Every stallion needs another guy friend to hang out with. Little does Cadence know however, that Shining Armor is doing a lot more than hanging out when his newest friend is around.
Their bedroom life has been in need of some new spice for quite some time and when Shining Armor makes a new friend in a cute Pegasus fella, everything changes. Weather that be for better or for worse though is up to Cadence once she finds out what her husband and his new buddy have really been up to when they think she's not around. Who knows? Trying new things can be fun!
Quick typo check
1) - pegasus colt/stallion (Okay the first part is you're not suppossed to capitalise species, for some reason, so it's "earth pony", "unicorn", & "pegasus". The second part "colt/stallion vs. fella" is just... this isn't an anthro fic, and the word just feels wrong, ya know?)
2) - Whether ("Whether the weather is hot, or whether the weather is cold, we'll weather the weather, whatever the weather, whether we like it or not" Whether is used to denote a choice between alternatives, weather is the collection of clouds overhead)
Feel free to tell me to get rid of this, I'm just one of those friendly grammar nazis.
Oh no problem at all! Thanks for pointing those out! I'd rather you do that so I can go and fix them and not leave those mistakes there and look like an idiot Thanks for the input!
is there gonna be more? the premise is so interesting(mostly read male x male fics) btw love the Madonna reference:) I use madge in my ficlove between brothers (spike x dusk shine) too bad it'll awhile to be published!
8563375 By the way, sorry it took me so long to catch it but that comment I left was SUPPOSED to be a reply to yours and for whatever reason, I left it hanging for so long. Knowing me, I was probably drunk when I left it but bottom line, it was meant as a reply and thanks for pointing out any grammatical, spelling, or punctuation errors you find. You're doing me a favor by doing that
Quick typo check
1) - pegasus colt/stallion (Okay the first part is you're not suppossed to capitalise species, for some reason, so it's "earth pony", "unicorn", & "pegasus". The second part "colt/stallion vs. fella" is just... this isn't an anthro fic, and the word just feels wrong, ya know?)
2) - Whether ("Whether the weather is hot, or whether the weather is cold, we'll weather the weather, whatever the weather, whether we like it or not" Whether is used to denote a choice between alternatives, weather is the collection of clouds overhead)
Feel free to tell me to get rid of this, I'm just one of those friendly grammar nazis.
Oh no problem at all! Thanks for pointing those out! I'd rather you do that so I can go and fix them and not leave those mistakes there and look like an idiot Thanks for the input!
Absolutely awesome! Please write more. This was such a good read!
Great story so far. I cant wait for more. keep up the great work
is there gonna be more? the premise is so interesting(mostly read male x male fics) btw love the Madonna reference:) I use madge in my ficlove between brothers (spike x dusk shine) too bad it'll awhile to be published!
8563375
By the way, sorry it took me so long to catch it but that comment I left was SUPPOSED to be a reply to yours and for whatever reason, I left it hanging for so long. Knowing me, I was probably drunk when I left it but bottom line, it was meant as a reply and thanks for pointing out any grammatical, spelling, or punctuation errors you find. You're doing me a favor by doing that
Oh, my. I hope this continues. Shining's situation is quite familiar. Though I have had far fewer cute boys checking me out.