself back together?

Nice so far! Spike should write a poem about Thorax.

7904326 As many as I think Spike wants to write. Hopefully a few more for his friends. He still has to write about Starlight, the CMC, Ember, and Thorax. If he feels like there are more ponies he wants to pay homage to, then he will. Once he's satisfied, I'll write my poem for him.

7905354 Oh, I have something like that in mind.:scootangel:

Ohhh boy, if Rarity read or heard this one she would either fall head over heels for Spike or pass-out with a raging blushing face.

Awwwww, cute. Fluttershy wouldn't be able to let go of Spike for a week if she read this!

Ember's reaction to this:

"B-baka!" She says with a mighty blush and a gentle smile.

Shining Armor would be proud of his little brother.

Aaaaand Twilight becomes a crying mess.

Simple and true. Luna would be happy.

I miss Peewee, too. Taking him out of the show right after he was introduced was a bullshit move on behalf of the staff. I know they didn't write him out, but in the end, they accepted it.

The real fucktards are Corey Powell, who wrote the episode, and Raven Molisee and Jocelan Thiessen, the storyboard artists. Fuck all three of them.

Impossible to explain how a fire can thaw the blackest night with ease

Dude. Your wording is so inspiring! I don't know hw to do this stuff and I want to try now!

Duuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuude.

Beautiful.

It is good Spike does not feel like he owes Thorax many life debts for all that little changeling has done for him. Friendship is repayment enough.

That was profound and dark. Me likes.

That was profound and dark. Me likes.

7915342 Thanks! I've been studying poetry. I've found the best way to write is to write from the heart and let the words take control. Don't fight the creativity or any of your natural urges. Just let them blossom. Hope that helps.

I can't tell who is this one dedicated to. But it's beautiful.

How many times do you want to make Twilight cry so?

:moustache:
My future past my fears long gone
Three diamonds danced with song
That silly silly Pinkie Pie
:duck: Calls our babies, Pongons
:facehoof:

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Well written brother, well written.

The bromance is strong in this one.

You said all the words of my heart to him, my feelings are mutual for Spike too. Thank you for remind me why he is my favorite character. Well done dude.

You can’t spell family without an m and a y which together make my.

I tried to spell it without m and y. It was a fail.

That's clever. Really clever, author.

7923576 Yeah, I totally thought that through. :twilightblush: Kinda.

7922861 Thanks, I'm glad you liked it.

7923761 Dude, do you think to write about his friends reaction after they read his poems? It would be awesome to see what his friends learn about his reflections and philosophy

7923780 I might consider it. If I have time and think it's worth writing.

To the voyage, the muse and each and every journey we all take. :pinkiehappy:
May the storms be few and each morning glorious. :derpytongue2:

All of my yes.

Perfect. The perfect ending.

Very cute. The poems really warmed my heart, and it's great to see how Spike sees them all as family.

Decided to go with a little fourth-wall-breaking and self insert at the end, huh? Couldn't resist, could you? :moustache:

Heh, though, looking at it, and I know they've been embarrassed about being caught in the shower before in the show (don't know why, since they're naked most of the time anyway), but why have a shower cap when he has no mane? :rainbowderp:

Still, great overall! Best MLP poetry I've ever read!

7968465 Thanks! I'm glad you liked them!:pinkiehappy:

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