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Love to see this is coming back! Keep it up!
Nice, though I always took starlight as the dominant one of the two. Either way, awesome to see this continue
Good to see a casual sex equestria continues. You mention "any combination" should we expect some magical "equipment changes" as part of this for some mares and stallions?
After all talk from last story about no forbidden, no taboo. Yet, this story still force everyone to age up to 18+...I guess the trace of old world is still here...
I am soooo happy to see you're continuing the story. Can't wait to see more!
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if thats what the author wants to do then dont complain
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Reader have the right to express their opinion.
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more likely it's CYA so the screeching neo-puritans in this world don't get a toe-hold here.
Why would anyone ever leave a dislike on something like this?
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I'm pretty sure there are people shifting through the 'porn'-tag just to downvote the stories.
There are also some spelling/grammar mistakes here. Some just downvote for that ...
Is it possible for two ponies to meet up, and not kiss?
Man, I hope Discord sent Cadance a very nice thank you letter for all this.
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probably only total strangers
I guess Nightmare Cadence spell didn't effect our Lord Of Chaos. But if he fine with this and score a heir for himself. Than who gonna judge. XD
Mmmmmm. So I guess discord remembers the world before the change then?
ah so discord knows. also yay fluttercord!
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Somehow, I don't think he minds the change, much.
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O don’t think so either. But looks like he’s still getting used to it
A princess must wake up on time, and her Number One Assistant makes personally sure of it every morning.
Did she remember to get a bigger one?
(See chapters 2 and 4 of the previous story.)
Edit: Nevermind, it is explained a few sentences later.
A good princess takes advice from her friends.
You are a princess, maybe make a royal decree about it?
Like making bound-up tails mandatory every tuesday? I wouldn't expect much opposition.
Good chapter!
I'm happy to see this universe continues to be explored.
I need to ask, why isn't this in the "Sex-Questria" story group yet?
Punishment: Not getting "punished".
I wonder what those are (besides the buttplug).
Certainly something to keep her tail raised. Most likely a bridle, with an optional ring gag and/or reins. Maybe horse shoes with tickle enchantements?
Edit: We will get the answer in chapter 5 "Apple bucking". It turned out my guess wasn't that far off.
That's the spirit, Twilight!
If Twilight would lick AJ clean she would get the combined taste of Big Mac and AJ on her tongue, which is a good thing.
: "And receive the combined taste of both you and Big Mac? Of course!"
Maybe both of them should visit Fluttershy to teach them how to do this.
Good story so far!
I look forwards to the next chapter.
But make sure to not burn yourself out with it.
Also, I believe the proper cover source is a cropped version of Derpibooru #2026851. Consider updating the link.
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Updated the link, thanks.
Neat. Sounds lovely!
(Except for the tongue piercing; that's a step too far for my taste. But that's just my personal view of things.)
I imagine there is some kind of locking meachanism in the collar.
Maybe she has to be mounted by a certain number of stallions before she can take it off again.
(Also, you are using the word "neck" two times in a row, most likely a typo.)
Good chapter!
I enjoyed reading it.
lovely
> Good thing ‘bloom is out with the Crusaders tonight. She has school tomorrow, don’t want to keep her up
Implying the crusaders won't be keeping HER up all night anyway
To be fair, I'm pretty sure most mares of Ponyville do so.
Maybe something involving portals can do the job.
Cadance: "That is the only correct answer in for this situation."
Yup, it was.
Thanks for sharing this story, Ravenor!
Hadn't realized there was a sequel until the very end. Whoops.
In any case, lovely, perfectly normal slice of life. Though i do have to wonder what Sunset Shimmer will think next time she gets homesick.
Dann, had a lot of fun with the story until discord showed up, I'm out
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Doesn't it say it's complete?
I always enjoy this sort of concept, but you should really have someone check this for spelling and grammar mistakes.
This need another sequel!
Yeah buddy! That’s the kind of hardcore pausing action I like to see in a clopfic!
Seriously, though, proofreading aside, this is an enjoyable clopfic set in a truly magnificent world. I only wish you could slow down and spend more time in each individual scene. It’s just barely enough right now.
Would also love a bit more background detail. Like, what does Twilight see as she walks through town? Mayor Mare performing her duties? Derpy accidentally crashing into a stallion, resulting in apology sex? The Ponyville town square communal orgy pit? Lyra sitting on Bon Bon’s face instead of a bench? Vinyl and Octavia giving an impromptu skin flute concert? Just a few brief mentions of stuff like that in passing would add a lot of richness and depth to this casual sex world.
And that's how the real corruption begins
Of course the Heart wouldn't touch him, and if it did, that wouldn't last long. He's rolling with it though, good on him for not being a spoilsport.