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Caddy Finz


We're screwed and life will never get better...but in the meantime, get your free pony garbage over here!

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Their bedroom life has been in need of some new spice for quite some time and when Shining Armor makes a new friend in a cute Pegasus fella, everything changes. Weather that be for better or for worse though is up to Cadence once she finds out what her husband and his new buddy have really been up to when they think she's not around. Who knows? Trying new things can be fun!

Quick typo check

1) - pegasus colt/stallion (Okay the first part is you're not suppossed to capitalise species, for some reason, so it's "earth pony", "unicorn", & "pegasus". The second part "colt/stallion vs. fella" is just... this isn't an anthro fic, and the word just feels wrong, ya know?)

2) - Whether ("Whether the weather is hot, or whether the weather is cold, we'll weather the weather, whatever the weather, whether we like it or not" Whether is used to denote a choice between alternatives, weather is the collection of clouds overhead)

Feel free to tell me to get rid of this, I'm just one of those friendly grammar nazis.

Oh no problem at all! Thanks for pointing those out! I'd rather you do that so I can go and fix them and not leave those mistakes there and look like an idiot :rainbowlaugh: Thanks for the input!

Absolutely awesome! Please write more. This was such a good read!

Great story so far. I cant wait for more. keep up the great work

is there gonna be more? the premise is so interesting(mostly read male x male fics) btw love the Madonna reference:) I use madge in my ficlove between brothers (spike x dusk shine) too bad it'll awhile to be published!

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By the way, sorry it took me so long to catch it but that comment I left was SUPPOSED to be a reply to yours :twilightsheepish: and for whatever reason, I left it hanging for so long. Knowing me, I was probably drunk when I left it but bottom line, it was meant as a reply and thanks for pointing out any grammatical, spelling, or punctuation errors you find. You're doing me a favor by doing that :twilightsmile:

Oh, my. I hope this continues. Shining's situation is quite familiar. Though I have had far fewer cute boys checking me out.

Well my reasons are...
one number - there's not enough gay/bi shining armor stories on this site.
No.2 - since i'm not one of your readers i have free choice/will.
third of all i believe the story on feature or one those categories & instantly pop out at me!
are you going criticized your fans over(can't tell if you're joking or serious?) what they read!? this story is good and probably helping people out their feelings or sexuality!
speaking of give this story a read https://www.fimfiction.net/story/401805/a-talk-amongst-apple-trees (he's a very good writer. if have u the time to spare)
also love the bit of info (in your story) that heart is flutters cousin. just wanted to say peace and hope you're not offended by this:)

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Joking about the part of criticizing my fans but more or less half joking about being surprised that this story has already surpassed some of my older work in number of views, likes etc. No hard feelings towards anyone. I hope that clears things up for you and I'm glad you're enjoying the read.

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Just wanted to sure...alright & I am! have one question to ask - how many more chapters of this are there going to be?

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I'd be lying if I told you I knew, friend. I never really have a set number when I start something new but it's easier to predict as I go on. When I worked on "broken gene" I never would have guessed that it would end up with 36 chapters. I don't anticipate this one being that long but you never know.

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okay then...just take your time and not rush it!:)

Great update my friend. I can't wait for more

This chapter went from funny to "Oh shit!" (the part flutter flies out the window but nearly falls to his death then shiny catches him with his magic.) ending on "Wait a minute...what's this?"

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I hope you're enjoying the read. :twilightsmile: I had to sell what was left of my soul to make this one :pinkiecrazy:

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Oh dear...be careful the road to hell is paid with good intentions (it's reference to a song by madonna)
if you ever feel stressed out or frustrated with writing or life remember this
https://youtu.be/2-6l3JP9mEg
this song is gonna be in a future fic mine so watch out for it
anyways have a very nice day man:)

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Since it's the type of thing everyone wants so badly, I haven't much of a choice. Celestia forbid I write a masterpiece of drama and action, bring out the clop! :trollestia:

Sorry I haven't been to read your fic, some good fortune has shown up.
here's my reaction to latest chaps
ch.4 - Wow...they did it!
ch.5 - at the beginning where shining & heartsy in bed talking about their situation the term they're looking for is fuck buddies or friends with benefits.

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Yeah, they'll call it what it is sooner or later :rainbowlaugh: hope you're enjoying it, just not TOO much :trixieshiftright:

This story is great. Really want to see more!

I take no responsibility for your carpal tunnel

Cheeky little bitch, you made me snicker

When is the next chapter coming out?

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I was taking a vacation but due to popular demand, I may have to cut that short. I'll start working on the next chapter again very shortly so I'd estimate within the next month or so. Sorry to keep everyone waiting.

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Take your time my friend. There is no rush

Great update. Keep up the great work. Cant wait for the next chapter

An update? Heck yes!!! Love this story.

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Sorry I've been out of the loop for so long but now that I'm settled in my new home, I'm back and ready to kick ass! :rainbowdetermined2: Also, I managed to get the day off for my birthday :scootangel: Life is good. :twilightsmile:

I wonder how she'll ultimately take it; I know she'll feel (rightfully) betrayed at first, but she's the princess of love, and finding out that her husband is going to someone else to fulfill a desire she 'can't' can have her go in many different ways, from yandere to futa orgy, everything in between, and probably also things I hadn't even thought of..

I completely forgotten about this story.

Great update. Cant wait for more. Keep up the great work my friend.

To the author - i was about to leave/ close this page window when seeing your story i'm like '' oh my god...let me see what happens now''

my reactions to latest chapters...
six - oh dear this is not gonna end well :facehoof:
(also love the fact/nod that shining's talking to flutterheart about the fics of himself doing it with other ponies & their authors :raritywink: lol!)

seven- well thanks twilight for saving your sister in law the trouble from going all crazy and being a stalker while watching her husband's every move! :twilightsmile: :pinkiecrazy:

p.s: glad you're back, many happy returns!

Fun chapter once again keep it up.

Mr author, you sick sum bitch. Please update if you can.

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Here's another round of fuckery from my silly noggin! Enjoy!

Fun chapter, I wonder if Flutter Heart will have stage fright with Cadance around? The staking scene was fun too

To the author - sorry been busy with rl stuff & i haven't read this story for about a month.
all i can about is...damn dude!!! totally wasn't expecting the scene with cadence and flutter heart along with that spicy bedroom bit with shining armor possible word error they 'rubbed' their hooves together?
hope you're doing well:)

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