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Crimson Prose

I've got Shining Armor tied up in my basement for molestation purposes.

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Grungar3x7
Grungar3x7 #3 · May 16th, 2017 · · · 1: Cadence Makes Some Comparisons (Or "And That's How Flurry Heart Was Made") ·
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This story must be a time-bending first person shooter, 'cause it was super hot!

You definitely earned your watch with this one! As soon as you post a second chapter, you'll get a favorite as well.

Rubakor
Rubakor #7 · May 16th, 2017 · · 15 · 1: Cadence Makes Some Comparisons (Or "And That's How Flurry Heart Was Made") ·
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The whole story sounded good right up til the mention of gay content.

Crimson Prose
Crimson Prose #8 · May 16th, 2017 · · 1 · 1: Cadence Makes Some Comparisons (Or "And That's How Flurry Heart Was Made") ·
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8167411 Yes one of the future chapters will have a few paragraphs of gay content. I'm so ashamed. :rainbowderp:

8167405 8167338 8167109
8167099 8167026 8166970
AHHHHHH! *beats with nerf bat*
Wait.
Oh sorry; I'm not used to getting positive reinforcement. :rainbowhuh:
But yes; Luna-chapter will be up within a week.

Scygnus
Scygnus #9 · May 16th, 2017 · · 2 · 1: Cadence Makes Some Comparisons (Or "And That's How Flurry Heart Was Made") ·
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8167411
8167426
i.imgur.com/pi0xk7s.jpg

(Yes, I know this may be taken as a bit rude, but I got inspired by these comments and couldn't not make this meme.)

Zyrian
Zyrian #13 · May 16th, 2017 · · · 1: Cadence Makes Some Comparisons (Or "And That's How Flurry Heart Was Made") ·
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Also, you handled cucking in a way I hadn't seen in a long while, good job.

Crimson Prose
Crimson Prose #14 · May 16th, 2017 · · · 1: Cadence Makes Some Comparisons (Or "And That's How Flurry Heart Was Made") ·
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8167671 Sadly there are't many characters with dicks in the story, but the gay that is there so far is adequately adorable I hope.

TwilitLloyd
TwilitLloyd #18 · May 16th, 2017 · · · 1: Cadence Makes Some Comparisons (Or "And That's How Flurry Heart Was Made") ·
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Chryssie’ wouldn’t respond; Shining was certain of that.

... Famous last words.:moustache:

Neece
Neece #19 · May 17th, 2017 · · · 1: Cadence Makes Some Comparisons (Or "And That's How Flurry Heart Was Made") ·
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8168146 oh gods the pun whyyyy :raritydespair:

Chrissy is versatile. I'm sure she can come up with a long, hard and throbbing solution :trollestia:

Crimson Prose
Crimson Prose #21 · May 17th, 2017 · · · 1: Cadence Makes Some Comparisons (Or "And That's How Flurry Heart Was Made") ·
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8168971 I think I might have to add a whole nother chapter just on this concept.

8169029 And I'm sure Chryssie will have the same expression as she has in your avatar for at least part of it.

abronie
abronie #22 · May 17th, 2017 · · · 1: Cadence Makes Some Comparisons (Or "And That's How Flurry Heart Was Made") ·
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8169064
Holy crap, I forgot I even had this profile picture...I wonder if I remember how I got it...

Utopianking
Utopianking #25 · May 17th, 2017 · · · 1: Cadence Makes Some Comparisons (Or "And That's How Flurry Heart Was Made") ·
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*sees mention of choking*
:moustache:Excellent, a new choker. Will there be more?

CBM8
CBM8 #26 · May 17th, 2017 · · · 1: Cadence Makes Some Comparisons (Or "And That's How Flurry Heart Was Made") ·
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fond memories

Jesus fuck man, that's a little too sick even for me.

Dusk Star Shine
Dusk Star Shine #27 · May 17th, 2017 · · · 1.9: Cadence Plans A Lunar Landing ·
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Oh Boy, I can't wait to see what happens next and I do that they find and capture Chrysalis to have her join them in their bedroom fun games, of course I bet they would have her tied up in bondage gear and stored in a special toy box when she aren't using her.

Crimson Prose
Crimson Prose #29 · May 17th, 2017 · · · 1.9: Cadence Plans A Lunar Landing ·
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8169367 Probably!

8169531 This whole story is saintly by my standards

8169924 Bughorse will be perfectly freaked out happy with how things turn out.

Nealend86
Nealend86 #30 · May 17th, 2017 · · · 1.9: Cadence Plans A Lunar Landing ·
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How far after the first chapter is the second?

Grungar3x7
Grungar3x7 #31 · May 17th, 2017 · · · 1.9: Cadence Plans A Lunar Landing ·
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Good gods, Crimson! I can't wait for the next chapter now. I'm only able to become so erect!

As mentioned before, a FAV, for the story, as you deserve.

Also, found this:

“What?” Casdence asked, “Polyamory is rare, but it’s legal.”

Aaand roll credits! [/CinemaSins]

Crimson Prose
Crimson Prose #32 · May 17th, 2017 · · · 1.9: Cadence Plans A Lunar Landing ·
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8170108 I'm not specific, but maybe a few weeks

8170340 careful not to pass out from blood loss

Brosky671
Brosky671 #33 · May 17th, 2017 · · · 1.9: Cadence Plans A Lunar Landing ·
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Bruh
Don't leave me hangin dude
I got's to have moe

Widow Peak
Widow Peak #34 · May 17th, 2017 · · · 1: Cadence Makes Some Comparisons (Or "And That's How Flurry Heart Was Made") ·
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I...hum.

I kind of want to read this. :trixieshiftleft:

But I do not want clop... :trixieshiftright:

The plot sounds interesting. :trixieshiftleft:

How much of this will be sex? :trixieshiftright:

truebuckshot
truebuckshot #36 · May 17th, 2017 · · · 1.9: Cadence Plans A Lunar Landing ·
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Only two chapters and this story has me laughing more than expected with a fair bit of "um what?" Thrown in ... I like it lol

abronie
abronie #37 · May 17th, 2017 · · · 1.9: Cadence Plans A Lunar Landing ·
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and being half-way is worse than her rejected immediately.

I dunno what you're trying to say here. Do you mean something like this?
*is worse than being rejected by her immediately.

Anyways, next chapter hype!

Crimson Prose
Crimson Prose #38 · May 17th, 2017 · · · 1.9: Cadence Plans A Lunar Landing ·
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8170468 I'll do my best to leave you standing up instead of hanging! :rainbowwild:

8170496 Well it will have a plot, potentially even heart-warming in places, but is also basically meant to be clop. :rainbowkiss:

8170661 I was on the fence about whether to put the 'comedy' tag on it. I have a hard time telling if these things are funny :rainbowhuh:

8170801 That is more clear. I changed it.

Shakespearicles
Shakespearicles #39 · May 17th, 2017 · · · 1.9: Cadence Plans A Lunar Landing ·
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On their wedding night, Shining Armor is afraid Cadence might be upset, or at least uncomfortable, that he unknowingly had sex with Chrysalis for several weeks.

bruh, how long was Cadance in that cave? :twilightoops:
No wonder she looked so slim.

CBM8
CBM8 #41 · May 18th, 2017 · · · 1.9: Cadence Plans A Lunar Landing ·
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8170908

I have a hard time telling if these things are funny

I mean, there definitely are funny bits, but it's almost in the realm of absurdist humor. Probably doesn't need the tag, but you could put it.

AssaultTurtle
AssaultTurtle #43 · May 18th, 2017 · · · 1.9: Cadence Plans A Lunar Landing ·
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If there won't be some Cadence-brand aphrodisiac in Twilight's tea once she visits, I'm going to be disappointed.

"That's a bombass tea honey, what did you add to it?"

Drunken Logic
Drunken Logic #44 · May 18th, 2017 · · · 1.9: Cadence Plans A Lunar Landing ·
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Welp.

A polyamory fic with tons of impregnation and humorous banter that makes them seem like an actual couple instead of a porn couple.

Apparently dreams DO come true.

andrewmyles
andrewmyles #45 · May 18th, 2017 · · 2 · 1: Cadence Makes Some Comparisons (Or "And That's How Flurry Heart Was Made") ·
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A bit too fucked-up for my taste; the stuff with talking about Chrysalis is one thing, but once they started scheming about Twilight, I was out.

Reykan
Reykan #46 · May 18th, 2017 · · · 1.9: Cadence Plans A Lunar Landing ·
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This Cadance is straight from Kanashiipanda's comics, I swear.

Crimson Prose
Crimson Prose #47 · May 18th, 2017 · · · 1.9: Cadence Plans A Lunar Landing ·
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8172866 Well ponies are nudists, so by uptight human standards, they're all porn couples!

8172846 This is why I release chapters slowly even if I am ahead. Comments give good ideas for upcoming chapters!
I am going to pretend like it was my idea though.

Widow Peak
Widow Peak #48 · May 18th, 2017 · · · 1.9: Cadence Plans A Lunar Landing ·
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8170908 Cool, I like when Fimfiction does not notify me that I have been replied to.

Hum...Well, I suppose I will give it a chance...eventually. My hopes are low, though.

Typist Gray
Typist Gray #49 · May 18th, 2017 · · · 1: Cadence Makes Some Comparisons (Or "And That's How Flurry Heart Was Made") ·
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A fun set up and interaction, though I gotta say how odd it is for the other Princesses to have taken vows of chastity. That just seems illogical on so many levels.

truebuckshot
truebuckshot #50 · May 18th, 2017 · · · 1.9: Cadence Plans A Lunar Landing ·
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8170908 ive got a strange sense of humor so don't worry about it. It is an awesome story so far though so keep it up. It certainly surpassed what I was expecting

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