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I wonder why...
Huh, interresting concept.
I'm curious to see where it goes. The day had just started after all.
Really nice concept. Waiting for more!
I've got a feeling I know what kind of "clothes" will be involved...
The clop fic we never knew we needed in our lives.
They will run out of stallions long before Twi runs out of books she wants to borrow...
How long until her fridge is empty and she needs to restock?
Well, time for bed. It was a long day for her.
Now we have to see whether or not Shining behaves himself.
And how you define behave.
I almost thought I would be the only one writing comments here.
So far this is an interesting idea.
Princess Luna’s tower. very interested in seeing what happens next chapter.
Awww, cute. I almost expected he would...
Nevermind.
Kinky!
I'm sure she won't complain; especially after putting it on.
It seems mom knows best!
Sounds good!
Readers: "Yay!"
Good chapter!
I look forwards to the next one.
I'm sure this will have consequences.
The only question is whether she will be rewarded or punished.
Oh? Please elaborate, Cadance.
What did you get for poor, needy Twilight?
Dat ending!
Very interesting so far.
At least they didn't directly involve her, right? Right? Right?
Those are very useful features.
I just realized I keep spamming this comment section.
Am I overdoing it?
Don’t wear corsets to sleep.
Hm
Hmmmm ... as a certain phoniex would say ..... objection ... two of those 3 punishments were the fault of the master. I get the impression he intentionally didn't wake her up on time if he could act like a alarm why'd he wait till she was late to wake her up which then also caused her to be late for celestia. He can't play ignorant about twilights lack of sleep due to cadance and shinings ...exercises ... Because he threatened her with punishments if she moved. So objection!!!!! But celestias punishment is fair she did drop the toy. But the rest boooooo. As a member of the multiversal audience I vote to punish the master... somehow sexually.
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Actually, the way I thought about it was that normally, no warning. But it's her first week so it woke her up before she was too late.
Customer service is important!
Question to the author:
You really plan to describe every one of the (at least) 180 days?
If yes, it will be quite a long ride. Make sure to not wear yourself out.
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Plan to do about two weeks and then perhaps jump a bit.
How does she even know... Never mind.
I wonder what the punishment is this time.
"Major commercial street" implies it is something very public...
Can you make the next chapter longer please if possible
I am honestly wondering what Twilight is going to be like by the time she gets back home and what she is going to do when she gets there,
I really like the material. The almost resigned feeling of knowing she's going to be fucked by ponies she knows, and the obscene casualness of it all. Is there an antagonist? Or will there be any rising stakes?
That's the spirit!
If she is a natural now, how will she be once the show is over?
Awww...
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Yeah, me too.
Ponies an clothes are an odd combination, if you think about it.
Judging by her luck today will involve lots of running; maybe even an small marathon.
I'd already been wondering when he will finally show up.
And an good role for him, too.
So spike was awake and didn't ensure she got up in time he just wanted his own gratification reguardless if twilight recieved punishments .... fu spike. That's a .... dick move .... ehhh ehh see what I did. But still her getting punished due to spikes f up seems just wrong. Masters/owners need to be held accountable too he just wanted his enjoyment f twilight and pfs scheduled time. He should get a punishment of no snu snu next week or the equivalent of a punishment equal to the points. Instead he gets rewarded by being her first real lay and hours of non stop sex how is that fair.
Maybe she can let her friends punish her because if she loses her down time with her friends because of spike I'm gonna be soooo pissed. Hmmmm five friends 15 points thatd be a 3 pt punishment for each friend *wink wink nudge nudge*
Edit: damn it started as a joke but that'd actually be pretty hot
Rarity: can have her wear her outfits and service clients for a hour. Maid bring in some tea and don't forget to service mr. Hoity toity.
Applejack: can have her give bjs/oral to anyone who buys 20 bits worth of apples for 1 hour only. Bet she'd sell out real quick.
Pinkie: can cover her in frosting and set her out as a free sample for ponies to taste.(might result in a new flavor on the menu ... princess lol.
RD: tough one... maybe ... wonderbolt locker room slut for a hour.
Fluttershy: one word ... bestiality. Dogs or bear who cares. lol. Truthfully that bears smarter then some background ponies it'd probably be more close to interspecies then beastiality. That'd be 5 chapters right there 1 for each friend.
Quite the gentledragon, isn't he?
So can't remember was this a 30 day show or until she gets enough points?
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The minimum is six months. Hers is longer than that to get enough points for the rewards she picked.
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He claimed he was asleep, too.
But good ideas for her other friends.
Three points was an piercing; what would she get for 15 points...
Not sure if that's an good idea...
Well, we will see next sunday.
So, Twilight Velvet has experience with Spike, too?
Yay, preening session!
Only those two? Or did she appear in the dreams, too?
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I think that line was added in after my comment Im pretty sure. Well doesn't matter because I'm hoping he uses my punishment idea.
Princess Slutlight Spunkle, Official Gangbang Cum Queen of the Royal Glory Box. Guards across Canterlot can enjoy Spunkle’s Spunk Holes every Friday from 9 to 5. She has to satisfy you. Master says so.
Official Ad this when?
*reads the title*
I believe I know where this is going...
And it turned out I was right.
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I swear, if someone in the story doesn’t end up yelling in authoritative disappointment ‘Slutlight Spunkle!’, I am going to feel unfulfilled. It’s just too perfect. Please don’t make this persona of hers still have the last name ‘Sparkle’.
I hope we will see that!
By the time her shift is over she will be as white as Rarity.
And Rarity would be proud of her.
...Of course...
No no no. Sluttershy. Definitely.
I never thought about that, but this is actually an good point.
But what about the rest of the cast?
Rarity and Pinkie would probably enjoy it and Rainbow might as long as it is played as an challenge.
Not sure about AJ, though. She would probably see it as an down-to-earth duty, but aside from that...
Kinda break immersion here
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Oops. Fixed
This was harder to find then I will admit mostly because of the dazzlings having the same name for their song
Ahahahaha ... buck it ... don't hog the magazine .... hilarious.
Did this dildo came accompanied by an curse?
That toy is evil! Poor Twilight...
Finally!
Good to see he is such an nice, understanding guy.
But we should probably dread for the punishment tomorrow...
i was having problem reading this fic up until this point but now its way to far that is 3 time twilight has been punished for thing outside her control aka owners fault and not knowing rules if i could black list to never see this fic again i would this is just becomes FUCK torture porn it is really fucked up SHE SILL HAS NOT BEEN TOLD ALL THE RULES OF THE FUCKING SHOW OR THAT SHE CAN EVEN DISABLE HELP this is one fucked up fic even the thing this is based on is no ware near this bad