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WhispersInTheDark
"Cathredral bells struck by lightning, and in the clamour, hear their name." — Aragon
WhispersInTheDark
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Why do I keep running into these stories???!!
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If you "keep running into" these kinds of stories, despite the tags and the title and the description warning you, to the point where you stumble into the comments section as well, it just might be you.
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lol. Maybe...maybe they find...YOUUUUU!
Dun dun DUUUNN!!
This is not a bad concept. I'm glad to see someone take this idea and write on it. One thing I would advice, assuming you want any feedback that is, is to slow the pace down and build up some tension. I'd recommend writing other stories to get a sense for this, because it's not something I or really anyone can just tell you how to do.
But I hope you continue with this and build it up more. Good luck on your writing!
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Thank you for your input!
I am always open to feedback, whether it be good or bad, for how else will I improve? I consider your comments well into the good category, for it helps me focus on a problem area.
In any case, thank you for reading, and thank you for commenting!
7725054 Just admit that you like what you read. XD
I think I do too. Despite not having an interest with Anthro stories.
If not for the noise, then her husband's scent will give him away.
Now I know why all the mares are so eager to have Big Mac.
At the very least, he's strong, caring, and has a huge rod that only pleases without making the other partner suffer.
Good thing he's not affected by that magic as well. Apple Bloom would have taken it ALL IN if he couldn't contain himself.
Best Teacher Ever !!!
The more I read, the better it gets. Congratulations buddy. This story is as golden as it can get under a storm of ... fluids.
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I really appreciate that! I'm doing my best to make this a great story, and don't worry: there are GALLONS of fluids coming...
Oh, and thank you also for being my first
stalkerFOLLOWER!Big Mac asks who told her little sister this aaaaand now he wants to murder.
Her first time? With a gurth as wide as HIM, and the length as well...
If she managed to go all the way, (or as far as her body could allow her) then she truly is a lost cause.
Ha! And her parents are so oblivious (or are trying very hard to deny the possibility of their only 'saviors' doing anything lewd to their child).
Looks like this idea is dead
Damn that's f'd up, but then again that's why i read it...
7890352 Then what does the update mean?
7980766 I actually meant the idea with the red colars
A Spy(!?) And as i feared, the idea with the red collar could be dead for AppleJack and Apple Bloom
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The story is still in process, therefore no ideas are dead.
7989613 We will see, won't we?
maybe pinkamena got out and has been going "cupcakes" on caribou in back alleys. I would love that mostly because I have never seen a FOE story go that route before.
At first, I thought Pinkie just played the act instead of obeying the Caribou, but now, it is clear it was just a ruse all along
Hah! Very in character for Pinkie. More like this, please!
I think Pinkie was either followed or this is a random patrol.
Honestly alot of people hate stories like these but i like them
Im not really into the whole rape thing
Strongly agiasnt it and would never do it myself
But story's like this are something new and different that's why i find them so interesting
I like the story hope you keep it upated
hats off to pinkie who could have known she could pull it off
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No, these types of stories are def not for everyone. Rape is nothing to joke about, and I hope I've given the impression that I'm against it in this story, for every example I've created of somepony being forced against her will has not been written for titillation, but as an example of something horrible.
Oh, so you wrote Pinkie as not being with the system. Hm. Well, your story, I suppose. Not a fan of that twist myself.
After killing those Caribou, they need to watch their backs for serious now. Now the gloves come off. No more playing around.
Finally u updated I was thinking maybe you abonded the story
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lol...no. I'm just a slow writer.
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Take your time
Quality over quantity
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That might have happened, she may have betrayed them, IF she hadn't Pinkie Promised she wouldn't. Even in her degraded, lust filled state, she would never break a Pinkie Promise.
The sucess of this test came to a high price
I was scared she was gonna fail and ruin everything
Applejack's been under the effect for longer than anticipated. I love it, but it does leave us wondering.
It was never specified how much was too much. Could be Mac messed up the dosage. Or the shopkeeper lied to him, but I doubt that's the case.
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Yes. Yes, it did. Mac basically put the farm and everypony else before his own sister. She may never forgive him.
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She would have if it weren't for Mac's actions. As stated above, she may not ever get over this.
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Out of fear she'd fail, Mac probably gave her a drop too many.
The next chapter, we leave the Apples for awhile and concentrate on Fine and his family. The stakes are now life and death, as everypony is now on the run from the Caribou. But the desperate parents will still do anything to save their daughter. It may not be enough...
Bet it also acts a fertility drug. So the test probably knocked Applejack up.
I thought this was dead. I really like how you show the struggle between everyone. It's hard for them and you hope they make it through this.
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(sigh) No, it's not dead. I have two other chapters just waiting to be published. I still don't want minors reading my work, but I realized the story can still be seen on FiMFetch, so there's no point in hiding it.
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Hey, better late than never, right?
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Thank you for continuing the story!
Good to see you old friend.
By the way when will the next big Mac chapter comes up.
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About two weeks. It will deal with the aftermath of Mac giving AJ that potion, as well as a surprise character being finally introduced.
Nice to see this alive again!
Another nice chapter. You do well in showing the hard times and distress of handling it
Nice you are a master at this. 👍
its interesting seeing a good FoE story that isn’t just: “This is how I became a overpowered character and stopped the caribou and saved equestria.” or something along that.
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Thank you all. It's good to be appreciated!
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You're welcome!
Correct me if I'm wrong, but the Caribous' magic seems to have several possible effects on female victims. From getting aroused and needing a male until you're doing what they say just to get some satisfaction, like an addiction; to having an urge to please men creep into your subconscious until you won't ever second-guess jumping whenever one tells you to. Rainbow and Applejack are dealing with the former, while Lyra and Bon Bon may be victims of the latter.
Am I on the right track?