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Caddy Finz


We're screwed and life will never get better...but in the meantime, get your free pony garbage over here!

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Interesting start, I like Caddy already. Dangit, that vocabulary made me jealous.
Why is the next chapter not done yet?

"Let's do that again."

I died laughing.

I must say this is a darling book that is quite well done. I applaud you dear writer.

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I appreciate that! It's good to be back into writing again after taking a hiatus! See, I'm in the process of buying a house and I should be moved in before month's end. Once I get settled and get mu net set up, I'll be cranking out some good shit for you to enjoy!

Damn. This was not how I saw the chapter going but it is an interesting twist on it.

This is sad...can't blame him, that thing can be very uncomfortable to deal with, and can be creepy. Some girl said that to me during sex...NOPE FUCK THIS SHIT I'M OUT!

How he isn’t dead from alcohol poisoning is beyond me. I take it his belch had one hell of an acidity level of it was able to melt a police mare’s helmet. I would say that based on her reaction to that, she probably is a newbie as Caddy had guessed. Hopefully Caddy doesn’t get put on his face too hard and only has to spend the night in the drunk tank. However, from the sound of the police mare’s rather exaggerated cry for help, he’s probably gonna get the book thrown at him pretty hard. Stupid FNGs...

Welp, that escalated quickly

Umm.. does this Story have any-pony that has AS ?

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AS as in Asperger's? If so, then yes, Caddy (me)

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Caddy is in the story and yes he does have it. Is that what you mean?

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yes, jest wanted to make sher that the story was in the rite folder

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Oh, you're the mod for that group then! Okay, had me confused for a moment there. Caddy does mention in some of the chapters that he has AS and points out some of his quirks once in a while. I hope that helps.

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I'm the owner

to many times, someone who never has AS, nor is writing about AS, would put there story in a folder for stories about AS

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Are you okay with my story being put in there? I figured since myself and the main character have it, that it would be appropriate. Otherwise I'll take it out if you want.

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oh, no,
Your story is the Most ok !

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Wonderful! Thanks for your consideration! I hope you enjoy the read!

What does AppleBloom think ?

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Annoyed at first at her sister being plowed in the next room over and then flabbergasted at her sister's partner being kicked through the wall.

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no, I mean, seeing her Sister's Colt-Friend with her Teacher

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Ah okay. Not much of it, Caddy's just the "nice" sales pony that comes around once in a while to sell wagon parts and bang her sister. AJ and Caddy weren't really an item, just friends who confide in each other... among other things.

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I know that

but does AppleBloom know that ?

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Yes, and she doesn't think much of it.

Well damn, that went to hell in a hand basket real quick. I’m pretty sure once this blows over, Cadance is going to have some choice words for Caddy.

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She will, but maybe not as angry and more on the worried sick side.

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Yeah that does sound more like Cadance.

Caddy's Back Baby!!!! Great Chapter Btw!

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Glad you're enjoying this. The next few parts are gonna have a lot more sauce too! :raritywink:

Will he have a final confrontation with Berry Punch? I mean he must have some words to say to her.

Ok, now that is a hell of a ending

Uh... what the heck just happened? :twilightoops:

So Octavia is a bipolar block of C4 waiting to explode...welp gonna avoid her from now on.:twilightsmile:

Before I read this, I must know: Where does the non-con tag come in?

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The non-con tag pertains to one of the "feeding the habit" chapters where Berry Punch drugs Caddy and has sex with him while he's in a paralyzed state.

Was enjoying the story until Celestia became the Grim Reaper.

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Aww, sorry you didn't like it, friend. :fluttercry: Basically, my idea regarding that sorta stemmed from the episode when Twilight got her wings. :facehoof: Sorry if this ruined it for you :trollestia:

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It was more like, this didn't feel like it was actually Celestia especially when she tried giving him a pep talk. Luna would have made a much better fit IMO.

Celestia only did it for Twilight as they has such a strong prior connection, putting aside whether Celestia planned Twilight's ascension/whole life. As she has a country to run it just doesn't feel plausible that she's also the Grim Reaper.

Even if it was solely a dream, that's Lunas domain. Even if it was his mental image, Cadance would have been a more believable presence given that SHE's the princess he's friends with.

Oh dang he don’t like Faygo? Well that’s a pity.

Dang that car went all Christine on him. Yeah that sucks that he had to put an end to his life’s work like that.

Well this is going to get interesting...whether “interesting” being good or bad is still up in the air...

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Stay tuned, my friend. I got a good feeling that you'll enjoy it.

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